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Baby... Our Baby
« on: June 07, 2007, 09:55:51 PM »
First. UY Fanfic.. Warning: Waffy and Drama
and I need... someone to proof-read it... before I can share it in the other sites (ff.net and fanlisting)
.. coz my english sucks..

Summary: She had to leave. She had too. He hurt her so much. Lum finally decided to leave Ataru. But after five years, she had to come back to him because she needed his help.
Posted on: June 07, 2007, 09:41:13 PM
okay... so here's my new.. Urusei Yatsura Fanfic... titled... "Baby... Our Baby"
This is Lum and Ataru pairing... it's a little dramatic so... yeah sorry.. hehe

Baby... Our Baby
A Urusei Yatsura
written by: Chette Dizon 

"Darling..."
"Nan da?"
"Sayonara...'tcha"
"Heh.. this again Lum? You're not gonna pull this stunt again right?"
"This time... I'll break off my engagement to you, you are free... Moroboshi"


22 years old, Ataru Moroboshi opened his eyes and realized he was dreaming. But the dream that he had dreamt really happened Five years ago. It was already five years since his supposed to be wife Lum, the Alien Princess dumped him and came back to their world. For some odd reason; he couldn't understand why she had to do that. After a few years of not going home, he suddenly missed her but his heart hardened. The words 'If she doesn't like me; then fine by me! There are many girls around and they are humans. I can live my life without her' became his famous sentence whenever someone asked him about her.

Then... after four years; she came back to the earth. Still Lovely as ever; the princess Lum of Oni. He was shocked to see her in some lotion commercials. She was already on earth but she never even visited Tomibiki High; not just once. This made his anger increased; how dare she come back on earth without even visiting him or asking how is he.

A car stopped at the police parking lot. A woman with a white hat came out of the car. Ataru peeked and saw a pair of gorgeous legs and whistled. "Higher... Higher... dang. She got a prettiest legs I've ever seen!" he wiped the drool on his mouth, grabbed his pencil and address phone and rushed towards the girl. "Ne, ne, ne...Juusho to denwa bangou wa?!" he asked, The Woman didn't even looked at him; but when she spoke. Ataru took two steps backward. He gasped when she looked at him.

"Oni planet. I don't have a phone number. Do you want my cellphone number though 'tcha?" she asked, looking straightly at his eyes. He was the same Ataru Moroboshi before; but with few changes. Her heart did a foolish jitterbug that she chalked up to nerves. She knew she would feel something like this once she meet him again face to face. But she has to focus on her mission. Never she will ever fall for him again. He hurt her so much in the past. So she had to protect herself from him; but that doesn't mean she couldn't admire the changes. Wearing a uniform shirt, jeans and brown boots. He looked so much better than five years ago. I guess he really didn't need me after all. He is happy with his life without me. The simple perverted and weird guy had become a stunning police man.

"What do you want?"
"Hello.. M-Moroboshi da 'tcha"

Ataru narrowed his eyes, when she extended a hand. A long manicured hand. He just stared at the beautiful smooth hand. His pride running up. "What do you want?" he asked, once again.

"How are you, 'tcha?"

Ataru growled and clenched his fist. "I'm doing great." he rolled his eyes, "What do you want?" he asked, the third time.

"I came to talk to you-"

"For what? For what happen five years ago?" he asked, Are you going to say you're sorry to me? He wanted to add but he waited for her.

"I wanted to talk to the Tomobiki's head police, 'tcha" she said, looking down. "That's you... right, 'tcha?" she asked,

She means business. No more and No less. "Right this way, Ma'am" he said, as he started to walk towards the office. He paused and opened the door for her. Trying to control his anger. This is Duty. Not personal problems. Lum couldn't care less anyway. Although he couldn't help but to close his eyes when he smelled her perfume. It was a sweet scent.

