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THE 7th HALLUCINATION
« on: February 22, 2011, 12:27:57 AM »
URUSEI YATSURA, THE UNOFFICIAL 10TH SEASON[/b][/color] (click on this link to read the whole plot of this saga).

"THE 7th HALLUCINATION"

CHAPTER ONE: ONI MY FOE !!


... HANF...

ggggggh....

.. HANF...

ggggggh....

.. HANF...

ggggggh....

.. HANF...

ggggggh....



... oxygen ... oxygen...

... OXYGEN !!!

WHAT HAS BECOME TO OXYGEN ?!?


Ataru was panting heavily with his mouth open but it did not work at all.

Rather, the situation was getting worse, since his throat and nose burned like fire in a fireplace.

Cold !

COLD !!

TOO MUCH COLD !!


A true contradiction one: all of his respiratory system was burning like a blast but now he was dying of cold.

WELL, IT COULD NOT BE OTHERWISE...

... the point was that he felt his sweat was icing on...

... AND THAT WASN'T GOOD AT ALL !!

He paused a moment and he tried to open more his eyes. this required a huge effort, because at that moment everything seemed to be against him.

He could not still sell anything.

"DANMED SNOW", was his thought !!


IT WAS EVERYWHERE !!

His leg was sinking beyond the ankle (and this made so difficult to advance in that kind of incredible white desert) but what made him feeling more pain was that bad, falling, incessantly snowstorm, was tossed by the wind in his face: it seemed that hundreds of thousands of small sharp blades struck him and, worse still, the one that came in his ears would have been enough to scream out in pain for more than a month.

BUT THAT WAS NOT THE RIGHT TIME TO SCREAM !!


IN FACT...


... <<IT>> WASN'T SO FAR !!!

Ataru felt his breath (a huge, deep, scary breath), his pace (felt its "weight", maybe it was a bear?!?) and, above all, a continuous, deep growl.

THE ONE WHO WAS HUNTING HIM WAS CERTAINLY STARVING !!


A SHELTER !!

Ataru stopped behind a rock (it was bigger than him and, briefly, the shelter from the wind) and, finally, managed to remove the snow and ice that had formed over his eyes and could look around.

"Damn, I got too high", was his thought: "That's why I can not breathe" (he continued to mutter as was still moaning and panting).

For an interminable moment the wind was silent.

Ataru looked all around.

Damn, he saw only snow-capped mountains, a gray sky but, above all, there was no other living soul in the vicinity where you can ask for help!

"What I did to get into this mess?" was his torment, "I don't remember anything!"

SUDDENLY....


... A BLACK CROW LANDED IN FRONT OF HIM !!

[Ataru, whispering nervously] Go away !!

[crow, squeaking] 'AAAAAAAAAARK !!!

[Ataru, same situation] You damned, go away !!

[crow, squeaking] 'AAAAAAAAAAAA'y !!!

[Ataru, getting more nervous] Are you deaf ?!? Go away !!

[crow, squeaking] 'RRRRRRRRRRRRRROOOOOO' !!

Ataru threw against him a handful of snow, but that, with a rapid beat of wings, flew away!

"All I need is the bird of ill omen", was his thought !!

SUDDENLY....

[***] ROAR !!
[ATARU, LOST IN PANIC] YEHOHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGH !!

THAT OGRYNS WAS ABLE TO FIND HIM !!

He rose his sight...

.... AND ...

SHOCK !!

A HUGE BLACK MASS WAS OVER THE ROCK, behind which were hiding!

COULD BE ALMOST THREE METRES HIGH ...

.. heavy is not known how ...

... AND THOSE SCARY EYES NOT bode well!



Courage ...

... despair ...

... survival instinct ...

...Ataru made a dart to his right and began to slide on snow.

The slope of the mountain soon made him take a great speed.

That was not a good idea!!

IN FACT...

... AT THE END OF THE DESCENT THERE WAS A DEEP RAVINE !!

WORST, HIS OPPONENT WAS DOING THE SAME THING !!


Now he was sliding so fast toward a certain death that could not even think ...

... WHEN...

... AN UNEXPECTED WAY OUT !!

His sweatshirt became entangled in something a moment before falling into the abyss...


... HIS OPPONENT WAS LESS LUCKY...

... and fell on deaf ears !!

Ataru wanted to breathe more deeply for the narrow escape but oxygen was still in short supply (it was so high that mountain), which aggravated his suffering.

He tried to raise a hand to find a foothold but ...

... no longer felt the fingers!

"OH MY GOD, I'M GETTING FREEZES ?!?" was his (desperate) thought.

[**] ROAR !!!

GREAT SHOCK !!!


THAT MONSTER KNEW HOW TO FLY !!

He eagerly grabbed him with the right hand...

... and, at that very moment, a ray of sun lit up is face.

Ataru took a look at him...

... AND ...

[ATARU, SO SHOCKED] FATHER IN LAW, IT WAS YOU ?!? You wretch, you gave me a damn!

[MR INVADER, SO ANGRY] RRRRRRRRROAAAAAAAAAAAR !!

GREAT SHOCK !!


HE GRABBED HIM IMMEDIATELY !!

[Ataru, now with trembling voice] ... ehm ... w... what I did wrong t.. to you ?!?

HE BEGUN TO SQUEEZE HIM !!

[ATARU, NOW LOST IN PANIC] H.. HEY !! HEY !! N.. NOT THIS WAY !! [gggggggh] NOT THIS WAAAAAAAAAAY !!! [gggggggggh] .... YOU HURT MEEEEEEEEEEEEE !!!

As it seemed that Ataru was stronger than normal, his father in law took him by the leg ...

...  and slammed him to the ground several times.

When he thought he was dead he took him up on his back ...

... and began to fly!

The flight was short-lived: he landed in a cave not far away and, once inside, he slammed him back to earth.

He thought was dead or (at least) passed out ...

... but had Ataru now so afraid that remained ever vigilant !!

[Ataru, still lost in panic] Gh.. gh.. Ok, Ok !! I.. I beg your perdon for.. for...
[MR INVADER] RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRROAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAR !!
[Ataru, same situation] OK, OK: I SURRENDER, I SURRENDER !! I WILL MARRY LAMU' !! I SWEAR IT ! I SWEAR IT !!

WAS IN THAT MOMENT THAT TWO SHADOWS APPEARED FROM THE BACK OF TEH CAVE !!

The profile appeared the one to two women...

... wearing tiger-striped cloth both...

... AND ...

[Ataru, still in shock] LAMU' !! MRS INVADER !! Thank Goodness you're here !! Please, help me to explain to...

....
...
..

[ATARU, LOST IN PAIN] YEHOHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAARGH !!


.... TWO SUDDEN BITES !!!

BOTH LAMU' AND HER MOTHER HAD BITTEN HIM ON HIS ARMS....


.... and when they got up they were licking their lips to taste better than the blood that was released from the hurt!

Not so far, a little child was breathing flames over a pile of wood to set a fire.

[ATARU, SCREAMING OUT OF HIS SOUL] JARITEN, ENOUGH IS ENOUGH: THIS COMEDY HAS LASTED TOO LONG !!  I WANNA AN EXPLENATION ABOUT...


POW !!!


Lamù (STILL WITH HER TEETH BLOOD) struck him on the head hard with her huge club.


Few moments after her mother, with a few scratches of his sharp claws, tore all his clothes off...

... (at that time Ataru did not understand if he was shivering with cold or terror) ...

... then she pinned his arms and bounded them...

... her husband did the same with his legs...

... MEANWHILE, LAMU' WAS SHARPENING A LONG WODDEN POLE !!


[Ataru, lost in panic] HEY.... HEY... W.. .WHAT YOU WANNA DO TO ME ?!?

After a chilling laugh everyone started to say something in an unknown language...

... BUT IT WAS CLEAR THAT THEY WERE FIGHTING FOR HIS "BEST PARTS" !!

[Ataru, still lost in panic] NO! NO! HOLD, HOOOOOOOOOOOLD !! I'M NOT EDIBLE, I'M NOT EDIBLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE !! And thean... and then.. everybody knows that I have a take taste and then .. and then .... and then I certainly caught the fever: if you eat me I'll infect you all! and then ... and then ...

Inutile.

Lamù caught him on his arms...

... and her mother lifted his legs...

... AND REALIZED THAT HER FATHER WANTED TO ROAST HIM !!

[ATARU, STILL SCREAMING] HOOOOOOOOOOOOLD !!! HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLD !! I SAID I'M NOT EDIBLE, I SAID THAT I'M NOT EDIBLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE !!

He raised his eyes

[Ataru, SCREAMING DESPERATELY] I MARRY YOU, LAMU' !!I MARRY YOU RIGHT NOW !! I KNOW THAT YOU UNDERSTEAND JAPANESE, SO TELL THEM PLEASE: I MARRY YOU, I MARRY YOU RIGHT NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW !!!

Lamù hissed something but was not bode well.

IN FACT..


... ATARU KNEW QUITE WELL THAT SHE WAS ALREADY SAVOURING THE "MEAL" !!







A SUDDEN SCREAM !!

JARITEN WAS SCREAMING !!

The sound was still mysterious but was immediately clear that a great danger was approaching !!

Everyone flew out of the cave, no one took care to extinguish the fire.

Meanwhile, Ataru was still dying both of cold and of fear.

"Damn, I do not know whether to be happy or worried! What worse can happen ?" - was his thought.


FINALLY...

.... A FEMALE FIGURE OVERLOOKED ON THE SCENE !!

She paused for a while at the entrance of the cave...

... did few little step...

... AND WHEN SHE APPROACHED TO THE FIRE HE RECOGNIZED HER !!

[ATARU, NOW SO JOYFUL] OYUKI CHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN !!

She walked on to reach him.

[Ataru, now with silly smile and voice] Ooooooooh, Oyuki chaaaaaaaaaaan: I knew I was still in your heart !! Please, set me free from.... from...


SHOCK !!


OYUKY HAD TWO SCARY EYES RED BLOOD....

... an evil expression on her face...

.... SCARY LONG TEETH....

.... AND WAS GIGGLING IN AN EVIL WAY !!


[ATARU, BACK LOST IN PANIC] O... OYUKI, Y... YOU'RE NOT A VAMPIRE, RIGHT ?!?


A GRIM HISS...

... AND ..

[ATARU] YEHOHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAARGH !!!


A GREAT BITE BETWEEN THE NECK AND THE RIGHT SHOULDER !!!


Ataru was still screaming out in pain...

.... MEANWHILE, OYUKI WAS DRINKING (SLOWLY AND SCARLY) HIS BLOOD !!



WAS IN THAT MOMENT THAT A SHADOWY FIGURE, CLAD ENTIRELY IN BLACK, APPEARED AT THE ENTRANCE OF THE CAVE !!


