Topic: Please read: Working on a fanfiction story

[sidzero]

He's not a criminal? You think so? Last I checked, molesting people was a crime. So was sexual harassment. Especially in Japan.

[UruseiNeo]

Forgetting to ask, how are you guys finding the style of writing I used, basically what I mean is the camera thing.

Cause it is essential and I will occasionally use it for jokes. I'm hoping it's not distracting.

To get a better understanding of this Point of View, you need to watch "The Office" (not an anime)

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side note: I'm almost done writing the 3rd chapter of... OMG I have to think of a decent name for this story!

[sidzero]

"Urusei Yatsura Again!" perhaps?

[UruseiNeo]

"Urusei Yatsura: Eternal Destiny" That sound good?

And what about the camera thingy?

[sidzero]

Title it whatever you want, it's your story.

As far as the camera thing, again, write it how you want. It works for a story more suited to be animated than drawn. The thing I'm working on is the other way around (not only am I writing it to be drawn, I'm drawing it too). I'm calling it "Urusei Yatsura Remix" (because it's more of a retelling than a continuation). That is, if I can ever get the inspiration to actually finishing what I've started on it (somehow I've come to a HUGE writers block), and not getting sidetracked into working on one of the 5 original stories I have spinning around in my head that I want to work on.

[UruseiNeo]

Chapter 3 added!

Here's a proto-type logo too ^_^



Posted on: March 01, 2008, 06:02:10 AMYeah! Now I have my own Logo for my story ^_^

[sidzero]

What have I started? I only made my logo because I was planning on using it for my doujinshi manga. And it suspiciously looks a lot like mine, too, doesn't it?

I guess imitation is the sincerest form of flattery.

[UruseiNeo]

Well the Japanese character and star had to stay the same anyways.

How is the third chapter?

[sidzero]

Oh, there's a lot more than just that that seems similar. It only makes sense that those would be there.

[UruseiNeo]

Okay, I redid the title. I took out the "Urusei Yatsura" part and changed the star and background. I also reshaped "Eternal Destiny".


Posted on: March 01, 2008, 06:41:43 PMWhat kind of animal do you guys think best fits Ataru?

Ex:
-Tiger would obviously fit Lum.
-Shinobu would be a fox perhaps? (Pure-hearted fox)
-Mendou would be... an octopus ^_^

So what type of animal best fits Ataru?

[Shutaro]

Ataru could be many creatures, but he would make a great weasel, rat, snake or cockroach. 

Seriously though, I thought he looked pretty good as a hippo 

[UruseiNeo]

I like Hippo, it would bring back old memories ^_^

I will probably use either Hippo or... both rat and snake sound good... hmmm...

I think rat would work best for my idea...

Hey, what about Megane's animal?

If it's obvious what my next story idea is plz say so ^_^'

[Shutaro]

Considering Megane means glasses, I would think a mole would be fitting (Just like Penfold from Dangermouse)  :Y

[UruseiNeo]

That works great cause they're both rodents, thank you Shutaro.

BTW, what do you think of my story (if you read it. Don't worry if you haven't)?

[Shutaro]

It's good mate  :*)