"It's been a long time, 'tcha" she said, her blue eyes drifting around the old, narrow office that he'd worked so hard to gain. Ataru didn't know what to do when he finished highschool. He had no interest in college so he took the job as a police man. After a few years, he was promoted to be the head chief. Knowing Ataru's strength when he wants to use it; the other police group didn't stand a chance.

He was proud to gain such position but looking at Lum right now, he felt so small as he supposed this place looked and smelled like a musty hole in the wall.

"You're right on that," he said, glancing at the calendar on his desk. Five years, four months and thirteen days to be exact. The date she'd left him was a permanent scar on his heart, noticing just now. "But you were doing alright right? you came back to earth last year... and you just visited today?" he asked,

Lum's heart skipped a beat, "You were watching 'tcha?" she asked, 

He crossed his arms as he sat on his sit, "Sure. Even I don't want too. I can't avoid looking at you since you're always in all TV Stations. Commercials here and there... famous Model.. Princess Lum of Planet Oni. Your pictures in tabloids, newspapers, magazines. Men would pay hundreds just to get some of your latest pictures" he said, sarcastically. "Anyway, What brings you back here? What do you want? Why do you want my service?" he asked all those questions. And How soon will you get the hell out of here?

Then he saw something in her eyes. What was it? Nerves? Problems? Anxiety? Troubles? Observing the princess Oni once again, he studied her and since he knew her before and how she reacts. He knew that she was scared. But what was she afraid of? What is her problem? Better question... What did it have to do with him? The Silence irked him, he hated silence and her visit was starting to get under his skin. Before he could yell at her, she spoke.

"I would like to do a celebrity work here on Tomobiki high, 'tcha" she said, "It's about.. the Bone marrow thing donation" she said, looking at him. "I wanted some police to help me handle this charity event and some of the people here told me to go straight at you... you can also ask Mendou and the rest of the gang.. if they can help, 'tcha" she said, smiling nervously.

Ataru nodded, "Fine... I'll get them to help. It's for old time sake" he said, looking at his desk.

"A-Arigatou 'tcha, You don't know how much this means to me" she said, accidentally she held his hand. Making Ataru jumped on his seat.

Ataru pulled out his hand on hers, "Yeah... Demo na.. I thought Bone Marrow.. if I am not mistaken are donated by families... so if you are trying to run a donation charity like that, it would be useless you know" he said,

"A-Actually.. I was a member of the group, 'tcha.. Demo... before they have to donate bone marrow... they have too... have a blood test and then if the blood tests are okay so... they can donate then" she said, smiling. "B-Besides.. you can meet a lot of pretty girls in that charity event, 'tcha" she said, smiling.

"I am not much of a playboy anymore" Ataru said, looking straightly at her. "Well there are times I do stuff like that; just like today, but sometimes I get tired of chasing girls and dating them. It's not fun anymore, I guess because I am getting old" he said, looking up at the ceiling.

"You're not married, 'tcha?" she asked,

"Hell no. Ataru Moroboshi will never tie up with anyone. I'll become a confirmed bachelor" he said,

"I see..." Lum said, looking at him. This is it... Be brave... "Since, you will help... w-would you become a donator too? I mean it would really-" she stopped, when Ataru looked puzzled. "I mean I-" she squeezed her hands into fists, "I-"

"I'll help with the patrol. But you can't make me donate blood or bone marrow." he said,

No... "But.. It would mean so much-"

"Look Ms. Invader, I don't mean to be a rude, but there are plenty of others to help with this cause of yours. I am really awfully busy, and given our history, I'd expect to be the last man on earth you'd come to"

"Moroboshi-" she looked down, it's true that they had history. But she'll do anything, even put her pride down for her mission. "We're friends right, 'tcha?" she asked,

"Once. We were once good friends." he snapped, "and that was a long time ago. I don't care about your revisiting. And I don't care about you, I am just doing my duty, Ms.Invader" he said, looking at the papers now. "Now if you'll excuse me, I have to go back to work." he said, gathering the Papers and stood up, "Just come back tomorrow for your permit" he said, then he went on the other room.

