Topic: Please read: Working on a fanfiction story

[sidzero]

Kissing her, perhaps?

[Forgotten_Lum]

they've done that, though they didn't need to make a deal for that to happen, ok how bout this: A private getaway for a weekend, not telling anyone and location chosen by lum, just ataru and lum

just an idea that can be worked on, its not as small as a kiss but not as great as marraige

[Cosmic King]

Seems a great idea,forgotten lum

[UruseiNeo]

Love it. Since this takes place after the anime, Ataru already kissed her so that's why I wouldn't have used that. But this idea is good. Permission to use "private get away" plz

[kyo]

pendants are wonderful gifts :D

[cata]

I love Forgotten's idea! Here's mine: (My idea and Forgotten' are alike)

A three days space trip that is only for married people. Remember that Lum sees her Darling as her husband. Ataru couldn't girl-hunt because he only could be with Lum. If a female assistant tried to help him, he couldn't do anything perv or so because in a "Huge UFO of Love" the technology is so advanced that even Ataru can't do anything about it. There could be activities like, private spa, cinema for couples (cinema with two seats with all kinds of movies), restaurant for two, gardens, etc. Basically a three days trip in Space inside a Huge UFO that can only be used by married couples with all kind of romantic activities.

[UruseiNeo]

That would be great but let's face it, Ataru would never go that far for just one day of girl-hunting. Not even a week. At this point of the story, where I would be releasing that episode, Ataru and Lum are still in the same situation they are currently at.

And I can't go past one week of girl-hunting, as in it can't be a month, because each episode is weekly and I don't think people wanna see Ataru girl-hunt for 4 episodes while Lum does nothing. With one week, I don't even have to show him doing anything. I can start it at the end of the episode and then, one week later, the new episode starts and his week free has already ended.

Also, who thinks Lum would actually keep her end of the deal? Assuming it's a one week trip she is getting, and that Ataru's "week" doesn't occur during their one week trip?

[cata]

How about " A Night Alone" ?

[UruseiNeo]

Second chapter posted ^_^

[Kroptik]

Did you pick October 10th randomly or is there any proof of it?

And the guy that locked gimself in the room is hilarious. xD
I wonder why he did it...

[UruseiNeo]

The birthday, there is absolutely no proof. The best proof I can give is that somebody said that Lum and Ataru's birthdays are 6 month apart so it would land in october. Then someone replied the 10th cause it was Rumiko's birthday or something around that.

I decided to use that too cause I wanted her birthday to be on the tag race and the tag race would be at the beginning right? so October is roughly where a series would start. Most likely the series start in September but nothing is perfect.

Glad you liked Zack. I just recently decided to have an edit tech person. The reason he locked himself in there was because he likes his privacy. Funny thing is that there's no one else on the crew besides Zack and Cam(still thinking on his REAL name) so  the "meeting" would have only included himself.

[sidzero]

I'm kinda curious about the 6 months apart thing just like I was about the Lum being a princess thing. Any idea where it came from? I don't recall there being anything in the series about that, or about when Lum's birthday is, other than the fact that her star sign was the "Tiger-Striped Unicorn". The problem with trying to come up with dates and such for UY and when things occurred is that the whole series seems to take place in an infinite time loop of some sort. They never move on from 2nd year of high school to 3rd, regardless of how many summers and winters passed in the series. I know if I get around to doing my remake doujinshi that I've been considering, I was going to... remedy that (though I don't know if everyone would agree with my method). But you know... to each author their own.

[UruseiNeo]

Well since I required a birthday I took the first reasonable date I could find. As for my story, I actually need it to progress through time. They are in their third year.

Now... Next time on... shoot I still need to think of an official name for the story...

Next time on Urusei Yatsura: Season 10 (?) -- Ataru gets a job!

Now... I need to think of a job -_-'''... Any suggestions?

[cata]

A job for Ataru? That's hard. He could work at some coffee shop or something. There are some opportunities to girl-hunt in these kind of places, I guess.

[DarkDevil]

I presume it wouldn't be permanent, a part-time for a really short while, until Ataru has enough money for...something...