[Ataru, still lost in panic, with trembling voice] H.. HELP ME !!! HELP ME !!! I.. I WILL DO WHATEVER YOU WANT BUT SAVE ME, PLEASE !!! PLEASE !!!



AN EVIL LAUGHT !!!


[<<THE FIGURE>>, with evil voice] MOROBOSHI, HOW MUCH ARE DEEP THE DEPTH OF DESPAIR ?!?

[ATARU, STIL SHOCKED] N.. Nan-da ?!?


[To be continued]
« Last Edit: September 06, 2011, 11:20:08 PM by GiovaneDinamitardo »

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Re: THE 7th HALLUCINATION
« Reply #1 on: February 24, 2011, 09:38:30 PM »
Great just great... i cant say enything else. These are so good at i almost cant speak ^_^

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Re: THE 7th HALLUCINATION
« Reply #2 on: February 27, 2011, 11:47:18 PM »
 _/-\o_ _/-\o_ _/-\o_

Thanks a lot to read my tale, I'm glad that you like it.

URUSEI YATSURA, THE UNOFFICIAL 10TH SEASON[/b][/color] (click on this link to read the whole plot of this saga).

"THE 7th HALLUCINATION" [/size]

CHAPTER TWO: HAPPY BLOODY SETSUBUN!![/size]


[Ataru, with trembling weak voice] Help me... please... help me...

Ataru was still dying of cold and had neither the strength nor the courage to open his eyes...

... WHEN, SUDDENLY...

.... SOMEONE BEGUN TO TAP SOFTLY HIS FRONT !!

He opened the eyes...

... AND ...


... JOYFUL SHOCK !!!


HE WAS LAYING OVER A LAWN IN A PARK OF TOMOBIKI !!


... and in front of his eyes a black crow, with its beak, was trying to wake him up and gotten him gently on the face.

[Ataru, groaning] Th.. thanks my friend: this time I'm happy to meet you.

[crow, squeaking] 'RRRRRRRRRRRRRROUUUUUUU' !!!

It continued a bit to tap him gently on the cheek.

[Ataru, now gigglig a bit] All right, all right, that's enough: you tickle me !!

[crow, squeaking] 'AAAAAAAAAA'y !! 'AAAAAAAAAAAAAARK !!

A quick shot of the wings and he desappeared away.

Rising, Ataru took a great breath, looked around and had the hoped confirmation: he had fallen asleep on a lawn of the park Tomobiki!

... but that feeling of cold inside the bones did not forsake him, despite the sun shining on a clear sky and no wind pulled at all!


He was now walking, careless of everything...

.. WHEN, SUDDENLY....

... SOME EXPLOSIONS BROKE THE SILENCE !!

He rose his sight ...

... AND ...



[ATARU, SO JOYFUL] WOW, BENTEN CHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN !!!


In the sky of Tomobiki two notirous girls (in their usual skimpy clothes), in flight, were fighting among themselves.

Thanks to her natural superpowers Lamù was the most agile of Benten which, in response, with her jet-bike, outclassed the alien in speed.

Ataru didn't care at all that they were shooting at each other!

FATAL ERROR !!


[Ataru, screaming joyfully] HAPPY SETSUBUN BENTEN CHAN !! HAPPY SETSUBUN !! WAIT FOR ME, WAIT FOR MEEEEEEEEEEEE !!! HERE COME THE REINFORCEMENTS !!


He began to run (even though he knew that would never have achieved), now oblivious to the sensation of cold in my bones that still bothered him.


WHEN, SUDDENLY....

... Benten threw "something" against Lamù...

... totally missed the target...

... but that "something " fell to the ground...

... AND ...


KABOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM !!!


All of them fell down.

But when the cloud of dust clears, a cry of despair tore the air!


[YX] OH MY GOD, SAKURA !!! SAKURA !! SAKURAAAAAAAAAAAAA !!!

Ataru was nearby and, instinctively, racing to meet that "cry"...

... AND ...

[ATARU, SCREAMING LOST IN PANIC] YEHOHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGH !!

He was caught by a terrible panic attack: until then, during each "Setsubun party", Benten and Lamù challenged each other by firing soybeans with weapons similar to those used for soft-air tournament play.

Well, that time was not so.

IN FACT...

SAKURA WAS LYING ON THE GROUND, HORRIBLY DISEMBOWELED BY THE SHRAPNEL OF THE EXPLOSION !!

Tsubame was left miraculously unharmed but his face was stained with blood and other dark spots.
Bent on his knees, he was supporting the head and shoulders of Sakura that, meanwhile, moaned terribly.

[TSUBAME, WITH TREMBLING VOICE] D... DON'T DIE SAKURA, D... DON'T DIE !!
[Sakura, with trembling voice]Th.. the children, h.. HOW ARE THE CHILDRENS ?!?


The grenade thrown by Benten had opened a small crater in the street and had hurt many people!

Worse, some spots of blood on the walls surrounding what was left were people who were walking at that time.

[SAKURA, WITH WEAK VOICE] HOW.. ARE ... OUR... DAUGHTERS ?!?

Ataru felt himself monstrous at the moment: the twins of Sakura now had about 3 months of life, but until then, he never had time (or opportunity) to see them at least once.

But he understood immediately but he would not get another chance.

IN FACT ...

... ON ONE OF THOSE SPOTS OF BLOOD ON THE WALL WAS STUCK A PACIFIER...

... AND ON ANOTHERONE THERE WAS A LITTLE HAT!

PROBABLY THE BOMB HAD FALLEN IN THE STROLLER!


[Tsubame, same voice] An ambulance... c.. call an ambulance....
[XY, with sad voice] IT'S INUTILE, IT WON'T NEGER GET HERE IN TIME !!

Ataru was feeling himself like paralyzed and did not care whether because of fear or because of the shock!

[ATARU, LOST IN PANIC] WHAT ARE THEY DOING ?!? THEY'RE SHOOTING EACH OTHER WITH MUNITIONS OF WAR ?!?

He begun to ru, aimlessy !!

A SUDDEN PIECE OF LUCK !!

Benten was forced to glide to the street to avoid the blows that Lamù was shooting and Ataru, with a big jump, managed to fit in the saddle of his bike.
She was riding the bike with just one hand, with the other was holding a large caliber machine gun.

[BENTEN, WITH WORRIED VOICE] GET OUT YOU STUPID !!
[ATARU, SCREAMING] BENTEN, ARE YOU CRAZY ?!?
[BENTEN, WITH WORRIED VOICE] I SAID GET OUT!! DO YOU WANT THAT SHE KILL ME ?!?
[ATARU, SAME VOICE] YOU ARE KILLING HUNDREDS OF PEOPLE IN VAIN, DO YOU WANNA KILL ALSO LAMU' ?!?

[BENTEN, SAME VOICE] I MUST KILL HER !!! IF I DON'T DO IT, SHE WILL KILL ME !!

[ATARU, SAME VOICE] WHAT'S GOING ON ?!? LAMU' IS ALWAYS YOUR FAVORITE FRIEND, WHY YOU'VE TO KILL HER ?!?
[BENTEN, FURIOUS] GET OUT OF HEREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE !!!

With a daring maneuver Benten overthrew in flight her bike, so Ataru fell heavily to the ground.

He stood up in an instant: the situation was so desperate he had become numb to the pain!

Another piece of luck !!

(OR NOT ?!?)

Lamù, always chasing Benten in the air, glided to the street: in his right hand still challenged a large caliber gun

Ataru was able to grab her ankle.

[LAMU', LOST IN PANIC, SCREAMING] DARLING, WHAT ARE YOU DOING ?!? DO YOU WANNA THAT SHE KILLS ME ?!?
[ATARU, SCREAMING] THAT'S ENOUGH LAMU' !!! STOP TO SHOOT ON HER !! MOST OF ALL, WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON ?!?

[LAMU', STILL LOST IN PANIC] I MUST KILL HER !! IF I DON'T DO IT, SHE WILL KILL ME !!!

[Ataru, same situation] I SAID HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLD !! WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON TODAY ?!? DO YOU REALLY WANNA KILL YOU FAVORITE FRIENDS ?!?


A GREAT NOISE !!!


BENTEN WAS NOW IN FRONT OF THEM !!!


SOME SHOTS !!!


..
..
..

Ataru instinctively closed his eyes, but when he opened them realized with amazement that it had even a scratch!

[Ataru, so surprised] Hey, what happened ?!?

[LAMU', WITH TREMBLING VOICE] D.. DARLING.. ARE.. YOU ... ALL RIGHT ?!?



SHOCK !!!


ATARU TOOK A MOMENT TO UNDERSTAND WHY HE WASN'T DEAD !!!

IN FACT...

... Benten had shot right...

... BUT LAMU' HAD THROWN HERSELF IN FROT OF ATARU TO PROTECT HIM...


... AND SACRIFIED HERSELF TO HIS PLACE !!



Ataru immediately knelt down and took her by the hips and shoulders...

... and he immediately that the situation was hopeless!

[ATARU, SCREAMING OUT OF HIS SOUL] A DOCTOR !! CALL A DOCTOR !!! AN AMBULANCE !! AN HOSPITAL !! A.. A...

[XY, SUDDENLY APPEARED] I AM A DOCTOR BOY AND I CAN TELL YOU THAT THE GIRL IS A GONER !!

SHOCK !!!

[the doctor] Abdomen, liver, kidneys and pancreas were affected, MAYBE EVEN HAS AN INJURY TO THE SPINE!
PLUS, SHE'S BLEEDING SO MUCH!!

IT'S IMPOSSIBLE TO SAVE HER !!

IN THAT MEANTIME, LAMU' BEGUN TO SHAKE IN A TERRIBLE WAY !!

[Ataru, with trembling voice] L.. Lamù.. how are you ?!?
[Lamù, with scary trembling voice] I.. I'm so cold ... so cold.. SO MUCH COLD !!
[ATARU, SCREAMING DESPERATELY] A COVER !! GIVE ME A COVER !!!

Someone came and threw a bag made of hemp.

Meanwhile Benten landed, turned off the bike and ran to her friend.

Seeing her getting in that way, Ataru was seized with a fit of rage.

[ATARU, SCREAMING WITH WRATH] YOU DAMNED !! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE ?!?

[BENTEN, SCREAMING DESPERATELY] WE HAD NO CHOICE !!

[Ataru, so surprised] What ?!? Why ?

[Benten, with trembling voice]Among our planet a serious dispute broke out and were about to declare war, but at the last moment our governments have agreed to decide everything with a one-to-one duel to the death.

We have volunteered ourself along with many others, "so that we can prevent many deaths of our friends" we said.

A computer of a neutral country launched the fate to decide the ones who had to face ...


... AND THE LOT FELL ON US !!

[Lamù, with trembling voice]Th.. that's why.... I bear... no malice towards you, Benten....


... AND THAT'S WHY... I FORGIVE YOU !!

[Benten, with scared trebling voice] L.. Lamù.. I.. I...
[Lamù, with a little smile] HAVE A HAPPY SETSUBUN MY FRIEND !!