Matte! Matte! Lum wanted to screamed, wanted to catch up with him. But he made it clear to her that he didn't want to offer any personal help. 

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"AHH!!!"
Lum wiped her eyes and saw Ataru trembling, while looking at her. "What's wrong Darling 'tcha?"
"L-Lum! What have you done!" he asked,
Lum blinked and looked down, she realized she was naked. She screamed then cried.
"HEY! I was the one who should cry!" Ataru yelled,

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"MOROBOSHI! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH OUR LUM-SAN!!!" (Mendou)
"Heh... I don't know what happen, but we did it so It doesn't matter." (Ataru)
"You're GONNA DIE!!!" (Mendou)

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"Tadaima!!!"
"Darling Okaeri 'tcha"
"AHH!!! Don't scare me like that!"
"Darling! I cooked for you, 'tcha"
"W-What?! Lum! How many times have I told you not to cook anymore? Besides there's no special occasion so..."
"No special occasion? There is! Don't you remember what is date today, datcha?"
"No?"
"It's our Anniversary, datcha!" (electricity coming out of her)
"HEY! It's not our Anniversary! It's just yours. I am not really involved with you!"
"Demo..."
"Just because we did it, that doesn't mean you can tie me up!"
"Darling..."

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"Darling?"
"Nan da?"
"Darling... I can't wait for us to have a family"
"EH???"
"What is wrong darling, 'tcha?"
"You're freaking me out! I never ever imagine a life with you and a child! You're an alien LUM! An Alien!"

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"Darling..."
"Nan da?"
"Sayonara...'tcha"
"Heh.. this again Lum? You're not gonna pull this stunt again right?"
"This time... I'll break off my engagement to you, you are free... Moroboshi"


Lum opened her eyes, after she recalled her memories five years ago. Her eyes were full of tears as she was staring at the sky. She was back at a hotel where she rented for a month. She didn't want to go back, God knows how much she didn't want to go back. But she had to... for her daughter's sake...for Ataru and her daughter's sake. Mayuka. She came back on earth for only one reason. To Cure Mayuka.

Her daughter Mayuka suffered an earth-disease called 'Leukemia'. And she needed earth doctors to cure her. So she had no choice but to go back to earth and earn some money for her daughter. She maybe a princess but the money in Oni planet is different than the money on earth. At first she was okay, undergoing chemotherapy. But after a few months, she became worst; the doctor told her she needed a bone marrow donor. So she had to go back, and asked help.. from him even he doesn't want to be.

If only she could make Ataru donate bone marrow without knowing Mayuka then it would be great. So she had to make a big celebration and make Ataru get involve with this thing. She has too... for her daughter's sake.

To be continued...

Author's note: I don't know what to name... their daughter.. so I used G.A.M's character "Mayuka" :D
« Last Edit: January 25, 2009, 11:53:45 AM by Lum-chan »
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Re: Baby... Our Baby
« Reply #1 on: June 07, 2007, 11:29:55 PM »
That was amazing, heartbreaking and very touching

Spelling and grammer look good, can't wait for the continuation
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Re: Baby... Our Baby
« Reply #2 on: June 07, 2007, 11:33:08 PM »
You indeed put your magic in words, lady chette,

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Re: Baby... Our Baby
« Reply #3 on: June 08, 2007, 10:19:36 AM »
Magic, fantastic, sad, wonderful,... You are amazing! I can't wait to read more.

