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Chette:
First. UY Fanfic.. Warning: Waffy and Drama
and I need... someone to proof-read it... before I can share it in the other sites (ff.net and fanlisting)
.. coz my english sucks..

Summary: She had to leave. She had too. He hurt her so much. Lum finally decided to leave Ataru. But after five years, she had to come back to him because she needed his help.
Posted on: June 07, 2007, 09:41:13 PMokay... so here's my new.. Urusei Yatsura Fanfic... titled... "Baby... Our Baby"
This is Lum and Ataru pairing... it's a little dramatic so... yeah sorry.. hehe

Baby... Our Baby
A Urusei Yatsura
written by: Chette Dizon 

"Darling..."
"Nan da?"
"Sayonara...'tcha"
"Heh.. this again Lum? You're not gonna pull this stunt again right?"
"This time... I'll break off my engagement to you, you are free... Moroboshi"

22 years old, Ataru Moroboshi opened his eyes and realized he was dreaming. But the dream that he had dreamt really happened Five years ago. It was already five years since his supposed to be wife Lum, the Alien Princess dumped him and came back to their world. For some odd reason; he couldn't understand why she had to do that. After a few years of not going home, he suddenly missed her but his heart hardened. The words 'If she doesn't like me; then fine by me! There are many girls around and they are humans. I can live my life without her' became his famous sentence whenever someone asked him about her.

Then... after four years; she came back to the earth. Still Lovely as ever; the princess Lum of Oni. He was shocked to see her in some lotion commercials. She was already on earth but she never even visited Tomibiki High; not just once. This made his anger increased; how dare she come back on earth without even visiting him or asking how is he.

A car stopped at the police parking lot. A woman with a white hat came out of the car. Ataru peeked and saw a pair of gorgeous legs and whistled. "Higher... Higher... dang. She got a prettiest legs I've ever seen!" he wiped the drool on his mouth, grabbed his pencil and address phone and rushed towards the girl. "Ne, ne, ne...Juusho to denwa bangou wa?!" he asked, The Woman didn't even looked at him; but when she spoke. Ataru took two steps backward. He gasped when she looked at him.

"Oni planet. I don't have a phone number. Do you want my cellphone number though 'tcha?" she asked, looking straightly at his eyes. He was the same Ataru Moroboshi before; but with few changes. Her heart did a foolish jitterbug that she chalked up to nerves. She knew she would feel something like this once she meet him again face to face. But she has to focus on her mission. Never she will ever fall for him again. He hurt her so much in the past. So she had to protect herself from him; but that doesn't mean she couldn't admire the changes. Wearing a uniform shirt, jeans and brown boots. He looked so much better than five years ago. I guess he really didn't need me after all. He is happy with his life without me. The simple perverted and weird guy had become a stunning police man.

"What do you want?"
"Hello.. M-Moroboshi da 'tcha"

Ataru narrowed his eyes, when she extended a hand. A long manicured hand. He just stared at the beautiful smooth hand. His pride running up. "What do you want?" he asked, once again.

"How are you, 'tcha?"

Ataru growled and clenched his fist. "I'm doing great." he rolled his eyes, "What do you want?" he asked, the third time.

"I came to talk to you-"

"For what? For what happen five years ago?" he asked, Are you going to say you're sorry to me? He wanted to add but he waited for her.

"I wanted to talk to the Tomobiki's head police, 'tcha" she said, looking down. "That's you... right, 'tcha?" she asked,

She means business. No more and No less. "Right this way, Ma'am" he said, as he started to walk towards the office. He paused and opened the door for her. Trying to control his anger. This is Duty. Not personal problems. Lum couldn't care less anyway. Although he couldn't help but to close his eyes when he smelled her perfume. It was a sweet scent.

"It's been a long time, 'tcha" she said, her blue eyes drifting around the old, narrow office that he'd worked so hard to gain. Ataru didn't know what to do when he finished highschool. He had no interest in college so he took the job as a police man. After a few years, he was promoted to be the head chief. Knowing Ataru's strength when he wants to use it; the other police group didn't stand a chance.

He was proud to gain such position but looking at Lum right now, he felt so small as he supposed this place looked and smelled like a musty hole in the wall.

"You're right on that," he said, glancing at the calendar on his desk. Five years, four months and thirteen days to be exact. The date she'd left him was a permanent scar on his heart, noticing just now. "But you were doing alright right? you came back to earth last year... and you just visited today?" he asked,

Lum's heart skipped a beat, "You were watching 'tcha?" she asked, 

He crossed his arms as he sat on his sit, "Sure. Even I don't want too. I can't avoid looking at you since you're always in all TV Stations. Commercials here and there... famous Model.. Princess Lum of Planet Oni. Your pictures in tabloids, newspapers, magazines. Men would pay hundreds just to get some of your latest pictures" he said, sarcastically. "Anyway, What brings you back here? What do you want? Why do you want my service?" he asked all those questions. And How soon will you get the hell out of here?

Then he saw something in her eyes. What was it? Nerves? Problems? Anxiety? Troubles? Observing the princess Oni once again, he studied her and since he knew her before and how she reacts. He knew that she was scared. But what was she afraid of? What is her problem? Better question... What did it have to do with him? The Silence irked him, he hated silence and her visit was starting to get under his skin. Before he could yell at her, she spoke.