Benten burst into tears.

Ataru knew not what to say or what to do: he felt only that Lamù was shaking more and more (a sign that was bleeding quickly) and the heat of his body decreased second by second.

[Lamù, same voice] D.. darling...
[Ataru, still shocked] Nan-da ?!?

[LAMU'] M... MARRY ME !!! I... I WANNA BE... YOUR WIFE... ALMOST... ONE SECOND... OF MY LIFE !!

[ATARU, SCREAMING DESPERATELY] A PRIEST! A PRIEST! AN OFFICIAL! CALL SOMEONE WHO CAN GET US MARRIED NOW!


Someone pushed his way through the crowd around them.

[xy] I AM A PRITES !! I CAN MARRY YOU !!

HE knelt down at once.
Ataru didn't understand even what religion was, he cared only that did his duty.

[the priest]Boy, do you want to take this girl as your wife?!?
[Ataru, with clear voice] YES, I DO !!
[the priest]Girl, you want to take this guy as your husband?!?
If you cannot do enough to talk you can close and open your eyes.

Lamù took a moment to close them....

... made a terrible effort to reopen ...

... BUT DIT IT !

[The priest] <<IN ARTICULO MORTIS>> I PRONONCE YOU HUSBAND AND WIFE !!

[Ataru, with embarassed trembling voice]L.. Lamù, did you hear? N... now we are husband and wife! Th... this will make you feel better, right?!? Is not what you've always wanted?!? So what better way to heal that have become my wife?

LAMU' WAS SMILING....

... BUT HER EYES WERE STRANGE !!

[Ataru, crying and trembling] L.. Lamù.. wh... what's going on ?!?

At that moment he remembered where and when he saw those scary eyes open but dry [/u][/url]!
He shook her a bit.

[Ataru, crying and lost in panic] L... Lamù.. Lamù, are.. are you hearing me ?!? [now screaming] DAMNED ALIEN, NOW YOU ARE MY WIFE !! [SCREAMING OUT OF HER SOUL] YOU CANNOT DIE RIGHT NOW THAT YOU'VE BECOME MY WIFE !!!

Inutile !!

She didn't fell him anymore !!


[ATARU, SCREAMING OUT OF HER SOUL] LAMU' !! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO !!!

Still hugging her he burst into tears and even the people around him could not hold back his emotion...

... THEN HE LOOKED UP TO BENTEN !

[ATARU, SAME SITUATION] WHAT DID YOU DO ?!? WHAT DID YOU DO ?!? WHAT DID YOU DOOOOOOOOOOOOOO ?!?

Benten could not understand anything.
She was shaking like a leaf and moaning something incomprehensible.

[ATARU, SAME SITUATION] WHAT DID YOU DOOOOOOOOOOOOOO ?!?

A FAST MOVE...

... BENTEN PUT HER GUN TO HER HEAD...

... PULLED THE TRIGGER...

... AND DEATH KIDNAPPED HER TOO !!

Ataru could not even feel sorry, so much was so upset.

He was quite impressed by the fact that the smile of Lamù (that smile that had accompanied her for life) was now extinguished forever, transformed into a grotesque grimace and, above all, felt with horror that her body was becoming cold as a any other piece of metal.

But then, suddenly, everything stopped terrorize ...

... BECAUSE HE UNDERSTOOD THAT HE WOULD NOT SEE HER ANYMORE !!

[Ataru, crying desperately]Oh hy God... what have I done!
I...I have always betrayed [sigh], I made her cry [sigh], I have disappointed her [sigh] and every day and [sniff] she has never left me ...[sigh] and now [sigh] ... now that [sigh] now that I finally got married [sniff]... I BECAME A WIDOWER !!! WAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH !!!

AN EVIL LAUGHT RIPPED THAT INNATURAL SILECE!!!

[ATARU, SCREAMING WITH WRATH] WHO DARE TO LAUGHT RIGHT NOW ?!?

A huge black figure made his way through the crowd that, terrified, opened to pass it as the water of the Red Sea.

[ATARU, SCREAMING WITH WRATH] YOU DAMNED, WHY YOU'RE BACK ?!? WHO ARE YOU ?!? WHAT DO YOU WANNA FROM ME ?!? AND WHY YOU'RE LAUGHING AT MY SORROWS ?!?

[<<THE BLACK FIGURE>>, among the laughts, with evil voice] MOROBOSHI, HOW MUCH ARE DEEP THE DEPTH OF DESPAIR ?!?


[To be continued]
« Last Edit: February 27, 2011, 11:58:11 PM by GiovaneDinamitardo »

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Re: THE 7th HALLUCINATION
« Reply #3 on: February 28, 2011, 10:24:48 PM »
Cheerful as usual... XP

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Re: THE 7th HALLUCINATION
« Reply #4 on: March 12, 2011, 11:47:37 PM »
URUSEI YATSURA, THE UNOFFICIAL 10TH SEASON[/b][/color] (click on this link to read the whole plot of this saga).

"THE 7th HALLUCINATION" [/size]

CHAPTER THREE: THE UNBEARABLE NOISE OF SILENCE!![/size]


[Ataru, with trembling voice, crying] Lamù.... [sigh] ... Lamù.... [sigh]....

Ataru was still weeping bitterly, thinking of holding in his arms the body without life of Lamù...

... WHEN, SUDDENLY...

[crow, squeaking] 'AAAAAAAAAA'y !!

[Ataru, so surprised] N... nan-da ?!?

He opened his eyes...

... AND ...


SHOCK !!!

[Ataru, so much shocked] W.... WHAT IS MEANS THIS ?!?


Not only the body of Lamù had disappeared into thin air....


.. BUT ALL OF HUMAN CIVILIZAION HAD VANISHED WITHOUT A TRACE !!

IN FACT...

... he stood up...

... wiped his tears...

... and looked around carefully...

... BUT COULD SEE JUST A VAST EXPANSE OF ASH !!


[Ataru, lost in panic] W.. WHAT HAPPENED TO THE CITY ?!?

Above his head a black crow continued to twirl

[crow, squeaking] 'RRRRRRRRRRRRRROUUUUUUU' !!!

[Ataru, screaming desperately] HEY, CAN YOU TELL ME WHAT HAPPENED ?!?

[crow, squeaking]  'AAAAAAAAAAAAAARK !!

A quick shot of the wings and he desappeared away.

Still bent on his knees Ataru tried to look around but saw nothing but ashes: if there once was a part of the city of Tokyo, now there was absolutely nothing that would witness the grandeur and splendor of the metropolis.

It was not left one stone upon another!

Rising, Ataru took a great breath...

... looked around ...

... AND A HUGE FEAR CAME UPON HIM !!

[ATARU, LOST IN PANIC] OH MY GOD, MAYBE AN ATOMIC BOMB EXPLODED?!? SO .. NOW I COULD BE EXPOSED TO RADIATIONS ?!?


In a panic began to run (holding up a fuss) seeking for a shelter but stopped soon...

... BECAUSE HE REALIZED THAT NOTHING WAS LEFT STANDING !!

A desperate scream.

[Ataru, screaming] HEY, IS ANYONE HERE ?!?

No answers.

[Ataru, screaming] HEY !! HEY !! COME OUT !! COME OUUUUUT !! IT'S NO POSSIBLE THAT YOU'RE MISSING EVERYONE !!

Shouted the same phrase several times but nothing and no one answered.

Rather, he noticed one thing: a deafening silence had fallen all around (not even the wind was blowing and it all seemed part of a grotesque picture hanging on a wall, he remained a prisoner!).

[Ataru, screaming] COME OUT !! COME OUUUUUT !!

No answers, not even the echo of his voice !!

He raised the eyes to the sky but saw just a few clouds.

Everything was gone: houses, roads, trees, cars, animals and humans, could neither see nor hear any living being all around!

[Ataru, now rather crying] W... what [sigh] what happened? [sigh] where are everybody ?!? [sigh]

He wanted to scream again but, suddenly, realized one thing.

HE WAS THIRSTY !!

The throat ached and burned, his tongue was dry but there was absolutely nothing to drink nearby!

NOTHING TO DRINK OR EAT !!

An even bigger fear came upon him.

[Ataru, lost in panic] Oh my God ! OH-MY-GOD !! HOW LONG I CAN RESIST ?!?

He tried to take some steps.

Strange contradiction: the temperature was high but Ataru felt chills and cold inside his bones and, above all, the thirst was being transformed from a basic need to torment!

Some time ago he found himself in a similar situation but had the consolation of a column of smoke rising from the horizon: following it as a bush he was able to get to the prison camp (where he served one hundred years of solitude!).

This time there was absolutely nothing that could comfort him.

More, the silence that enveloped him had indefinitely multiplied the fear: that terrible feeling became deafening !


[ATARU, SCREAMING DESPERATELY] THAT'S ENOUGH !! ENOUGH IS ENOUGH !!! COME OUUUUUUUUUUUUUUT !!!


No answers.

The sun was rising on the horizon and, with him, thirst increased every moment.

Ataru, now a prey to despair, went where once there was the sea: probably would drink even a glass of oil (if only he could find!) just to appease the thirst.

But when he passed a small hill ...

... SHOCK !!

THE SEA WAS NO MORE !!


In its place there was an immense, smelly swamp of a dark color, that would make anyone cringe just seeing it!

At that moment he knew what awaited him.

THE SLOW DEATH !!

Nothing and no one would have relieved the torture.

Ataru found no better way to make a small hole in the ash and get inside, then closed his eyes, just waiting for the end.

The day went by with unutterable slowness: no birds were flying in the sky, everywhere didn't even hear the hum of an insect.

A livid night descended on the area, the full moon visible through the clouds was gloomy and terrible at the same time.

... WHEN, SUDDENLY...

[ATARU, LOST IN PANIC] H... HEY, WHO IS THERE ?!?

A LAMENT

A KIND OF LOUD AND DEEP LAMENT !!!

[Ataru, same situation] WHO IS THERE ?!? WHO IS THERE ?!?

[**] Wooooooooooooodaaaaaaaaa aaaaa !!! Wooooooooooooodaaaaaaaaa aaaaa !!!
Wooooooooooooodaaaaaaaaa aaaaa !!! Wooooooooooooodaaaaaaaaa aaaaa


That low and loud moan had absolutely nothing of human.

It meant that something had survived the cataclysm that devastated Tokyo...

... but no doubt that that something had to be scary!

[Ataru, with trembling voice] W.. where are you ?!? WHO ARE YOU ?!? D.. don't be afraid of me, I.. I am a friend !!

[**] Wooooooooooooodaaaaaaaaa aaaaa !!! Wooooooooooooodaaaaaaaaa aaaaa !!!
Wooooooooooooodaaaaaaaaa aaaaa !!! Wooooooooooooodaaaaaaaaa aaaaa


In the beginning there was only one, but shortly thereafter, began to multiply: ten, hundred, thousand, million moans rose from the sea of sand.