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Re: Baby... Our Baby
« Reply #4 on: June 08, 2007, 10:44:12 AM »
 :o :o :o
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Re: Baby... Our Baby
« Reply #5 on: June 08, 2007, 04:57:13 PM »
Excellent fanfic,chette

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Re: Baby... Our Baby
« Reply #6 on: June 09, 2007, 01:27:37 AM »
Impossible to put it into words... Simply perfect  _/-\o_ ^O^ _/-\o_
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Re: Baby... Our Baby
« Reply #7 on: June 09, 2007, 02:55:32 AM »
really touching!
Excellent, waiting for more!
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Re: Baby... Our Baby
« Reply #8 on: September 03, 2007, 10:20:16 PM »
Hi! sorry been a long time hehe... -_- Anyway.. if anyone is interested for more? here is it! (Its not yet up in ff.net. I will put it up here first *_*)

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and English is not my first language

Baby... Our Baby
Chapter 2: The Pain in his heart
A Urusei Yatsura
written by: Chette Dizon


"Do you want me to knock his head with a boulder?" The Pink-haired friend named, 'Ran' growled as she looked at Lum's sad eyes. Ever since Lum and Ataru's break-up; Lum went back to Oni but did not came back for Rei. Lum however was able to repair Rei and Ran's relationship and both of them are living happily now; engaged and soon to be married. "I know Moroboshi is stupid; but I didn't expect that he will become the most inconsiderate man I've ever known!"

"Shut up, Ran" Benten growled, crossing her arms. She was and always is Lum's best friend ever since Childhood. Over the years; she trained herself to be calmer especially she was Lum's support with Mayuka. She could be calm; but around Ran? She is really doing her very best to calm.

"He will not help?" Oyuki asked, the queen of Neptune. Her voice is so calm but she has the deadliest weapon ever.

Lum shakes her head, crying. "There was still anger in his eyes, 'tcha... and I was so scared even to talk to him" she wiped her tears and looked at Oyuki, "And even more scared by the thought he won't be convinced."

"Then you should tell him about Mayuka!" Ran yelled, her voice pierced all around the room, "Or better yet electrify that good for nothing pervert" she muttered.

"I CAN'T DO THAT!" Lum yelled, "What if he... finds out and then he will know that she is sick? He will blame me for being a bad mother!" she sobbed. Benten sighed and wrap her arms around her friend. "He will blame me, 'tcha"

"He can't blame you" Oyuki said, "You are a great mother to Mayuka... He can't blame you; It's not your fault that she is sick" she said, putting her hand on Lum's hand.

Ran frowned, "What I don't understand is that... why is he mad at you?" she asked, "I don't know any reason other than... you left him because he is stupid" Ran said, rolled her eyes.

"How is she?" Lum asked, changing the topic. Benten blinked, Lum sighed, "Mayuka... How is she? Is she alright? Is she standing? Does she know that I'll be back next month?" she asked,

Benten smiled sadly at her, "She is alright. Your mother and father... they're taking care of her. Actually, she wanted me to give you this" she said, pulling something out of her pants. Ever since she decided to stay with Lum on earth; her fashion statement changed from boxers to Pants. She handed the paper to Lum. "She said she misses you and she hopes you are okay" she said,

Lum's hands were shaking as she received the paper. She unfolded it carefully and saw Mayuka's drawing of her and letters below that it said, 'Don't worry too much about me Mama... I will be fine. I love you and Miss you'. She couldn't help but to break down and cry so much. She wanted to wrap her arms around her daughter. She wanted to be there for her.

"She is fine." Benten said, trying to comfort her as best as she could. "Everything is okay, Leo is always visiting her during lunch and they were playing play station" she said, soothing her back. "She is a strong girl, just like her mother"

Lum sniffed and shakes her head, she wasn't strong. But Ataru is. She closed her eyes and pictured Mayuka's beautiful face. She looks so much like her mother except she has brown eyes like her father, Ataru. Although bald because of Chemotherapy, She still looks like a princess. An Amazing Kid, so full of life and love... she doesn't even look like she's dying. "My Baby... My Baby" she whispered and a batch of tears fell on her eyes once again.

Ran, Benten and Oyuki looked at each other and sigh.

 

Moroboshi's Residence...

Mr and Mrs. Moroboshi looked at each other; and then at their son. Who was once sitting and eating silently. At times like this, they know something is wrong. Ataru didn't even turn on the television. He always ALWAYS turns the television on when he is eating.

