GiovaneDinamitardo:
URUSEI YATSURA, A NEW BEGINNING FROM THE END !!
Chapter one: SURPRISING ENDING AT TOMOBIKI SCHOOL !!!
'My name is Megane, I'm 18 years old and I'm crying: the very last day of the school has gone, the examens finished, everybody is reading about the final results. I'm really thinking that this will be my last day of youth: maybe I'll never see again the cute Shinobu lost in her deep dreams of sweetness, maybe I'll never ear again the voice of the cool Sakura San, maybe I'll never enjoy again seeing the wonderful smile of Ran, the desire of Ryonosuke for a real female dressing; maybe, maybe....... only one thing I've realized: I'll never be the same; when I'll leave the school, I'll step on the adult edge and all my youth will be defeated. But, over all, I'll never forget you: Lamú !!! The reason of my being !!! Light of my eyes, desire in neverending nights !!! I hope you'll never grow old !!! I made on myself an image of you, a time-stand-still that doesn't speak (just smile): I'll never touch it, I won't violate your purity !! The other stormtroopen are crying, I think for the same thing. Our friendship is wiped out: Lamú united us, destiny (maybe) will divide us. Everybody has got the diploma but the result are still surprising: three ex-aequo are flashing over all !! Fisrt ex-aequo: Mendou; the only one who has a clear idea for his future (he will get the best university to prepare himself to hold the financial empire made by his father). Second ex-aequo: Lamú. I've never had any doubt about her: she's simply the best !!! But is the third ex-aequo that I just can't concive: Moroboshi Ataru !!! How can it possible?? This abject boy never study anything seriously, never get any good rate from our profs, never apply himself in anything else but girl hunting and now he'll be honored as the best student of the school !!! Since prof. Onsen knows about him is laying in an hospital bed, doctors says that maybe is an hysteric crisis, due to a deep shock: in his face tears drop every second and a silly smile still stays on. Even Ataru is changed: since some times is more cloosed with Lamú (and she agree him so much: she's saying that 'the patience has been rewarded' and, for this, her love for her 'darling' increase day by day), is always tired, depressed, he got a lots of white hair (that's true: I saw it with my eyes !!!), even the young cute gilrs seems to not interest him so much. What's happened?? Where has gone the unfailing youth of Ataru? Once upon, nor a super-nova-explosion, nor a falling into the deepest of hell, nor a sock or kick of a girl (or others matters) could defeat him, now I think that just a breath will kill him !!! What's going on? Also Ataru realized that our youth is really at the end??'
(From the diary of Megane: 'Tomobiky's Apocalypse, last chapter)
3 months before......
Into a deep dark night Ataru is running. He has no energy, feel his body grave, his legs seems made of stone, the breath is grave and loud, his hand and his foots are bleeding but he still cannot give up: Lamú is over there, flying slowly, watching him with flashing eyes, full of spite and hate. He can ear her scream: 'DARLING, YOU'RE STUPID !!! DO YOU REALLY WANT TO FORGET ME ??' Today is the last day of the tag game: if he won't catch her by his horns, a particular drive will destroy every memory of her all over the world and he will lost her forever. He can't lose (he havn'n no choice !!) but he has no more energy: only his strong will hold his body up but he's feeling that now is the end, because his heart will explode if he doens't stop to run. Now he knows that everythingh is lost so he drop to his knees and scream: 'I WON'T FORGET YOU, Lamú: I CANNOT NEVER FORGET YOU !!! I'LL NEVER FORGET YOU !!! BECAUSE I LOVE YOU Lamú, CAN YOU HEAR ME ??? I SURRENDER !!! I LOVE YOU !!! I LOVE YOU' !!! Lamú stop her flying and turn but there's something strange: he looks the mouth of her darling moving but she just can't hear anything. Ataru donesn't concive, just feel a great pain on his heart but try to scream louder: 'I LOVE YOU, Lamú, CAN YOU HEAR ME??? I LOVE YOUUUUUUUU !!! He try to run but, immediatly, bump on something that seems a glass: an enormous glass, an infinite glass who divide him from Lamú, who is on the other side, watching him try to crash it, but she cannot hear nothing about the big noise made by the other side. But a great fear falls on Ataru: two dark hands catch Lamú and dash her into the deepest darkness. Ataru see her asking for his help but he feel that his energy has finished. Still, he want to try too: with his head start to smash the glass until he crash into several flinders, falling on him and wounding everywhere. He's bleeding so much, he knows that's dying but, finally, he can still hear a desperate scream of girl saying: 'DAAAAARLIIIIING' !!!!!