Ataru covered his ears with his hands but it was no use: that chilling sound penetrated deeply into his head....

... WHEN, SUDDENLY..


[ATARU, LOST IN PANIC] YEHOHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA ARGH !!!



SHOCK !!


A HUGE NUMBER OF SHADOWS AROSE FROM THE ASHES !


The moonlight was partially obscured by clouds, it was not clear who or what were these beings: Ataru barely distinguish their contour but what he saw was not at all reassuring.

Any being had a huge body, maybe 2 meters tall and more, very long arms and fingers and, most of all, eyes that did not promise anything good.

[Ataru, with trembling voice] W... what do you want from me ?!?

Few moments....

... AND ...

[ATARU, LOST IN PANIC] YEHOHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA ARGH !!!


TWO OF THEM BIT ATARU ON HIS FOREARMS, ANOTHERONE DID THE SAME ON THE LEFT LEG....


... AND THE OTHERS WERE READY TO ATTACK HIM...


... WHEN, SUDDENLY....



.... EVERYTHING DISAPPEARED !!!

Ataru didn't know if that was the case breathe a sigh of relief or no: didn't understand why those shadows had retreated but was suddenly aware that nothing or no one would help him if those were returning to attack.

But he noticed one thing: the clouds that obscured the Moon had completely thinned out and the satellite now shining in the sky in its highest form.

"Maybe the things they fear the light, " was his thought.

Despite everything, he didn't sleep for the rest of the night: even if he was striving constantly stretched his ears to listen if could hear them moan again but in vain: did not happen no more.

He noted, however, a couple of strange things: first one that thirst was gone to hell shot but, at the same time, felt a tingling on the left leg.

Late at night, overcome by fatigue, fell asleep.

But as soon as the Sun arose...


[ATARU, LOST IN PANIC] YEHOHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGH !!!


... NOTICED THAT HIS LEFT LEG AND HIS ARMS WERE BECOMING A STONE !!

He also felt something terrible, almost like a tiny drill that was running into his veins from the inside: what ensued was like a torture done with a huge red-hot needle.

[Ataru, same feeling] P.. POISONED !! I WAS POISONED !!!

He tried to do some steps...

... invain: the leg and the arms have become "heavy"...

... plus, more the time passed more the transformation in his body expanded.

Lost all hope to survival, Ataru re-began to scream desperately.

[Ataru, screaming] HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELP !!! HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELP !!! SOMEONE HAVE POISONED MEEEEEEEEEEEEEE !! HEEEEEEEEEEEELP !! HEEEEEEEEEEEEEELP !!

No answers, not even heard the gentle sound of the wind.

In exchange, the sun was burning more and more.

Without any possibility of repair of Ataru stretched back into its hole, occasionally lifting his tee, peering in horror to what extent the poison in his body was penetrating.
 
When the sunset began an even bigger panic terror came upon him perhaps the shadows would have returned to the attack that night?!?


WAS IN THAT MOMENT THAT A LOUD, EVIL LAUGH RIPPED THAT LARGE SILENCE !!

Hearing it, Ataru got furious.

[Ataru, now screaming with wrath] THAT'S ENOUGH !! WHERE ARE YOU ?!? WHO ARE YOU ? WHAT THE HELL DO YOU WANNA FROM ME ?

The laughters did not diminish at all.

AND, FINALLY THAT DARK FIGURE OVERLOOKED ON THE SCENE !!

the Sun was setting just behind that figure and Ataru, partially blinded, could vaguely discern the outlines ...

... BUT IT WAS ENOUGH TO TAKE THE AIM ...

... and, despite a large part of his body turned to stone, flung himself against his opponent

[Ataru, same situation] YOU DAMNED: IF REALLY I'VE TO BURN IN HELL I'LL TAKE YOU WITH ME !!!

[<<THE FIGURE>>, with evil voice] You little stupid, you don't understand that you cannot compete with me?



A FAST MOVE OF THE "FIGURE"....


... AND ....





SHOCK !!


From that body undefined something that looked like an arm stretched so monstrously abnormal...

... grabbed him by the throat...

... began to strangle him...

... and raised him a couple of feet off the ground.

[Ataru, unbreathing, with a faint voice] You... damned... what... are... you ... waiting... for ? Kill.... me.... quickly...


ANOTHER EVIL LAUGH...


[<<THE FIGURE>>, same voice] NO ! I HATE THE PAINLESS DEATH !!


Another fast move...


.... AND ....


... FROM THAT ARM A DOZEN OF SNAKES CAME OUT AND EVERYONE BITE HIM ON HIS ABDOMEN, RAISING HIM YET FURTHER FROM THE FLOOR !!



Ataru was now screaming out in pain



[<<THE BLACK FIGURE>>, among the laughts, with evil voice] COME ON MOROBOSHI, SAY TO ME: HOW MUCH ARE DEEP THE DEPTH OF DESPAIR ?!?

[Ataru, in a faint voice] If.. I .. tell.. you.. then.. you.. will.. leave.. me.. in .. peace ?!?


[To be continued]
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Re: THE 7th HALLUCINATION
« Reply #5 on: March 20, 2011, 11:33:26 PM »
URUSEI YATSURA, THE UNOFFICIAL 10TH SEASON[/b][/color] (click on this link to read the whole plot of this saga).

"THE 7th HALLUCINATION"

CHAPTER FOUR: HIROSHIMA MON AMOUR !![/size]


[Ataru, with trembling voice, crying] P... please... l.. leave me... alone...

[XY, SCREAMING] KEEP HARD, SOLDIER, KEEP HARD: YOU CANNOT DIE RIGHT NOW !! I JUST REMOVED ALL OF THE SPLINTERS !!
[Ataru, so shocked] N.. nan-da ?!?

Ataru opened a bit his eyes...

... AND ...

... FOUND HIMSELF LAYING ON A WOODEN TABLE !!

In front of him had a doctor that was just bandaging him on the abdomen: his alb (maybe one time was white !!) was smeared with blood in several places, as well as the mask.

[Ataru, still shocked] Hey, what the fool...
[doctor, with clear voice] It's a good thing that you forget what happened to you, soldier: you're really having a bad.
[Ataru, still confused] W.. wait for a while: WHY YOU CALL ME <<SOLDIER>> ?!?
[doctor, same voice] You had no rank on your uniform, if you have the patent of officer is the right time to show it: I'll take you now in hospital ward reserved for them.

Still confused, Ataru stood up (not without pain: his belly made​him an evil of hell!), looked around...

... AND ...


SHOCK !!

AROUND HIM WERE LAYING DOZEN AND DOZEN OF SOLDIERS, ONE OF THE OTHER MORE HORRIBLY WONDED !!


[Ataru, lost in panic, with trembling voice] W... where I am ?
[Doctor, with clear voice] Soldier, really you don't remember anything ? Neither your name ?
[Ataru, same situation] M... "my name" ?!? I.. I am Ataru Moroboshi but... what I'm doing here ?!?
[Doctor, same voice] Mmmmmh, I think that the explosions must have created a temporary amnesia.
[A NURSE, SCREAMING] DOCTOR, IF YOU HAVE FINISHED COME HERE: WE REALLY NEED YOUR HELP !!
[Doctor, same voice] Danm ! [now screaming] HEY YOU: LISTEN TO ME, BECAUSE I WON'T REPEAT !! ASK FOR SHIKISHIMA MARSHAL IN THE BUILDING IN FRONT OF THIS AND SAY TO HIM THAT YOU JUST HAD A WOUND ON YOUR CHEST AND ALSO AN AMNESIA: HE'LL WRITE A JUSTIFICATION THAT YOU COULD SHOW TO YOUR OFFICIERS, OTHERWISE YOU MAY BE PASSED TO ARMS AS A DESERTER !

Ataru didn't need to repeat twice and turned down travel the corridor, trying not to see what was happening around him, because everywhere there were soldiers mangled in a horrible wailing, moanding and screaming out in pain.

In the end he arrived in the courtyard of the building...

... AND ...


DEEP SHOCK !!!


It was filled with soldiers, lying on the floor, screaming, wailing and praying for an help, some water, an injection of morphine or (perhaps) only an honorable, quick and painless death !!

Ataru put his hands on his head and begun to moan and to cry due to the horror, he could no longer speak.

Totally lost in panic forgot everything that had just been told and run away out, just to avoid to see once again that hospital (an authentic circle of hell !!)...

... AND ...


HORROR !!

<<OUTSIDE>> THE SITUATION WAS EVEN WORSE !!


Wherever he looked could see only ruins, fragments of buildings, bodies mangled horribly, pieces of human limbs and, most of all, old men, women and children wandering (lost and desperate) in the wilderness, desperately looking for some survivors.

[xy] HEY, LITTLE KID, ARE YOU ALL RIGHT ?!?
[Ataru, still lost in painc, with trembling voice] W.. what happened ?
[xy, with wrath] Those damn cowards dropped again incendiary bombs on the city, knowing full well that the wooden houses have caught fire as a box of matches!
Kato, you damned, you animals without honor: you are so coward that refuse to go head-to-face but, sheltered in their accursed Flying Fortress, made a massacre of women and children



AT LEAST ATARU REALIZED THE SITUATION !!


[Ataru, mumbling to himself] TH.. THIS IS THE SECOND WORLD WAR !!


SUDDENLY....


[XX, SCREAMING DESPERATELY] DARLIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIING !!!

He turned a bit...

.... AND ...


... GOT AN UNEXPESCTED, BREATHTAKING HUG !!

Ataru could not believe his ears but, finally, found enough courage to open his eyes...

... AND...


[ATARU, JOYFULLY SHOCKED] LAMU', ARE YOU STILL ALIVE ?!?

[Lamù, still hugging him, crying so much] Oh darlig [sigh] you're alive [sigh], you're alive and kicking [sigh] you're alive and [sigh] and, most of all [sniff]... YOU'RE STILL ONE PIECE !!! WAAAAAAAAAH !!! [sigh ! sigh ! sigh ! sigh ! ]

Ataru this time really did not understand anything, what was going on?

He jumped back in the time?
Or had traveled between dimensions?
Or what else?

In principle Lamù appeared as an ogre hungry for human flesh, then died in his arms, then was gone and now she was again alive and well.

After a while of time Ataru managed to free herself from that infinite embrace.
Strange: Lamù was not wearing her "classic" bikini but a (poor) kimono, worn and faded.

[Ataru, with trembling voice] L... Lamù, w... what happened ? What's going on ?
[Lamù, so worried] OH MY GOD, DARLING, YOU REALLY ARE NOT HEALED FROM YOUR AMNESIA ?!?

[XX, WITH WRATH] I THINK HE'S PRETENDING IN THE MOST DISGUSTING WAY POSSIBLE !!
[Lamù, now angry] BENTEN, WHAT THE FOOL ARE YOU SAYING ?!?

