Topic: nebbo's artwork

[Cosmic King]

Hmm,they are well drawn,however i have some comments:

Pics 1-4 : Lum looks a lot as Inuyasha,it needs a more femenine face

Pic 5: Lum's head is too big (but i like da costume)

Pic 6:Same as the first 4,lum doesnt look as herself and it would be better if she had a more happy face (anyways liked da message and background)

Keep improving,nebbo

[janus]

on drawing 5, that isn't bad body drawing, just as cosmic said the head is too big, it's a combination of childhood Lum's head and adult Lum's body. they're were good by the way

[DarkDevil]

very true

[nebbo]

Inuyasha, that's a bit harsh 

But I see what you're saying, I'll try to fix that. As for the head being too
big in #5, it's about 5 heads tall, and generally it should be between 5 and 8
heads for non-chibi characters. So yeah it could be smaller, it doesn't hit
me as too big though.

Thanks for the opinions, very useful.

[janus]

You're welcome Nebbo, but remember never feel discouraged by our criteria, because it has happened before.

[watashi]

one question.... how do you get the color??

[Kroptik]

I like those pics, but I agree that pics 1-4 and 6 don't look like Lum too much.

But keep doing those drawings.

[watashi]

indeed!! i want to be inspired by those colors!! [since i dont have any...]

[nebbo]

You're welcome Nebbo, but remember never feel discouraged by our criteria, because it has happened before.

Not at all, I get encouraged to do better, so keep bashing my art   
(I'm exaggerating)

I like those pics, but I agree that pics 1-4 and 6 don't look like Lum too much.

But keep doing those drawings. Grin

Thanks, will do 

one question.... how do you get the color??

Don't tell me you've never heard of photoshop  Anyway I painted that
with a program called corel painter. There's a free program called the gimp
that you could try out, you can find it here, and you need to install this file
too.

You can ask me if you need help getting started.



Posted on: August 07, 2007, 02:37:34 PMI've tried something new, better or worse than before? As in more feminine
and less Inuyasha 

http://img145.imagevenue.com/img.php?image=73396_lamu14_122_1099lo.jpg

Sorry for posting crappy rough sketches, but I want to have a good idea of
how I'm going to draw her before starting something that would take a long time.

[FallinG_StaR]

Looks good to me...  :- :- :- but the eyes... I just feel that there's something missing there or maybe its just my imagination...   

[alumxander]

Cute fanart

[Hikari No Karina]

Beautiful inuyasha pics

[janus]

Beautiful inuyasha pics

it's not Inuyasha, It supposed to be Lum

[Cosmic King]

The pic seems to have improved,nebbo,just make the horns a little bit more big,beyond dat it is 8/10 drawing

[nebbo]

Beautiful inuyasha pics

Hah, you're joking right? If not, it's still a great joke   
I guess I have to lay the blame at Cosmic's feet   

Anyway I'll run with something like this then. I'll post something
better next time, have faith  Thanks for helping me out.