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[EDDY, WITH SADIC VOICE] Hey, have you already forgotten ? SHE WANTED TO HAVE SEX WITH YOU !!!With drunk step the alien joined her sister..... AND HUGED GENTLY ...... AND BEGUN TO CARESS HER EVERYBODY !!!
I like this story
although I think you should write it in novel form as opposed to writing it like a script, as it is a bit distracting
Also I don't know why but some of the words are messed up. That could have something to do with the translation from Italian I guess.
I like the idea of Ataru and Lum taking care of a baby. It would have been fun if you played with that idea a bit longer before inserting the story about the kidnapping.
[Oyuki, with COLD voice] RAN: WHEN DID YOU DO THE LAST REVISION TO YOUR UFO?!?[Ran, with trembling voice] O... Oyuki, I... I JUST PUT THE FUEL WHEN NEEDED: WHAT'S THE "REVISION" ?!?
TO MY LEFT I'VE THE BRAT OF YOUR STUPID EMPEROR, TO MY RIGHT THAT DRUG ADDICT AND SEX-STARVED OF YOUR GIRLFRIEND !! WHO SAVES ?!? CHOOSE !!!
[AIKO] D.... D..... DAD !!!SHOCK !!!![Lamù, now so touched] W.... WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW !!! DARLING, IT'S HER FIRST WORD !!![ATARU, SHOCKED, CONFUSED, PISSED AND SO MUCH MORE] SH.... SHE CALLED ME <<DADDY>> ?!?
[ATARU, SHOCKED] P.... "PRINCESS" ?!? L.... LAMU', REALLY YOU'RE A PRINCESS ?!?[Lamù, with clear voice] Of course. MY FATHER IS THE KING OF THE ONIS, SO...[Ataru, still shocked] H.. HEY !!! W.... why you didn't ever say it ?[Lamù, same voice] Since I was born my parents decided that I should live the same way as any other girl.[Ataru, still shocked] W... WAIT FOR A MOMENT !! all these years you have always been penniless...[Lamù, now sweetly red in face] Well, the point is that.... you know, that time I paid the account for the use of the taxi that you called to come back home I ..... "Seriously undermined" the resources of our nation...[Mr invader, now furious] you have ruined, that's the truth![Lamù, same situation] ... since then, as punishment, my father decided to give me the same allowance for any teenager: "In this way you'll learn to give the right value for money", he said.
[Lamù, now sweetly excited] D... DARLING, YOU'VE WELL DONE THE ACCOUNT OF "MY DAYS", RIGHT ?!?