"Where did you take my son?" Mrs.Moroboshi asked him.
"Huh?" Ataru asked, looking at her.
"Where is my son?" she asked,

Ataru swallowed a whole bunch of rice and ignored his mother. He really didn't want to talk to anyone right now. Then he felt his cheeks in pain; he realized his mother is pulling his face. "ITE! ITE!!!" he yelled,

"Where is my SON?!" she yelled,

"I AM RIGHT HERE! STOP PINCHING MY CHEEK!!!" Ataru yelled, then his mother let go of his cheek. "Geez. Okaasan (Mother) I am not a kid anymore" he said, rubbing his swollen cheek, he is frustrated and annoyed at once.

"What's wrong?" Mr.Moroboshi asked,

"Lum-san came by to visit him"

"GAH!"

The Moroboshi family shriek when they find Cherry sitting on the table while eating. Cherry never changed, he always surprises the family he always call 'Unlucky family'. Ataru growled and grabbed the food away from Cherry.

"Wait.. Lum-san... is here?" Mrs.Moroboshi asked, "How is she?" she asked, looking at Ataru.

"Beats me" Ataru said, looking down. Then he felt Cherry holding his head.

"His mind was scattered. Lum-san's visit was driving him crazy. He was concern about her because she looked so sad when she came to see him. And what's with the Bone Marrow thing? Ataru is Curious-"

"CUT IT OUT!" Ataru yelled, pushing Cherry away from him. "MOU! What's with you people!" he yelled, standing. "Why do you always invade my life? Don't you have your own lives to handle?!" he yelled, dramatically.

"Cut out the drama Ataru.. How is Lum?" Mrs.Moroboshi asked, rolling her eyes.

"I am OUTTA HERE!" Ataru yelled, leaving the room and grabbed his police polo. Even though his mother kept yelling him to stay; he needs to get out of the house. FAST.

He was not far away from his house when a police car dashed on him and stopped beside him. He blinked and saw one of his co-police. "What's wrong?" he asked,

"There's a woman in the ole creek, A stubborn woman set a tent. It was a dangerous place sir, but she is stubborn. We tried to convince her that It is prohibited to be there but she didn't care."

Ataru muttered, "Fine, I'll try to convince her" he said, as he run towards the Ole creek. It was one of the old dangerous places of Tomibiki High. He almost died when he went down to rescue a teenager. But who in the right mind would set a tent down there? He growled and run as fast as he could. He is Ataru Moroboshi; The Head Chief of Tomobiki.

 

Ole Creek...

Ataru turn on his flash light and uttered a prayer before coming down the creek. He already knew how to go down because when he happened to rescue a teen; he memorize the path for no reason at all. As he drew closer, he could see the tent and some fire. He carefully walked towards the tent and peek inside the tent. The tent was empty. "Anyone here?" he asked, looking around. "You know, It is very dangerous to camp here so if you would let me help you to get rid of the things-"

"I'm fine don't worry 'tcha"

Ataru froze. That voice. He caught his breath for a second, not believing what he saw. "What the hell are you doing here?" he asked, growling.

"To have a discussion� with you"

Ataru cursed some words as he run his hand on his hair, "You are in way over your head. You can talk to me at the office you know that" he said, looking at her.

He saw her looked away, "I know... but we cannot talk privately there."
"We can. It's my office" he said,

Lum looked at him, those sad eyes. "You will run away again. You will excuse yourself, do something and you will push me away" she said, looking down.

"You think I won't here?" Ataru asked, crossing his arms. "You think I will not leave you?" he asked, sarcastically. "Think again" he added,

She sighed, "Maybe you will leave, 'tcha... but before you are Ataru Moroboshi... you are a Police and you cannot leave me.. a Tomobiki Resident who could die in this situation" she said, then before Ataru could say something, she opened her palm; making Ataru gasped. It was her pair of horns.