EVEN BENTEN WAS ALIVE TOO....

... and she was wearing a kimono too (in the same conditions of the one of her friend).

[Benten, with wrath] Ataru, you damn coward, tell me: how did you get hurt in the head if now it's more than three years that you're rusting in Taiwan, where nobody has not heard a single shot since the war began?!?
[Ataru, blinking his little eyes] T... <<TAIWAN>> ?!? REALLY I WAS IN TAIWAN ?!?
[Lamù, getting nervous] Hold Benten, look: he really doens't remember anything !!
[Benten, same voice] Say that, in that way, avoided to be transferred to Iwo Jima. [now screaming] PITY THAT NOONE CARED THAT KANEDA WAS HAVING THE FEVER WHEN THEY KNOCKED HIM ON THAT DAMNED PLANE !!
[Ataru, same situation] <<Iwo Jima>> ?!?  [now with clear voice] But it is not the place where someone shot that notorious picture in which the Marines raise the "stars and stripe"'s flag on Mount Suribachi?

SLAP !!

[Lamù, furious] BENTEN, THIS IS TOO MUCH !!
[BENTEN, FURIOUS TOO] I DO NOT ALLOW ANYBODY TO INSULT THE BRAVE DEFENDERS OF IWO JIMA !! Thanks to their sacrifice we will turn the tide of war !!
[Ataru, still confused] Benten but ... really you don't know our history? Iwo Jima has been won by the Americans but, more importantly, NO JAPANESE SOLDIER SURVIVED THE DEFEAT !!

SLAP !! SLAP !! SLAP !! SLAP !! SLAP !! SLAP !! SLAP !! SLAP !!

If it was not for the immediate intervention of Lamù, Benten probably would have continued to slap Ataru until his death!

[Lamù, now holding Benten, still furious] BENTEN, THAT'S ENOUUUUUUUUGH !!

Benten collapsed to the ground, crying so much.

[Benten, crying desperately] He's not dead .. [sigh] he's not dead.. [sigh] I.. I feel it.. [sigh] I feel it deep inside of me... [sigh] he's not dead..[sigh ! sigh ! sigh ! sigh ! ]

Lamù leaned over her and gently helped her to get up.

[Lamù, now with gentle voice] Benten, really you still believe in what you say the propaganda?
[Benten, still crying] I... [sigh] I just know that [sigh] if Kaneda stand.. [sigh] at Iwo Jima and .. [sigh] and if our troops keep hard at Okinawa [sigh] we will turn the tide of war.

[XX, WITH GENTLE VOICE] MY POOR FRIEND !!

[Ataru, so confused] OYUKI, ARE YOU HERE YOU TOO ?!?
[Lamù, with gentle voice] My friend, are you alone ? Where is Shutaro ?!?

Really strange: Oyuki too was wearing a poor kimono.

[Oyuki, with gentle voice] Titty leaved days ago too: he embarked on the battleship Yamato but, because he's an officier, was among the few to know that the fuel of our flagship is only sufficient for the journey! Their idea is to make it run aground near the beach and turn it into a fortress, so as to give support to the infantry.
[Ataru, with trembling voice] O... OYUKI, W.. WHAT ARE YOU SAYING ? YOU'VE TO KNOW THAT OUR FLAGSHIP YAMATO NEVER ARRIVED TO OKINAWA BECAUSE WAS SUNK BY THE AIR FORCE OF THE AMERICANS !!

SLAP !!

[Ataru, now so groggy] W.. why you're socking me ? I havn't even touched with a finger.
[OYUKI, FURIOUS] YOU DAMNED COWARD, YOU'RE PRETENDING AN AMNESIA BUT, AT THE SAME TIME, YOU ACT AS A PROPHET ?!?
[Lamù, furious too] Benten, Oyuki, what is the guilt that the accused, that he's still alive?

WAS IN THAT MOMENT THAT THE <<PEACE>> OF THE STREET WAS RIPPED BY THE SCREAM OF A GROUP O SOLDIERS !!

HEARING THEM, LAMU' GOT WORRIED !!

In that meantime, Oyuki and Benten runaway immediately, disappearing misteriously.

[Ataru, blinking his little eyes] Lamù, are you all right ?!?
[LAMU', TOTALLY RED IN FACE, with trembling voice] T.. TAKE ME AWAY, DARLING !! TAKE ME AWAY !!
[Ataru, same situation] Hey, don't worry: I WELL KNOW THEM !!

He was right .

They were a notorious group of friend...

... anyone of them weared the same uniform of Ataru...

... BUT THAT DAY THEY SEEMED STRANGLY DRUNK !!

[KAKUGARI, WITH DRUNK VOICE] Hey, look who's here !!
[CHIBI, DRUNK TOO] WOOOOOOW !! What a piece of luck !!
[PERMA, DRUNK TOO] HEY, LAMU': WHAT'S GOING ON ? ARE YOU STILL DRESSED AT THIS HOUR OF THE MORNING ?!?
[MEGANE, DRUNK TOO] DON'T WORRY, SHE HAS RECOGNIZED US ALL: NOW SHE STRIPS IMMEDIATELY !!!

HEARING THAT, LAMU' GOT FURIOUS...


... AND BEGUN TO THROW ON THEM SOME STONES ...

... but it didn't sacared them at all !!

[Kakugari, same situation] Ow ! Ow ! Hey, don't act like this !!
[Chibi, same situation] DON'T WORRY, SHE JUST WANNA PLAY !!
[Perma, same situation] IN FACT I'M GETTING EXCITED !!
[MEGANE, SAME VOICE] YOU'RE RIGHT: I LIKE HER MOST WHEN SHE PRETENDS TO RESIST !

HEARING THAT, ATARU GOT FURIOUS TOO...

... AND GRABBED WITH STRENGHT MEGANE ON HIS UNIFORM !!

[Ataru, with wrath] WHAT_THE_FOOL_HAVE_YOU_M ADE_UP_TO_DO_IN_YOUR_MIN D ?!?
[Megane, with a silly laught] Hi hi hi hi: THE SAME THAT WE DO EVERY NIGHT WITH HER !

ATARU DIN'T MADE ANY EFFORT OF FANTASY TO UNDERSTEAND WHAT HE MEANT !!!

BUT IN THAT MEANTIME...

... KAKUGARI, CHIBI AND PERMA GRABBED LAMU' HANDS AND FEETS...

... pinned her to the ground ...

... TORE OFF HER CLOTHES ...

... AND TRIED TO RAPE HER !!

Now Lamù was screaming in a terrible way, almost like a pig lead to the slaughterhouse, who refused to be butchered!

WAS IN THAT MOMENT THAT ATARU NOTICED A "SPECIAL KEY" !!

SHE HADN'T NO MORE HER LITTLE HORNS !!

IT MEANT THAT SHE WAS TOTALLY POWERLESS !!

HE GOT FURIOUS...

... BUT, MEANWHILE, MEGANE POINTED A GUN ON HIS NECK !!

[Megane, with COLD voice] Is also to save a coward like you that, tomorrow, we will crash on an aircraft carrier of that damned kato [NOW SCREAMING] SO LET US ENJOY "LIFE" ONE LAST TIME !!!
[Ataru, still with wrath] You bastards, if you don't stop to hurt her I'll denonce you all to the military police!

A silly laugh.

[Megane, with silly EVIL voice] WHAT DO YOU THINK THAT THEY CARE ABOUT WHAT ARE WE DOING WITH A PROSTITUTE ?!?

[Ataru, wiht trembling voice] Y... you mean that..
[MEGANE, SAME VOICE] THAT YOUR WIFE IS THE HOTTEST WHORE OF THE CITY AND ANYONE KNOWS IT !![/color]

Ataru wanted to respond but didn't know how to do...

... WHEN, SUDDENLY...

... A BLACK CROW TAPPED BRUTALLY MEGANE ON HIS RIGHT EYE !!

[Megane, screaming out in pain] AAAAAARGH !!! YOU DISGUSTING BEAST !!


[Crow, squeaking] AAAAAAAAAA'Y !! 'RRRRRRRRROOOOOOOOOU' !!! 'AAAAAARK !!

That moment was enough!

The fact that his (ex) friends were raping Lamù let out of his mind Ataru...

... who snatched the gun and Megane...

... pointed it with a sharp blow on his head...

... AND KILLED HIM INSTANTLY !!

Heard this, the other got up immediately...

... but with a blind fury (downloading at them all the bullets of the gun), Ataru killed them one by one.

Now was panting loudly (so shocked), still holding the weapon on his hands...

... but it throwed away when heard once again the cry of Lamù.

She was now laying to the ground, naked and full of bruises, crying desperately !!

Ataru dropped gently on her and covered her with the chemise of his uniform; she weared it immediately (it covered her enough).

[Ataru, still shocked] L.. Lamù, is the truth what they said ?!? REALLY YOU ARE A PROSTITUTE ?!?

She re-begun to cry, stronger.

[Lamù, crying desperately] WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH !!! FORGIVE ME, DARLING: FORGIVE ME !!! I HADN'T ANY OTHER CHOICE TO SURIVE !!! WAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH !
[Ataru, still in shock] What... what happened to you ?!?

[Lamù, still crying] Our house... [sigh] it doens't exist anymore [sigh]... everything went to hell.. [sigh]... and I... [sigh] ... I was starving... [sniff] I WAS REALLY STARVING [sigh]... no one gave me something to eat...[sigh]... for a while... [sigh] ... I worked ... [sigh] at Tsutomu Miyazaki's factory... [sigh] ... where we make the "Zero" aircraft for our air force... [sigh]... but ... [sigh] it has been bombed... [sigh].... I wasn't able to find any other kind of work.. [sniff]... the point is that... [sigh] that... [sigh] ... NO ONE HELP ANYMORE A POOR PAESANT GIRL HERE IN HIROSHIMA [sigh ! sigh ! sigh ! sigh ! sigh ! sigh !] !!


After that terrible confession Lamù expect a very different reaction...

... BUT ATARU GRABBED HER BY THE NECK OF THE CHEMISE AND STARTED TO SHAKE HER !!


[ATARU, SCREAMING DESPERATELY] WHAT DAY IS TODAY ?!?

[Lamù, blinking her large eyes] Sorry ?!?
[ATARU, SCREAMING DESPERATELY] WHAT DAY IS TODAY ?!?

[Lamù, with clear voice] DARLING, IT'S THE TWELFTH YEAR OF THE <<SHOWA ERA>>, TODAY IS AUGUST THE 6 !!

Ataru began to run desperately, dragging her with him.

[Lamù, so confused] gh.. gh.. D... darling, w.. where are you carrying me ?
[ATARU, SCREAMING DESPERATELY] RUN LAMU', RUN !! MAYBE WE ARE STILL IN TIME !!

WAS IN THAT MOMENT THAT THE ALARM SIRENS STARTED TO "SCREAM" !!

