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nebbo's artwork
« on: June 10, 2007, 04:23:40 PM »
Huh? Why is there only one topic in here?

Anyway, if you don't mind I'd like to post my fanart here, seeing as I'm dedicated
to drawing Lamu. Only true believers are fit to judge any image of Her anyway  ;D

I'm not very productive as an artist so I have only one finished work thus far,
please comment  _/-\o_

http://img127.imagevenue.com/img.php?image=84960_lamu77a_122_1158lo.jpg

I'm not sure what's up with her hand, I think rheumatism may run in her family  :P
« Last Edit: June 10, 2007, 04:27:27 PM by nebbo »

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Re: nebbo's artwork
« Reply #1 on: June 10, 2007, 06:25:37 PM »
It's nice but I have seen better. You need to practice more but I like it. Keep up the good work.

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Re: nebbo's artwork
« Reply #2 on: June 11, 2007, 12:38:58 AM »
Nice work... but weird bikini top... ;D I guess she used glue somewhere  ;D :@
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Re: nebbo's artwork
« Reply #3 on: June 11, 2007, 01:57:45 AM »
nice...lol falling, maybe its like benten's top
This is Jenga lol :)

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Re: nebbo's artwork
« Reply #4 on: June 11, 2007, 05:30:21 AM »
Heh, actually that was the only way I could make it look anywhere
close to natural, I was using a reference for the pose. She does
wear a top like that in the Rock the planet OP though, so I'll leave
it to the animators to explain how she's keeping it up  ;D

Thanks for the positive feedback, I agree that there's alot of room
for improvement, I'll definitely try harder  _/-\o_

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Re: nebbo's artwork
« Reply #5 on: June 11, 2007, 11:24:28 AM »
The hair and the bikini top are too small, but the rest of her body is fine.
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Re: nebbo's artwork
« Reply #6 on: June 11, 2007, 06:13:09 PM »
C'est magnifique,nebbo

i give ya a 9/10

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Re: nebbo's artwork
« Reply #7 on: June 11, 2007, 06:42:31 PM »
Now we're giving points?
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Re: nebbo's artwork
« Reply #8 on: June 12, 2007, 03:29:41 PM »
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C'est magnifique,nebbo

i give ya a 9/10

  8| Thanks alot! And It's nice to see another HnK fan.

I appreciate the specific criticism aswell, that I could really use.
I can't agree on that her hair is too small though, it's one of the
few things I really think I nailed.

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Re: nebbo's artwork
« Reply #9 on: June 12, 2007, 06:29:13 PM »
I don't agree with you Nebbo. Her hair is too small. But you have talent.

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Re: nebbo's artwork
« Reply #10 on: June 12, 2007, 09:17:47 PM »
Heh, criticism accepted  :) Which part is to small, the hair in the back?

Tell me what you think of this then, I haven't really settled on my own
style of drawing so I've tried something entirely different. It's just a
rough sketch though so there're alot of flaws.

http://img179.imagevenue.com/img.php?image=75566_lamu_toran_122_593lo.jpg

Too far from the real Lamu?

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Re: nebbo's artwork
« Reply #11 on: June 12, 2007, 10:04:31 PM »
could work as a chibi Lum

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Re: nebbo's artwork
« Reply #12 on: June 12, 2007, 10:09:30 PM »
In the first fan-art the hair is too short in the back and near the ears. In the second fan-art it's PERFECT! Keep up the excellent work.
« Last Edit: June 12, 2007, 11:02:33 PM by cata »

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Re: nebbo's artwork
« Reply #13 on: June 12, 2007, 10:46:57 PM »
Thanks for commenting  _/-\o_ Near the ears? Do you mean the "burns"?
(for a lack of a better word) I know that they're alot longer in the canon,
maybe I'll try that out next time around.

I'm confused though, I get the impression that the hair is pretty much
the same size in both images, but it's perfect?   ::)

Anyway, I'll try to post something furbished next time.

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Re: nebbo's artwork
« Reply #14 on: June 12, 2007, 11:06:58 PM »
Lol. But the second one isn't it Lum when she was a child? When she was little she used to have the hair like it is in the fan-art. Besides that Lum has such a "childish" expression in her face that I supposed her to be a Chibi Lum. What I wanted to say is that one of the most well-done fan-arts I have ever seen. Guess what Nebbo? I am your fan.