"I would like to do a celebrity work here on Tomobiki high, 'tcha" she said, "It's about.. the Bone marrow thing donation" she said, looking at him. "I wanted some police to help me handle this charity event and some of the people here told me to go straight at you... you can also ask Mendou and the rest of the gang.. if they can help, 'tcha" she said, smiling nervously.

Ataru nodded, "Fine... I'll get them to help. It's for old time sake" he said, looking at his desk.

"A-Arigatou 'tcha, You don't know how much this means to me" she said, accidentally she held his hand. Making Ataru jumped on his seat.

Ataru pulled out his hand on hers, "Yeah... Demo na.. I thought Bone Marrow.. if I am not mistaken are donated by families... so if you are trying to run a donation charity like that, it would be useless you know" he said,

"A-Actually.. I was a member of the group, 'tcha.. Demo... before they have to donate bone marrow... they have too... have a blood test and then if the blood tests are okay so... they can donate then" she said, smiling. "B-Besides.. you can meet a lot of pretty girls in that charity event, 'tcha" she said, smiling.

"I am not much of a playboy anymore" Ataru said, looking straightly at her. "Well there are times I do stuff like that; just like today, but sometimes I get tired of chasing girls and dating them. It's not fun anymore, I guess because I am getting old" he said, looking up at the ceiling.

"You're not married, 'tcha?" she asked,

"Hell no. Ataru Moroboshi will never tie up with anyone. I'll become a confirmed bachelor" he said,

"I see..." Lum said, looking at him. This is it... Be brave... "Since, you will help... w-would you become a donator too? I mean it would really-" she stopped, when Ataru looked puzzled. "I mean I-" she squeezed her hands into fists, "I-"

"I'll help with the patrol. But you can't make me donate blood or bone marrow." he said,

No... "But.. It would mean so much-"

"Look Ms. Invader, I don't mean to be a rude, but there are plenty of others to help with this cause of yours. I am really awfully busy, and given our history, I'd expect to be the last man on earth you'd come to"

"Moroboshi-" she looked down, it's true that they had history. But she'll do anything, even put her pride down for her mission. "We're friends right, 'tcha?" she asked,

"Once. We were once good friends." he snapped, "and that was a long time ago. I don't care about your revisiting. And I don't care about you, I am just doing my duty, Ms.Invader" he said, looking at the papers now. "Now if you'll excuse me, I have to go back to work." he said, gathering the Papers and stood up, "Just come back tomorrow for your permit" he said, then he went on the other room.

Matte! Matte! Lum wanted to screamed, wanted to catch up with him. But he made it clear to her that he didn't want to offer any personal help. 

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"AHH!!!"
Lum wiped her eyes and saw Ataru trembling, while looking at her. "What's wrong Darling 'tcha?"
"L-Lum! What have you done!" he asked,
Lum blinked and looked down, she realized she was naked. She screamed then cried.
"HEY! I was the one who should cry!" Ataru yelled,
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"MOROBOSHI! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH OUR LUM-SAN!!!" (Mendou)
"Heh... I don't know what happen, but we did it so It doesn't matter." (Ataru)
"You're GONNA DIE!!!" (Mendou)
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"Tadaima!!!"
"Darling Okaeri 'tcha"
"AHH!!! Don't scare me like that!"
"Darling! I cooked for you, 'tcha"
"W-What?! Lum! How many times have I told you not to cook anymore? Besides there's no special occasion so..."
"No special occasion? There is! Don't you remember what is date today, datcha?"
"No?"
"It's our Anniversary, datcha!" (electricity coming out of her)
"HEY! It's not our Anniversary! It's just yours. I am not really involved with you!"
"Demo..."
"Just because we did it, that doesn't mean you can tie me up!"
"Darling..."
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"Darling?"
"Nan da?"
"Darling... I can't wait for us to have a family"
"EH???"
"What is wrong darling, 'tcha?"
"You're freaking me out! I never ever imagine a life with you and a child! You're an alien LUM! An Alien!"
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"Darling..."
"Nan da?"
"Sayonara...'tcha"
"Heh.. this again Lum? You're not gonna pull this stunt again right?"
"This time... I'll break off my engagement to you, you are free... Moroboshi"

Lum opened her eyes, after she recalled her memories five years ago. Her eyes were full of tears as she was staring at the sky. She was back at a hotel where she rented for a month. She didn't want to go back, God knows how much she didn't want to go back. But she had to... for her daughter's sake...for Ataru and her daughter's sake. Mayuka. She came back on earth for only one reason. To Cure Mayuka.

Her daughter Mayuka suffered an earth-disease called 'Leukemia'. And she needed earth doctors to cure her. So she had no choice but to go back to earth and earn some money for her daughter. She maybe a princess but the money in Oni planet is different than the money on earth. At first she was okay, undergoing chemotherapy. But after a few months, she became worst; the doctor told her she needed a bone marrow donor. So she had to go back, and asked help.. from him even he doesn't want to be.

If only she could make Ataru donate bone marrow without knowing Mayuka then it would be great. So she had to make a big celebration and make Ataru get involve with this thing. She has too... for her daughter's sake.

To be continued...

Author's note: I don't know what to name... their daughter.. so I used G.A.M's character "Mayuka" :D

Forgotten_Lum:
That was amazing, heartbreaking and very touching

Spelling and grammer look good, can't wait for the continuation

Jataru:
You indeed put your magic in words, lady chette,

cata:
Magic, fantastic, sad, wonderful,... You are amazing! I can't wait to read more.

DarkDevil:
 :o :o :o

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