[ATARU, STILL SCREAMING] I SAID RUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN !!

Totally confused, Lamù stopped.

FATAL ERROR !!

[Lamù, with strange voice] Darling, are only two B52! how can you be afraid of only two planes?
[ATARU, SAME VOICE] DON'T STAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAD !! RUNAWAYYYYYYYYYYYY !!

[LAMU', SAME VOICE] W.... WOW, WHAT THAT BIG BOMB !! I CAN SEE IT TO THE NAKED EYE !
[ATARU, SAME VOICE] DON'T LOOOOOOOOOOOOOK !!! DON'T LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOK AT IIIIIIIIIIIIT !! GET DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWN !!


FLASH !!!

[LAMU'] AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGH !!!

Ataru had taken shelter behind the ruins of a wall that seemed made of concrete and, although kept his eyes tightly closed, seized the moment of lightning (that seemed to be made in many colors) but, at the same time,  heard the piercing cry of pain Lamù ...

... AND REALIZED THAT THE ATOMIC FLASH HAD BURNED THE RETINAS OF HER EYES !

[ATARU, STILL BLINDED, SCREAMING] LAMU', WHERE ARE YOU ?!?
[LAMU'] DARLING.... MY EYES....


KABOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM !!!


An endless wave made of wind for heat, debris, dust and shreds of human beings ...

... AND ATARU KNEW THE POWER OF A NUCLEAR EXPLOSION !!!


After a long time all ended...

... and an eerie silence "fell" over the city.

Incredible but true, for some mysterious miracle of physics that shelter didn't crashed so he got out...

... took a look at the sky...

.... AND ...

... SAW A CLOUD SHAPED LIKE A "MUSHROOM CLOUD" ABOVE THE CITY !!

But, in that moment, his main though was another.

[ATARU, SCREAMING WITH ALL HIS STRENGHTS] LAMU' !!! LAMU' !! WHERE ARE YOU ?!? WHERE ARE YOU ?!?

No answers.

He looked carefully all arond...


... AND ...


SHOCK !!

There was no trace anywhere of Lamù's body ...

... BUT ON THE WALL THAT HAD PROTECTED HIM, LIKE A GROTESQUE PHOTO, HAD BEEN "PRINTED" THE IMAGE OF HER SHADOW, CAUGHT WHEN THE ATOMIC BOMB EXPLODED !!

Ataru fell to his knees, his hands began to collect dust randomly, scattered on the ground.

The silence was so terrible that he could hear the (slight) noise of his tears that, falling down, they mixed in the ashes that was now (abundantly) to the ground.

[Ataru, crying] Lamù... [sigh] Lamù... [sigh]... w.. where are you? [sigh] .. what have they done ?!?


AN EVIL AND LOUD LAUGH, COMING FROM THE MUSHROOM CLOUD, RIPPED THAT SILENCE !!

Ataru rose his sight, furious.

[ATARU, FURIOUS] YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU !!!!



[<<THE VOICE>>, among the laughts, screaming with evil voice] YOU STILL HAVN'T ANSWERED TO ME, MOROBOSHI: HOW MUCH ARE DEEP THE DEPTH OF DESPAIR ?!?




[To be continued]
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Re: THE 7th HALLUCINATION
« Reply #6 on: March 21, 2011, 10:28:13 AM »
This is getting... way too sick to read  :-X

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Re: THE 7th HALLUCINATION
« Reply #7 on: March 21, 2011, 06:43:15 PM »
well i hope end is peaceful or happy... or shomething like that ^.^

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Re: THE 7th HALLUCINATION
« Reply #8 on: April 18, 2011, 12:10:07 AM »
URUSEI YATSURA, THE UNOFFICIAL 10TH SEASON[/b][/color] (click on this link to read the whole plot of this saga).

"THE 7th HALLUCINATION"

CHAPTER FIVE: THE WEIGH OF THE SINS !![/size]


[Ataru, groaning] Lamù.... [sigh] w.. what [sigh] what have they done ?!?

[A GENTLE VOICE] ARE YOU ALL RIGHT ?!?
[Ataru, so astonished] N.. nan-da ?

Ataru rose his sight a bit...

... AND FOUND HIMSELF BACK IN TOMOBIKI-CHO !!

He was in one of the central streets of the neighborhood: it seemed to be a strange day because, while the sun shines high in

the sky, few people were walking down the street.

He got up and wiped a little his clothing.

[XX, with genlte voice] So ?!? What have you done this time ?
[Ataru, still groggy] S.. sorry ?!?

In front of him was standing an elderly woman: was so thin and kept those that had been long hair (now completely gray)

collected; hands, arms and neck were consumed by old age (the legs were wisely kept hidden by a long, elegant skirt ) but the

features of the face could tell that at one time must have been a very pretty girl.

[XX, same voice] I bet you were running behind some girl who has dumped a bunch because you were annoying her, right ?
[Ataru, stil shattered] F... forgive me but.. but... y.. you seem to know me but.. I really don't remember about... about..
[XX, same voice] Hey, really you don't recognize me ? Yet we attended both at Tomobiki's high school (even though I was in a

different class).
[Ataru, blinking his little eyes]  R.. really ?!?
[XX, SAME VOICE] I WAS USED TO CALL YOU "DARLING" OF SPITE !!

SHOCK !!


[ATARU, SO MUCH SHOCKED] RAN ?!? Y.. YOU ARE RAN ?!?

[RAN, now so sad] [... sigh] Really have changed so much that you didn't recognize me anymore?!?

"TH.. THIS IS THE FUTURE ?", was the though of Ataru !!

[Ataru, still confused] R.. Ran, w.. what day is today ?!?
[Ran, same voice] Oh, well: it's...


KABOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM !!!

[Ataru, so scared] HEY, WHAT'S GOING ON ?!?
[RAN, LOST IN PANIC] OH MY GOD, THAT WITCH IS NOT SO FAR !!
[Ataru, back confused] S.. sorry ?!? <<THE WITCH>> ?!?
[RAN, STILL LOST IN PANIC] RUNAWAY, DARLING, RUN: MAYBE YOU'RE STILL IN TIME TO HIDE YOU !!

Ran took refuge in a dark alley and disappeared from view.

This time Ataru really don't understood nothing, knew only that something had exploded not far from him but didn't hear any

siren, nor the one of an ambulance nor that the fire service approaching.

He continued to walk on the street, apparently careless...

... but there was something strange on the air that day.

IN FACT...

... SOON ATARU NOTICED THAT EVERYBODY WERE LOOKING AT HIM AS IF WAS A <<RARE BEAST>> !!

For a moment he was afraid to be naked (as was the astonishment of the people staring at him) but looked good and saw

anything strange about him ...

... in case he realized other things: that terrible thirst had disappeared in the same way had arrived but still felt a sharp

pain in his arms and abdomen, and (most of all) that damned chill in the bones just didn't want to leave.


Not so far...


[XY, CRYING SO MUCH] WAHAAAAAAAH !! I'M REALLY TOUCHED !! YOU'VE SACRIFICED YOURSELF TO SAVE YOUR BELOVED FATHEEEEEEEEEEEEER

!! WAHAAAAAAAAAAH !!
[XX, SO MUCH ANGRY] YOU LIAR !! YOU TOOK ME THERE WITH TREASON !!


SHOCK !!!

This time the confusion had reached its peak.

IN FACT...


... IN FRONT OF ATARU FUJINAMI-SAN WAS ALIVE AND KICKING...

... BUT NOW RYUNOSUKE WAS RATHER AN OLD LADY !!

A short, desperate run !!

[FUJINAMI-SAN, crying in a silly way] WAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAH !!! MY BELOVED SOOOOOOOON !!! [sigh sigh sigh sigh sigh]
[Ryu, in a weak voice] gh.. gh.. I.. I've aged so much that I no longer have even the strength to get angry!
[Ataru, so shattered] RYU... Y... YOU'RE RYU, RIGHT ?!?
[Ryu, same weak voice] M.. Moroboshi, y... you won't never end to shock me.
[Ataru, same voice] W.. what have happened to you ?!?

[RYU, WITH WRATH] THAT DAMNED WITCH HAS IMPOSED US TO PAY ALL OUR BACK TAXES ALL AT ONCE !!

[Ataru, blinking his little eyes] S.. sorry ?!? <<Your back taxes>> ?!?
[Ryu, same voice] ATARU, YOU'RE STILL YOUNG !! Accept this suggestion from your friend of one time: HIDE YOURSELF BEFORE IS TOO LATE !!
[Ataru, still confused] W.. what's going on ?!? Why you're so aged ?!?

KABOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM !!!


[Ataru, lost in panic] HEY !! WHAT THE HELL...
[RYU, LOST IN PANIC TOO] I KNEW, THAT WITCH IS NOT SO FAR !! [NOW SCREAMING] RUNAWAY ATARU, RUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN !!!

Not only Ryunosuke but all the other people around them disappeared as soon as they heard the roar of the explosion.

Ataru was the only one who went (not without caution) to the place where he had been the fact: as he approached could

distinguish the tears of a woman...

... AND FINALLY...


SHOCK !!!

AN OLD LADY WAS KNEELING IN FRONT OF THE REMAINS OF SOMETHING THAT (maybe) WAS ONCE A HUMAN BEING !!
She was hiding her face with the hands.

[XX, CRYING DESPERATELY] Th.. this is unright.. [sigh] ... this [sigh]... this is an injustice... [sigh]... this is.. [sniff]

this is a cruelty... [sigh]

Ataru put genlty an hand on her shoulder.

[Ataru, with trembling voice] L.. Lady, w.. what the... [NOW LOST IN PANIC] YEHOHAAAAAAAAAAAAARGH !!!
[XX, still sad] Ataru, please, [sigh] don't act like this [sigh] REALLY I'M SO CHANGED ?!?
[Ataru, still lost in panic] W.. WHO ARE YOU ?!?
[XX, still sad] I am... well, I thik is better to say I WAS SHINOBU !! REALLY YOU DON'T RECOGNIZE ME ANYMORE ?!?

The point was that she was not "just" changed...

...THE POINT WAS THAT THE OLD AGE HAD DISTORTED HER FEATURES: NOTHING OF HER BEAUTY OF A TIME WAS STILL ON THE FACE !!

[Ataru, lost in panic] W.. what have happened to you ?!?
[Shinobu, still crying] We sacrificed both [sigh] to save our son [sigh] and we paid all our fees in arrears [sniff]: Inaba

died shortly (he was about 90 years old!) [sigh] and maybe [sniff] I wouldn't remain long to live but.. [sigh]... but [sigh]

... WE HOPE AT LEAST THAT KOKERU WAS SAVE... BUT.. [sigh sigh sigh sigh sigh sigh]

FINALLY ATARU REALIZED TWO IMPORTANT POINTS !!

The first one that the charred (still burnings) were those of a child...