"The Hell woman!" He growled, she couldn't fly! argh! He looked around and sat on a rock. "Fine. Make it quick. Talk. And after that, we will leave this creek and don't bother me again" he said,

"I will not bother you again.. On one condition 'tcha" she said, Ataru looked at her. "Please... donate your bone marrow to me" she said,

Ataru growled, why is she obsessed with the Bone Marrow thing? Why is she... A sudden realization came to his mind. No way... Ataru eyes widen, "You couldn't.. Possibly been..." he shakes his head, "No.. you're an alien.."

"What?" she asked,

"Are you sick?" Ataru asked, this time his voice full of concern. Lum blinked, "That's why you want me to donate a bone marrow?" he asked,

 

Are you sick? Lum blinked, Ataru didn't get it but when she looked down and saw the rocks. Maybe she can lie about it... then she'll get his blood and bone marrow without finding about their daughter. Mayuka will be saved, and she will leave this planet. "I.. yes" she said, muttered.

"Since when?" Ataru asked,
"I don't know... since.. I left you?" she asked, looking back at him now.
"Is that why you left me?" he asked, his voice full of concern

Lum gasped, this is all wrong! But why did his tone changed? "I..."

"You left me.. so that.. I won't know?" Ataru asked, sighed. Then he moved closer to Lum and held her hands together with his. "Lum.. you shouldn't have left because you are sick.. I... can take care of you" he said, squeezing her hands. "Remember the time... I almost thought you are going to become cow? I didn't leave you.. I told you that I will take care of you... You didn't have to leave" he said,

 

"Moroboshi.. I-"

"Honey?"

Ataru and Lum froze when they heard something. Then an alien compact beside Lum opened, Ataru saw a handsome guy like Rei but this time his hair was not green but black. Ataru let go of Lum's hands, and Lum hurriedly grabbed the compact and went inside the tent. Ataru felt baffled, confused. Who was that guy calling Lum 'Honey?' Lum's husband? Then he saw Lum walking out of the tent.

"Honey?" he asked,
"That was Leo" Lum said, looking down. "Rei's twin" she added,
"And?"
"My fianc�..." she added,

Ataru felt a riffle shot through his heart. "I see.. well, you have your honey with you.. so how come you are asking for my bone marrow?" he asked, standing up. He feels utterly frustrated and angry at her and himself for opening on her again.

"Because, he doesn't match my-"

"Oh.. so before you ask for my help, you ask for his help first! hmm.. you're really are something, Lum." he said, turning his back on her. "Anyway, try to find a guy that matches yours. I won't help you, did you hear me? I won't." he said, I'm not gonna let you have your happiness Lum...

"But-"

"If you don't want to go up, suit yourself" he said, "I tried to rescue you, but you don't want to be damn rescued so I'll leave you here" he said,

"Moroboshi! I am not going to leave here!"
"FINE! DIE EARLY if you want!" Ataru growled,

 

"Fine!" Lum yelled, and went inside her tent. Ataru thought differently and when she almost got him to donate, Leo came into the scene. She growled and buried her face on her sleeping bag. Mayuka her daughter.. how can she save her?

 

She woke up, when the light hit her face. She realized that she cried herself to sleep. Maybe he is right; they don't need his bone marrow. Maybe someone who matches Mayuka's marrow can become a donator. She will give up asking for help from him; Plus its dangerous. She could feel her feelings for him, coming back again. That is a No No. She needed to avoid him from now on. She clearly open her eyes and a vision of someone sleeping beside her. She rubbed her eyes and gasped. Before she could scream, the man turned to look at her.

"What are you doing here?!" Lum snapped.

