Topic: Happy B-Day \(^_^)/

[cata]

Well, thanks for the suggestion but I meant the order of the verses were. Anyways, and your poem is...

[Jataru]

Very good poem Cata. The rhymes are good.

[cata]

Thank you. My poems that I'm going to write are things of the moment. Are done at the moment that I need to write.

[Jataru]

What will be your next poem about?

[cata]

I'm still thinking about it. Probably Shuu-chan.

[DarkDevil]

Guess who is he.



It hurts.
It's true, I can feel it,
But it's hard to admit it.

I saw you leaving.
You've brought so many things,
In which I would have never felt.

By my window, you've left.
Leaving behind memories, of us.
Everywhere I look, I see you,
But you're not there.

I can't see a cloud in the sky,
Because they are in me.
The sun stopped shinning
And the cold frozened my heart.

In the streets,
I see people pointing at me,
Behind whispers.
All because you've left me.

Where did you go?
The stars are brighter,
But this one has faded.

I see a falling star.
I pray to see you again,
And the star stops.

I turn my back...
It's getting warmer!
I turn once again and...

I feel my skin burned
And soft arms embrace me,
And hear: "Darling, did you miss me!"

[cata]

I like the poem very much.

Here's mine:

Shutaro Mendou

He is 17 years old
He is afraid of the dark
He is full of gold
He has lots of credit cards

He has his own private army
His money and his looks are everything he has
He makes most of the girls' days shiny
But Ataru always kick is a**

Octopus is his symbol and pet
For girls, he's a gentleman
And every guy is jealous of what he can get
He is also a ladies' man

By: Cata, the Valkyrie.


I hope that you have enjoyed my poems so far.

[Cosmic King]

Good poems,Dark and Cata

[DarkDevil]

It's not easy, for me, to make poems.

[cata]

At least you try and post them. By the way, it's your turn.

[DarkDevil]

I know

[cata]

So...? Are you still thinking about them? Take your time.

[Kroptik]

Nice poems guys, keep posting them. XD

[DarkDevil]

I'll try
Posted on: 27-10-2007, 00:46:11Keep posting poems, Miss Cata.

[cata]

Tomorrow, I'll introduce you a poem about Shinobu.