.. THE SECOND THAT HE WAS THE ONLY YOUNG !!!

Seemed that the youth had disappeared everywhere, he could see only the faces and bodies of older people ...

... OR SOMEONE AGED TOO QUICKLY !!

[SHINOBU, NOW SCREAMING WITH WRATH] DAMNED WITCH: SOONER OR LATER YOU WILL PAY FOR ALL YOUR SINS !! [sigh sigh sigh sigh sigh

sigh]
[Ataru, blinking his little eyes] Shinobu, who's <<the witch>> ?!?

KABOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM !!!

[Ataru, back lost in panic] Sh.. Shinobu, w.. what are these explosions ?
[Sinobu, lost in panic too] IT'S BECAUSE OF THAT DAMNED WITCH !! SOMEONE IS NO MORE ABLE TO PAY HIS TAXES SO SHE INCINERATES THEM MERCILESSY !!
[Ataru, totally confused] I.. I don't understand anything...
[Shinobu, screaming desperately] RUNAWAY ATARU, RUNAWAY: WHAT IF THAT WITCH SEE YOU SHE WILL CONSUME YOU WITHOUT ANY REMORSE !!

She disappeared too into the crowd (made up exclusively of older people) that, meanwhile, had crowded around the (carbonized)

corpse of the child.

"To hide myself, but where?" was the though of Ataru.

A SUDDEN IDEA ...

... a great run...

... "Thanks God, it's always there" was his though...


... AND CAME BACK TO HIS <<OLD>> HOUSE !!

A gentle knocking on the main door....

... "someone" opened it ...


... AND ....


[MRS MOROBOSHI, SO SHOCKED] ATARU !! YOU STUPID, WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE ?!?
[Ataru, still confused] M.. mom !! Thanks God you're not changed at all !!

His mother grabbed him on his sweatshirt and dragged unceremoniously inside, then closed the main door with a great slam.

[Mrs Moroboshi, panting loudly] ATARU, YOU STUPID !! THIS IS THE WORST PLACE TO HIDE  !!
[Ataru, still confused] N.. nan-da ?!?
[Mrs Moroboshi, same conditions] THIS IS THE FIRST PLACE WHERE WILL LOOK FOR YOU THAT DAMNED WITCH !!
[Ataru, same conditions] M.. mom, who is "the witch" ?!?

[A WEAK VOICE, talking from another room] D... DEAR... OUR SON... HIS HERE ?!?

[Ataru, TOP confused] DADDY IS HERE TOO ?!?

She burst into tears

[Mrs Moroboshi, crying desperately] Your father [sigh] sacrificed himself [sigh] to save us all [sigh], but even now [sniff]

we arn't safe [sigh sigh sigh sigh]
[Ataru, same conditions] W.. what do you mean ?!? WHERE IS DADDY ?!?
[Mrs Moroboshi, still crying] He's on our bedroom but... but... [now crying loudly] PREPARE YOURSELF, HE'S ON HIS DEATHBED !

The door slided gently...

... AND ...


SHOCK !!!


Ataru could not stand the horror of the scene and covered his eyes.

Before him there was "something" that it wasn't clear whether was still a human being or something else: an old beyond all

imagination devastated physical and human features, so now his father (who was panting loudly) was more like a skeleton

rather than to a body.

[Ataru, lost in panic, with trembling voice] W.. what happened to him ?!?
[Mrs Moroboshi, still crying] Your father took over him all of our taxes. NOW HE HAS ABOUT 130 YEARS !!


WAS IN THAT MOMENT THAT SOMEONE KNOCKED BRUTALLY TO THE MAIN DOOR !!


[Ataru, still lost in panic] HEY, WHO IS THERE ?!?
[MRS MOROBOSHI, LOST IN PANIC TOO] OH NO, THAT DAMNED WITCH IS HERE !!


An irrational rage seized Ataru that, with great strides, came back into the hallway...

... opened the main door...


SHOCK !!!

[XX, WITH SADIC VOICE] HELLOOOO !!
[MRS MOROBOSHI, SCREAMING WITH WRATH] DAMNED WITCH, WHAT DO YOU WANT MORE FROM US ?!?


[ATARU, SO MUCH SHOCKED] LAMU', YOU ARE "THE WITCH" ?!?


SLAP !!!

[Ataru, holding his cheek] W... what I did wrong ?!?
[LAMU', SO MUCH ANGRY] I DON'T ALLOW ANYONE TO OFFEND ME !!

As usual she was wearing only bikini and boots, however Ataru could not help but not notice a few things: that she was

accompanied by four robots (entirely the same as those made ??by Butler in their mansion)...

... and, above all, the sight of the alien was filled with contempt for everything around her.

[LAMU', STILL WITH SADIC VOICE] I see you are in arrears with the payment of your taxes!
[Ataru, now screaming] HEY, WHAT THE HELL OF "TAXES" I SHOULD PAY TO YOU ?!?

[LAMU', SAME VOICE] In which retreat you've lived so far?!? IT'S PART OF THE CONDITIONS OF PEACE THAT WE HAVE IMPOSED WHEN YOU LOST THE WAR AGAINST US!!

[Ataru, now with trembling voice] L.. <<Lost the war>> ?!? M.. mom, what she's saying ?
[Mrs Moroboshi, back crying] Ataru, you still havn't healed from your amnesia ?!?
[LAMU', SAME VOICE] THE POINT IS THAT EVERY SLAVE MUST PAY TO US HIS TAXES IMMEDIATELY !!


GREAT SHOCK !!!

Not only the look of the alien was terrible as ever before...

... but (even worse) IT SEEMED THAT LAMU' HAD NOT EVEN KNOWN HIM !!

[Ataru, now with EVIL voice] Apart from the fact that I AM THE ONE that don't allows you to turn to me in that tone, [NOW SCREAMING] WITH WHAT CURRENCY SHOULD I PAY TO YOU YOUR DAMNED TAXES ?!?

A terrible evil laugh.

[LAMU', WITH EVIL VOICE] EACH SLAVE IS OBLIGED TO IMMEDIATELY YIELD ME 50 YEARS OF LIFE !!

[Ataru, lost in panic] N.. nan-da ?!?
[Lamù, back sadic] ... more, you are very young: should not be difficult for you to pay the interest about what you haven't

yet paid.
[ATARU, NOW SCREAMING] AND WHAT WOULD YOU DO WITH 50 YEARS OF MY LIFE ?!?



[LAMU', SAME VOICE] Boy, I AM THE MOST BEAUTIFUL WOMAN OF THE UNIVERSE: I CANNOT GROW OLD !!


[Ataru, so shocked] N.. nan-da ?!?

The alien posed sexy for a while...

... but, at the same time, begun to fly slowly...

... TRYING TO TRAP ATARU ...

... but even him begun to move slowly ...

... TRYING TO FACE HER CONTINUOSLY !!

[LAMU', SAME VOICE] Look: have you never seen a wonderful girl like me ? I CANNOT ALLOW THAT MY BEAUTY DISAPPEARS.
[Ataru, now with cold voice] And is just for this reason that you're killing slowly thousands people ?
[Lamù, same voice] YOU_ARE_JUST_SLAVES, WHO_CARES_ABOUT_THE_LIFE _OF_THE_SLAVES ?
[Ataru, now with trembling voice] B... but y.. you killed th.. thousands people just for..

[Lamù, now with cold EVIL voice] I FEEL NO COMPASSION FOR THEM !!
[Ataru, now so shocked] S.. sorry ?!?
[LAMU', NOW SCREAMING] I REPEAT: I FEEL NO COMPASSION FOR THEM !!

Like a river, a blind rage filled the soul of Ataru (which moved closer to the stairs)

[Ataru, now with evil voice] I don't know what demon has gotten hold of you but if you believe that I will stand doing

nothing you're greatly mistaken.
[Lamù, back with evil voice too] Ooooooh: what you wanna do ?!?

A SUDDEN JUMP !!!

VOLS !!

ZAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAP !!


The lightning of the alien didn't hit the target: Ataru had already risen several steps.

[LAMU', SCREAMING WITH WRATH] YOU DAMNEEEEEEEEEED !! I WILL RIP YOUR HEART FROM THE CHEST WITH A SPOOOOOON !!

Ataru closed the door of his (old) bedroom behind him...

... this gave him some seconds of advantage...

... opened the wardrobe ...

... AND TOOK A LITTLE BOX ...

... but when, with lightning, Lamù destroyed the door, was forced to jump from window to escape her wrath.

He landed in the middle of the street...

... AND ...


.......... [WOW !!]

[ATARU, SO MUCH EXCITED] SAKURA SAAAAAAAAAAAAN !! THANKS GOD YOU'RE STILL YOUNG !! LET ME HUG YOUUUUUUUUUUU !!!


POW !!!

Knocked down (as usual) !!

Seeing that scene the alined landed on the street too and step so close to the priestess...

... who was wearing a strange kind of uniform...

... AND, BEHING A MANTLE, WAS HIDING "SOMETHING" !!

Flaunting a defiant security came in front to Lamù...

... in the meantime the four robots arranged two on his right and two to his left...

... AND LOADED THEIR WEAPONS !!

[Sakura, with EVIL voice] AS A FOUNDING MEMBER OF THE RESISTANCE OF THE FAR EAST I HAVE THE HONOR TO INFORM YOU THAT YOU HAVE BEEN SENTENCED TO DEATH FOR CRIMES AGAINST HUMANITY !
[Lamù, again with sadic voice] I don't know if you are aware that any lack of respect for the heir to the throne is considered an affront to all of our empire and, as such, shall be punished with death.

WAS IN THAT MOMENT THAT, THROUGHOUT, APPEARED A MULTITUDE OF PEOPLE...

... (Ataru recognized it, among others, Shutaro, Megane, Perm, and Chibi Kakugari)...

... AND EACH OF THEM WIELDED A KIND OF RPG GUN !!

[SAKURA, SCREAMING] THAT'S WHY WE ARE HERE TODAY !!
[SHUTARO, SCREAMING TOO] LISTEN EVERYBODY...
[SAKURA, SCREAMING] COME, BROTHERS...
[SHUTARO, SCREAMING] .... BROTHERS ...

[SAKURA, SCREAMING OUT OF HER SOUL] PRAY !!!


<<Pray>> !!


TERRIBLE AND SHORT WAY TO MEAN "RAISE HELL" !!


IN FACT...

... THE FIRE OF THE RPG GUNS WAS SO TIGHT AND INTENSE THAT THE ROBOTS WERE SOON REDUCED TO A MASS OF SCRAP METAL !!

Lamù tried to escape flying...

... BUT ...


SHOCK !!!


[LAMU', NOW LOST IN PANIC] H.. HEY, WHAT'S GOING ON ?!? WHY I CANNOT FLY ANYMORE ?!?
[ATARU, SCREAMING] DAMNED ALIEN, HAVE YOU FORGOTTEN ? WITH THIS RIBBON I CAN NEUTRALIZE YOUR POWERS !!

