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Ideas for my new fanfic
« on: April 26, 2012, 04:38:55 PM »
Hi, recently I have been play Shogun 2: Fall of Samurai which spark an idea to a fanfic about Urusei Yatsura charcters in Boshin War.

I got the ideas, but can anyone give me any ideas since my all fanfics based on open ideas for anyone to make a great plot.

I also create two OOC charcters which they are a major force in my story.

So any ideas?

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Re: Ideas for my new fanfic
« Reply #1 on: April 27, 2012, 11:32:35 PM »
tell us wat u have so far. then i'll and other people will help
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Re: Ideas for my new fanfic
« Reply #2 on: April 29, 2012, 06:09:47 AM »
Ok, my original draft that the story will split into three volumes during the Boshin war filled with Urusei Yatsura and maybe cameo charcter from Kenshin story. I have trouble to fill Ataru and Lum moments in the first volume. I already come up with forgieners came respective from American Civil War as Union Vetern takes side of the Imperial while the Confederate Exile sided with the Shogunate forces.

I got the dramatic and epic battles coming, but I need some ideas to balanced comedy and drama. The romance of Ataru and Lum i based on from novel I read before, "Cold Mountain." I wanted show the events in order like Gods and Generals, Gettysburg, and Last full measure (which it has not made into a film)

Another I have that what roles that the charcters to fit and help my plot going. It just lately my ideas are constanting debating to put in what. The story goes like this:

Act one-
The American civil war ends, that one day a job offering to train the Satsuma army which actual lead by Saigo Takamori.
The Union Vetern arrive along with his friend who been though

That's it so far. I am trying to get volume one in works, but I need help to make my fanfic good and best one I can do. Any ideas are good or what is best for my fanfic.

Also this one will be like PG-13 for war sequences and mild language. Any idea will be shared.

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Re: Ideas for my new fanfic
« Reply #3 on: May 01, 2012, 10:07:04 PM »
lets see does ataru fanily tell lum that he loves her? if not make one a scene of him telling her that maby it after the war he promiss that he tell her that after the war ends. u can also make one with them getting married. if u want. lets see for comedy.. tell me one thing it is after the war right.?..
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Re: Ideas for my new fanfic
« Reply #4 on: May 02, 2012, 12:17:05 AM »
The romance idea sounds the best one. But I was also thinking that I should do the comedy elements while they are in boot camp, the times in Kyoto, and camp life. Also I need ideas how the homefront where Ataru's parents,Lum, and Ten are going to do while Ataru is gone for duration of the war. What about other charcters to put what role?

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Re: Ideas for my new fanfic
« Reply #5 on: May 04, 2012, 02:06:31 AM »
k do one with medou and ataru getting into a fight over lum because medou finds out that ataru kept a pic of lum hidden and it starts to get out of hand so medou takes out his sword and trys to slice ataru up for not showing them the pic of lem or ataru does something stupid which his whole group get mad at him and try to kill him but due to his carouch prower he stills has energy to run away from them and ataru finds himself at the women scetion of  the camp a does something. (u think of that one.
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Re: Ideas for my new fanfic
« Reply #6 on: May 04, 2012, 03:19:26 AM »
Ok, optional one is the best one which option 2 don't have any women in the army except nurses. What about interaction of my Fan made characters will like with the cast?

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Re: Ideas for my new fanfic
« Reply #7 on: May 04, 2012, 09:56:30 PM »
ya do nurses and fan made characters..lets see... how about they want to learn how ataru got all those phone numbers form different girls and they go out to try it themslefs and fail, but learn to do after a while. so they become ataru clones but they just have his lust.
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Re: Ideas for my new fanfic
« Reply #8 on: May 05, 2012, 12:24:44 AM »
Um, the setting takes place in 1860s during the Boshin, not in the modern days. I have no intention to create Ataru clones.

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Re: Ideas for my new fanfic
« Reply #9 on: May 07, 2012, 12:18:52 AM »
no i dont mean like creating ataru clones just make them act like ataru fellow teamates full of lust trying to get nurse's number and where they live. like that.
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Re: Ideas for my new fanfic
« Reply #10 on: May 07, 2012, 04:49:02 AM »
Actually there is no telephones in 1860s and I am trying trying realistic like Ronin Kenshin style, but humorous of Urusei Yatsura. Have you ever seen Gettysburg or Gods and Generals?

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Re: Ideas for my new fanfic
« Reply #11 on: May 07, 2012, 10:08:06 PM »
k then they just want to know where they live..k
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Re: Ideas for my new fanfic
« Reply #12 on: May 08, 2012, 12:43:30 AM »
The fan made characters are Americans who were rivals from American Civil war (Union and Confederacy), Dutch translator, British jounralist, and French photographer. The Americans are respective side they are on: Imperial (Union Vetern) and Shogunate (confederate exiled).

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Re: Ideas for my new fanfic
« Reply #13 on: May 08, 2012, 09:35:37 PM »
k.... then to think of something that would help make it funny, look at some fanfic's for ideas that were i usually get my ideas to make fanfic's.
« Last Edit: May 09, 2012, 10:12:45 PM by atarumorobohi31 »
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Re: Ideas for my new fanfic
« Reply #14 on: May 09, 2012, 04:39:16 AM »
I see.