Topic: Darling

[Forgotten_Lum]

hey its going to be awhile just for me to sort out my ideas, but atleast i'll have lots of time in class, never do anything anyway

[Cosmic King]

ok,we will leave u 2 do da honors

[Forgotten_Lum]

hey maybe i could use this as an english class project

[FallinG_StaR]

LoL maybe thats a good idea

[Forgotten_Lum]

well it certainly has been awhile since i thought of this topic (in fact i completely forgot about hehe). but by some coincidence i found my old notebook (combination of moving and changing courses) and found the bit i wrote as a continuation. Tell me what you think and I may continue, but my Oh! My Goddess fanfic is going to take priority over this.

Chapter 2: A Bad Morning

Throughout the day I was in and out of conciousness, each time I awoke it was to the sight of her. Eventually I managed to stay awake, but she was no longer by my side. Was it all a dream or reality. I did not know. I just lay there there, not wanting to move. Constantly think if it was just a dream and if it wasn't, how would my life change.

I had been laying there for hours, or at least that's what it felt like to me, before I heard the doorbell. I attempted to sit up but my whole body hurt, so I just gave up and hoped the person would go away. The doorbel rang again and again. "Oh please go away and leave me to my dream" I mutter quietly. No such luck. The ringing turned to banging and a familiar voice shouting. I jumped to my feet, completely forgetting the pain, threw on some clothes and ran to the door. I click of the lock, a twist of the handle and a swing of the door, then I was slammed into the adjacent to the door.

There in my arms was not the the girl from my dream, but another I am glad to see, my girlfriend, Shino Bushamon, but I like to call her Shinobu. One reason for this is because it a combination of her first and last name, it also is from my favorite anime series and lastly she has to many friends called Shino, so its Shinobu for me and me alone.

We stood there for some moments, my back firmly pressed against the wall, her face held firmly against my chest. The pain was quickly returning and I didn't know how long I could last before I passed out. "Um Shinobu" I managed to get out "Your hurting me". She immediately jumped back, clasping her hands to her mouth, her eyes swelling up with tears. "I'm so sorry" she whispered through her hands. " Don't worry about it, it isn't your fau" that was as much as I was able to get out before the dizziness took over, then the darkness.

I awoke for the second time that day, at least I think it was the same day, and was in my bed again. I turned my head to look out the window, it must have been late because all i saw was the pitch black of night, barely being aluminated by an almost full moon. I didn't bother to get up, fearing that I would collapse again. I just lay there, thinking about my life. Who was I? Where am I? And what is a dream or reality?

I guess I can answer some of my own question. It at least allow me to get back to sleep. My name is Atari Moro, age 20, currently in second year at Sanna College for Advance Computing. I live off campus in an old, rundown building, but I would never tell that to my girlfriend or her father. My girlfriend, Shino Bushamon or Shinobu, lives with her father just down the street and her father owns this house. He used to rent this house out to make a secondary income but recently he has just been using as storage, so Shinobu managed to convince her father to let me stay here for free. I first met Shinobu two, no three years ago. My eyes shot open, I started sweating, I knew I had completely forgotten something. It was our aniversary in a couple weeks, I need to get her a present. I shot straight up, but quickly became dizzy and fell back down. I'll take care of that later and with that I fell asleep.

I awoke the next morning to the smell of bacon and voices in the house. I live alone so who could that be. I managed to stumble out of bed and down the hall to the kitchen, only to find Shinobu infront of the stove and Mr. Sakuran Bou, or as everyone I know likes to call him Mr. Cherry, sitting at the table. Mr. Cherry is the anime store owner, where the explosion occured, and a good friend of mine. Upon entering the kitchen I was greeted with the cheerful face of Mr. Cherry and the focused face of Shinobu. "Sit down and wait for breakfast" demanded Shinobu. I quickly sat down. One thing I've learned is not disturb or comment on her cooking. It tends to be dangerous and not good for our relationship. There was this one time in Home Ec., back in high School, where someone insulted her cooking before it was done and she nearly destroyed the school. The school declared it a gas leak, but me and most of her friends know the truth. Last I heard they were still trying to fix the damage.

My nervousness soon turn to confusion. Why was Shinobu making breakfast and why was Mr. Cherry here? But the biggest question was why did Shinobu give me this unpleasant feeling. I've watched her cook before, but the tone of her voice, was just scary. I felt it was best she spoke first so I layed my head down and waited for breakfast. Whatever peace-of-mind I had left soon disappear as a hand rested on his head and a single spoken word "Darling". I slowly lifted my head to see the face to that voice, but all I saw was an open hand coming at my face. I didn't have enough time to react so I ended up on the floor looking at my girlfriend storming out of the kitchen and hearing the front door slam shut. I only had one thought go through my mind, 'Why my?"

[Kroptik]

Nice way to introduce the charaters, and a good "imitation" of the real UY (Ataru was with Shinobu at the beginning, wasn't she? )
Anyway, you're doing great, so keep it up.

By the way, what's that about an AMG fanfic? Link please.

[Forgotten_Lum]

here's my AMG Fanfic for ya, unfortunately i'm stuck, i know what i want to do with the story but i don't know how to make the transition, i hope to at least continue by june

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4241931/1/Oh_My_Power

[Jataru]

Keep doing a good job Forgotten Lum.

[Cosmic King]

Wryyyyy,finally a continuation of the Darling fanfic,does this mean that the darling fic is one that can be continued by anyone?

[Kroptik]

Since Forgotten was the one that picked it up, I guess the fic is now his (until Razor comes back, at least).

Unless he says it's OK, but for a multi-writter fic we have the DM already.

[DarkDevil]

Kill them all!

[Forgotten_Lum]

what is the point in typing that dark

anyway, i wouldn't mind other people putting in there talent, in fact i encourage it, but I ask that you email your part so i can make it fit and remove spam

[Akazukin]

Kill them all!

Is it me or is dark getting more... darker? O.o

[SandStorm]

it's his usual way to be, just ignore him.

[Surudoi]

just read every other post of it then you get rid of a lot of the pointless stuff