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The scream is so real.... ...... ..... so much real...... ..... ..... too much real...... ...... SO ATARU GETS UP AND RISE FROM THE DREAM !!!
[Lamú] 'Darling, what are you dreaming? You're so wet !!! You're sweltered !!!' Ataru open his eyes and realize: it was just a dream, a terrible nightmare !!! So catch Lamú and hold her strictly into his arms. [Lamú] '...ehm... Darling, what's up? ... You're so kind tonight like ever be !!! ... ehm ... would you like to have another terrible dream???' [Ataru ' breathing grave and loudly] 'No..... I won't.!! Just stay here.... Stay with me..... Please, stay with me tonight. Let's sleep togheter this night ! I just need you'. [Lamú ' crying of joy, jumping and squeezing Ataru] 'DARLIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIING !!!!!!!! I'M HAPPY !!!!!!! YOU JUST CAN'T CONCIVE HOW I'M HAPPY !!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH !!! I AWAITED FOR THIS MOMENT FOR SEVERAL YEARS !!!!!!!!
A lots of voices from outside break the silence of the night: 'SHUT UP !!!! TOMORROW WE HAVE TO GO TO WORK !!!!!
[Lamú - whispering] I'm coming !!!! Let me enter !!!'
[TO BE CONTINUED]
Cosmic King:
Good story,giovane,and welcome to the UY forum
GiovaneDinamitardo:
Thanks, thaks a lot !!! _/-\o_ I was looking for a site like this for a long time: I'm really "drugged" of UruseiYatsura, finally I found a real treasure !!!
I'm italian, so (please) forgive my scholastic english.
If you like this story, you can read also the second chapter, I copy it right now.
I try to image a particular story, who is (at the same time) an end and a beginning for Urusei Yatsura: a big "what if".
I hope you'll like it
CIAO A TUTTI !!! EVVIVA Lamú !!! EVVIVA ATARU !!! EVVIVA URUSEI YATSURA !!! ;D Posted on: January 23, 2008, 12:14:44 AMURUSEI YATSURA, A NEW BEGINNING FROM THE END
Chapter two: I CAN READ YOUR MIND !!!
Tomobiki, 2 months and half before the end of the scool.
Sakura was walking on the street, thinking about the next end of the school: 'it will never be the same again' was her though, 'peace will fall on the edifice but, after all that was happened, we'd derange it for flatness; is it really what we want? Flatness for peace? That's the problem: is better to choose a walk in a part of a war or a lead role in a cage?' One scream broke the sound of silence: she didn't worried, because she knows it very well:
[Lamú, flying and getting nervous] DAAAAAAAARLING, YOU BASTARD !!! THIS TIME I WON'T FORGIVE YOU !!! [Ataru, running] So, Lamú, just try to argue: what I did wrong? I've just asked her to have a drink with me, then I've just held her hand, asked for a little kiss (BUT WITHOUT TONGUE); yeah, she stumbled, so I've try to save her. Is not my fault if I've touched her tits: I'VE JUST TRIED TO SAVE HER LIFE !! [Lamú, still flying] I DON'T WANNA HEAR YOU ANYMORE !!! TAKE THIS !!!!
Sakura sigh deeply during this 'show': she was thinking 'something will never change' but, after a while, she feel that Ataru was dropped on her knees ad holding her hands:
[Ataru, dropped on his knees, holding Sakura's hand and speaking seriously] Sakura San, you're my perfect sexy lady: I'm not perfect, but I'm perfect for you.
She scream aloud, lost in fear for this 'declaration of love', but also because Lamú see them togheter and was 'charging' an heavy zap: both of two were hit by a great lightning !!