Ataru sat up and yawned, "Like you said, I am a police first than Ataru Moroboshi. I can't leave you here, so when you were already sleeping... I sneak inside and slept too" he said, rubbing his forehead. He smirked, "Why are you surprise? Don't tell me you're not used sleeping with me. As I've recalled, you were the one who is ecstatic to sleep beside me" he said,

Lum could feel her tears forming again. "Yeah, I was stupid back then" she said, murmuring but Ataru heard her.
"You are?" he asked, incuriously

"Yes. Falling in love with someone who doesn't love me back," Lum said, looking straightly into his eyes. "Forcing you to love me, even it was impossible. I was stupid" she said,

"Yeah but when you left... I suddenly missed all your bickering, nagging and electrifying stunts around the house" he said, smirking.

Lum looked at him, Ataru Moroboshi indeed changed. He matured a little but he still looked terrific in the early morning. Although he needed a shave, his hair was slightly tousled, giving rise to urge to run her fingers through it, She swallowed and looked away, trying to damp down all these coming back longings that filled her. This isn't right.

"Man! I am starving!" he said, caressing his stomach

"I'll try to cook something for you," Lum said, opening up her bag and pulling an alien mini-stove that completes everything.

"er..." Ataru gulped, he knew Lum wasn't a good cooker. "I don't think that's a good idea"

Lum sighed, "Don't worry Moroboshi... I have improved" she said,

 

A minutes later...

A decent meal was prepared in front of Ataru in a small table. Ataru examined the food and it looks good. Not weird or strange, he gulped and took a bite. Chewed a little and looked at Lum, "You were not lying when you told me that you have improved" he said, Lum shrugged, "And you already know how to balance the tastes. Before all your food were hot and sizzled" he said, chuckling.

"It was hard! But who says it's easy to become a moth-" she stopped herself before she could spit everything out.

"What?" Ataru asked,
"Moth! I saw a moth last night... It was uh.. Something" Lum said, looking around.

"Moth?" Ataru blinked, Lum nodded. "Anyway, we will better get going. I mean... This is insane. We can't be here forever" he said, although that would be too nice.

"I will not-"

Ataru put a finger in Lum's lips to stop her, "We will leave this place... and I will donate my blood and bone marrow. You have risked your life many times for me in the past, I guess.. It's about time for me to pay up." he said, he was about to take another bite when he saw Lum's smile for the first time since she visited Tomobiki. He was mesmerized with her beauty.

"Thank you so much..."

Ataru frowned, Who am I kidding.. I will save her life but she won't be with me.. she will be with... that guy.. Loe? Elo? Whatever his name is... He cleared his throat and resume eating. "So.. Let�s talk about your fianc�.. What is his name?" he asked,

"Leo"

"Uh.. yeah.. Him... how is he? How did you two met?" he asked, trying to talk casually and avoiding the pain.

"We met... when I was back in Oni Planet... he is Rei's twin... the long lost twin." she said, trying to clean up and packing all the things inside her tent. As Ataru listens to her story, he can't really ignore the pain in his heart.
« Last Edit: January 25, 2009, 11:54:21 AM by Lum-chan »
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Re: Baby... Our Baby
« Reply #9 on: September 03, 2007, 10:40:02 PM »
I'm addicted to this story! Amazing work Chette!

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« Reply #10 on: September 03, 2007, 10:41:29 PM »
hehe thanks :D
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Re: Baby... Our Baby
« Reply #11 on: September 03, 2007, 10:48:55 PM »
I never seen a Fanfic as good as your is.

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Re: Baby... Our Baby
« Reply #12 on: September 03, 2007, 10:58:34 PM »
It's the best UY fanfic that I ever seen.  _/-\o_
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Re: Baby... Our Baby
« Reply #13 on: September 03, 2007, 11:00:40 PM »
cata, really?.. well sadly there are only few uy fanfics I have read for the past 10 years.. they are all either oneshot... or not finish... @.@

Jataru? eh? are you sure... lol.. I think the grammar is a turn off :P
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Re: Baby... Our Baby
« Reply #14 on: September 03, 2007, 11:08:21 PM »
I've already read all the fanfics in ff.net and some others and they have no match with this fanfic. About the grammar it's perfect.
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