[Sakura, raising up, heavly wounded and burnied] Lamú-CHAN, DID YOU EVER HEAR THAT THE HUMAN BODY IS A PERFECT CONDUCTOR OF ELECTRICITY' ?? [Lamú, flying slowly, rather embarassed] Oh..... ehm ..... I'm sorry Sakura, I havn't see you. BUT WHERE'S DARLING?? [Sakura] It's over there. I think he's death. Please, say me that it's true !!! [Lamú, rescuing the unconscius body of Ataru] No, he's still breathing: is not death. Not anymore...... Ataru was laying on the street, near a junk, unconscious, burnied ad wounded too: Lamú shaked him (nervously) so much to awake him but he give up when she saw a big lump on his head.
[Sakura, visiting Ataru] He's got a deep shock, is better if you take him back home. [Lamú, now walking] I think so. I will 'finish' him later......
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' 'STUPID' !!! ' 'BASTARD' !!! ' 'IDIOT' !!!!
The voice of Lamú rang with several echoes inside the head of Ataru, who was slowly coming back to normal: he opened his eyes and found himself laying in the futon of his beedrom. He felt a great pain inside his head: he'd puke but his stomach was empty, so he didn't.
' 'THIS IS THE LAST DROP !! ENOUGH IS ENOUGH !!! STUPID !!!!'
The voice of Lamú still rang, even with several echoes on his head: each ones ot them seems to increase his pain.
[Ataru, groaning] Lamú... please.......don't scream ...... I feel... I feel my head...... breaking in two !!!
' WOW, YOU'RE ALIVE AGAIN !!! WHAT A BEAUTIFIL THING !!! YOU NEVER DIE !!!
[Ataru, groaming] Lamú.......... do you............ really............ want...... my death?? [Lamú, entering in the room, surprised] Darling, what you're saying?? [Ataru, getting up and conscious] You're too hard with me. [Lamú, talking normally] Darling, are you all right?? Have you got the fever? She touched his front with her hand and feel that the temperature was normal.
' NO, YOU HAVN'T ANY FEVER !!!
Ataru scream aolud, lost in fear, and start shaking, looking at Lamú with large eyes: he was really terrorized !!!
[Lamú, looking Ataru with surprise, talking gently] Darling, please, say to me: what's wrong??
' OH MY GOD, DARLING: WHAT'S ON?? I'M WORRIED !!! PLEASE, SAY SOMETHING !!
Now the wiew of Ataru was clear: HE HEAR THE VOICE OF Lamú INSIDE HIS HEAD BUT HE ALSO SAW THAT HER MOUTH DIDN'T MOVE AT ALL !!!!
[Ataru ,groaning] I want tu puke.......... [Lamu, flying] Wait for me, darling, I'll take you a bucket [and disappearded out of the room]
Finally, Ataru realized what's happening: he was able to read the mind of Lamú !!! He didn't concived the way but it was true: also the deep thinkings of her was like an open book for him !!!
[Lamú, flying] Darling, here is the bucket [Ataru, getting up] Thank you Lamú, but I'm feeling better.
Lamu set down saying nothing, with vacanat stare. Some tears flows form her eyes.
' SO, I'M HERE AGAIN. WHY? WHY I HAVE TO SUFFER SO MUCH?? DARLING, PLEASE: EXPLAIN TO ME: WHY YOU MAKE ME SUFFER ?? YOU DON'T CARE ME AT ALL?? I'M NOTHING FOR YOU?? PLEASE, SAY SOMETHING !!! I NEED SOME SWEET WORD FROM YOU !!! YOU'RE NEVER KIND WITH ME !!!
[Ataru, holding her hand, with serious voice] Lamú, I thank you ! I thank you for caring me.
The tears stopped immediatly to flow from the eyes of Lamú: since long time, this was the first time that Ataru talked so gently with her. She was confused but happy at the same time.
[Ataru, still serious] Lamú, I was wrong: that girl doesn't mean nothing for me and even the rest of them. I just want you !!!
Ataru dropped on his knees and kissed the top of the foots of Lamú, deeply surprised of it.
[Ataru, still serioius] Lamú, please forgive me. I beg your pardon. I was really bad but when I saw you caring me with so much love I've understood what I am for you. And also what you really are for me !!! [crying] PLEASE, FORGIVE ME !!! I'LL NEVER MAKE YOU SUFFER ANYMORE
' DARLING ??????????? IS TRUE??? IS THIS THE TRUTH ?????????????