The alien had not noticed it, but during the confusion, Ataru had managed to tie around her horns a yellow ribbon.

NOW SHE WAS TOTALLY POWERLESS !!

A great mass of people began to surround her.

[Lamù, now with trembling voice] W.. what d.. do you wanna do to me ?!?

Sakura pushed her way in an authoritarian manner.

[Sakura, with EVIL voice] I HAVE DETAILED INSTRUCTIONS ON HOW TO HAVE YOUR DEATH PENALTY !

SHOCK !!!

[Ataru, now with trembling voice] W.. wait for a while: YOU REALLY WANNA EXECUTE HER ?!?
[Sakura, same voice] I'm not joking at all !!
[Ataru, same voice] H.. hey, hey: try to ratiocinate !! M.. maybe there is another way out instead of...

[SAKURA, SCREAMING OUT OF HER SOUL] YOU QUISLING !!

[ATARU, NOW LOST IN PANIC] W.. WAIT, WAIT !! TH.. THERE IS AN ERROR !! A MISCONCEPTION !! A.. A..

Inutile

Ataru was seized by many people, bound hand and foot and thrown to the ground.

Despite the uncomfortable position he could still see the terrible scene that unfolded before him.

IN FACT...

.... SAW MEGANE, PERMA, CHIBI AND KAKUGARI CRUCIFIED THE ALIEN ON THE GROUND, TYING HER HANDS AND FEET TO 4 RUNGS.

[Lamù, lost in panic, with trembling voice] W... WHAT WANNA DO TO ME ?
[SAKURA, WITH COLD EVIL VOICE] WE'LL MAKE YOU FEEL THE WEIGHT OF ALL YOUR SINS !!

Shutaro and other people arrived carrying what looked like a big metal door and lay it over her, making sure it was well

balanced.

THEN APPEARED AN IMMENSE CROWD OF PEOPLE !!

Each of them was very old, and maybe even no longer had the physical strength to lynch her...

... BUT WERE STILL ABLE TO TAKE WITH THEM SOME STONES...

... AND, ONE AFTER ONE, BEGAN TO RELEASE THEM OVER THE ALIEN !!


Lamù begun immediatly to scream !!

[LAMU', LOST IN PANIC, SCREAMING] NO !! NOOOOO !!! MERCY !! MERCY !! MERCYYYYYYYYYYY !!!

[Ataru, screaming with all of your strenghts] YOU DAMNED, HOOOOOOOOOOLD !! ARN'T YOU HEARING HER ?!? SHE'S ASKING FOR MERCY !
[Sakura, with COLD voice] NO MERCY FOR THE ONE WHO KILLED MILLIONS OF HUMAN BEINGS FOR A WHIM !!
[ATARU, STILL SCREAMING] YOU STUPID, IS NO LONGER PROFITABLE HOLD HER AS A HOSTAGE ?!?
[Sakura, now wondering] Mmmmmmmh..... let me think about...
[ATARU, SAME SITUATION] HURRY !! HURRYYYYY !! MOST OF ALL, SAY TO THAT PEOPLE TO STOP TO DOWNLOAD STONE ON HER !!
[Shutaro, with sadic silly voice] You really want to try to persuade them to stop?


Lamù realized that had no way of escape: every second that passed increased the weight of the stone downloaded on her relentlessly!


[Lamù, screaming desperately] MERCYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY !!


[ATARU, SAME SITUATION] ENOUGH !! ENOUUUUUUUUUUUGH !! THIS IS INHUMAN !! YOU CANNOT ALLOW SUCH A CRIME !!

[Lamù, screaming desperately] MERCYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY !!

[ATARU, SAME SITUATION] LAMU', SAY TO THEM THAT YOU'VE REPENTED OF ALL YOUR SINS AND CONVINCING YOUR FATHER RESTORE FREEDOM !
[LAMU', STILL SCREAMING] OK, OK !! I WILL DO ANYTHING FOR YOU !!
[SAKURA, STILL WITH COLD VOICE] IT'S TOO LATE TO REPENTE !!
[ATARU, SAME SITUATION] DON'T YOU THINK THAT MAYBE SHE KNOWS THE WAY TO GIVE YOU BACK THE YEARS THAT WERE YOU TORN?!?
[SHUTARO, STILL WITH COLD VOICE] Who will return to me my father, my mother and my sister Ryoko, all of them dead to satisfy her insatiable thirst for youth?

The pile of stones placed over the "plaque" that covered the alien was getting higher second by second...

... at the same time, her voice was getting weaker.

[Lamù, in a weak voice] M... mercy... mercy... I... cannot resist.. anymore...

Courage....

... wrath ...

... DESPERATION ...

...shouting in a terrible way, Ataru lifted himself from the ground, sending those who held him pressed against the ground

upside down, and rushed upon the heap of stones: he wanted to give it a shove, a push or whatever was in his power to move

more stones possible...

... but was forced to hold: all members of the resistance pulls on him their weapons.

[Ataru, with cold voice] You damned supids, really you don't understand ? [NOW SCREAMING] DO REALLY THINK TO START A WAR OF LIBERATION WITH YOUR ARMY OF OLD MEN ? IS NOT BETTER THAN SHE CAN GIVE BACK THE YOUTH TO MANY PEOPLE AS POSSIBLE ? MAYBE IN THIS WAY YOU COULD HAVE A CHANCE !!

[Sakura, now wondering] mmmmmh.... that's an interesting idea; Shutaro, what do you think about ?
[Shutaro, wondering too] Well....

WAS IN THAT MOMENT THAT A BLACK CROW APPEARED SUDDENLY OVER THE PILE OF STONE !!



[ATARU, SCREAMING LOST IN PANIC] NO, MY FRIEND: DON'T LAND THERE !!!



[The crow, squeaking] 'RRROOOOOOO' !! 'AAAAAAAAA'Y !! 'AAAAAAAAAAARK !!


HE LANDED ....



.... A TERRIBLE NOISE OF CRUSHED BONES...


.... AND A SPLASH OF HOT BLOOD BATHED THE FEET OF ATARU !!!


[SAKURA, WITH STRANGE SILLY VOICE] SORRY, WE REALLY HAVN'T THOUGHT AT THE CROW !!

A terrible laugh rose from all the crowd.

In that meantime, Ataru collapsed on his knees and, with his hands, fell into that pool of warm blood: it came out so much

that could feel distinctly the sound of his tears when fell into it.

WAS IN THAT MOMENT THAT, SUDDENLY, SOMEONE STOOD IN FRONT OF HIM !!

Ataru looked up and, despite that "being" was against the sun, recognized him immediately.


[ATARU, SCREAMING WITH WRATH] YOU DAMNED, WHY YOU RELENTLESSY ATTACKING ME ?!?

[<<THE BEING>>, WITH EVIL VOICE] because you still gave no answer to my question: HOW DEEP ARE THE DEPTHS OF DESPAIR?!?



[To be continued] 

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Re: THE 7th HALLUCINATION
« Reply #9 on: April 18, 2011, 01:33:00 PM »
And here we go again!
So much for a chapter in which Lum doesn't die in the most cruel way possible.
« Last Edit: April 18, 2011, 06:03:29 PM by raikuni »

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Re: THE 7th HALLUCINATION
« Reply #10 on: April 18, 2011, 08:47:18 PM »
This make me kind of sad...  [<<THE BEING>>, WITH EVIL VOICE] because you still gave no answer to my question: HOW DEEP ARE THE DEPTHS OF DESPAIR?!?
But i this made me think.
Is that "being" trying to make ataru understand something??? or something else maybe...

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Re: THE 7th HALLUCINATION
« Reply #11 on: April 22, 2011, 09:05:24 AM »
What a story !!

I cannot see in which way it will have an  happy end (if there will be one).

About what Abuel was saying, in my own opinion, even the crow has a kind of role: it appears for few seconds in any episode and caws the same 3 (incomprensible) words (even if in random way).

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Re: THE 7th HALLUCINATION
« Reply #12 on: April 23, 2011, 02:02:32 PM »
true... true...

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Re: THE 7th HALLUCINATION
« Reply #13 on: May 07, 2011, 03:15:51 PM »
URUSEI YATSURA, THE UNOFFICIAL 10TH SEASON[/b][/color] (click on this link to read

the whole plot of this saga).

"THE 7th HALLUCINATION"

CHAPTER SIX: A HAREM EXPLOSIVE [/size]


[Ataru, groaning] Lamù.... [sigh] w.. what [sigh] what have they done ?!?

[A GENTLE VOICE, SCREAMING HISTERICALLY] OH MY GOD, IS HE !!!

[Ataru, so surprised] N... nan-da ?!?

... Ataru turned a bit ...

... AND ...

.....
...
..


............ [WOW !!]

A PRETTY GIRL WAS JUST BEHIND HIM !!

[The girl, still in shock, with trembling voice] Y.. you.. you...

SEEING HER TROUBLED AND TREMBLING IN THAT WAY, A RED LED MEANING "SEX" TURNED INTO THE MIND OF ATARU[/size] ...

... AND ...

WOOOOOOOOHM !!![/size]


... few moments later he was already at her side: with his left hand was gently hugging her and with the right, in a comfortable way, begun to caress her heart.


..... [ehm] ....


... well, le'ts put it this way: the girl's dress was made of synthetic fibers were so ... [ehm] .. the hand of Ataru.... [A-HEM !!] <<slippered>> on the chest continuously !

[Ataru, with closed eyes and <<SERIOUS>> voice] Oh, my little baby SQUEEZE, SQUEEZE ![/size] Don't be afraid anymore PALP,

PALP !
[/size]: YOU'RE SAFE WITH ME SQUEEZE, SQUEEZE ![/size]
[The girl, so excited] S.. so you.. YOU REALLY ARE... YOU REALLY ARE ATARU MOROBOSHI ?!?
[Ataru, same situation] Of course: I AM THE ORIGINAL ONE !!

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH !!![/size]

THE GIRL HUGGED HIM IMMEDIATELY...

.. AND, WITH INCREDIBLE EROTIC SIGHT AND VOICE....

[The girl, with dreamy voice] I.. I ALWAYS DREAMED THIS MOMENT !!
[Ataru, getting excited] R.. REALLY ?!?

The girl closed sweetly her eyes...

... AND ...

[THE GIRL] GIVE ME A KISS !![/size]

"WOW: BACK HOME AT LEAST", was the (excited) though of Ataru.

But just as he was about to kiss on the mouth ...


RUMBLE !!!


... A REAL HERD OF GIRL (THE ONE MORE PRETTY THAN THE OTHER) SWEPT HIM !!!

Anyone begun to hug and caress him !!

[XX, so angry] YOU DAMNED, LEAVE HIM TO ME !!
[XX, so excited] NO, LEAVE HIM TO ME !
[XX, so excited too] NO, HE MUST HAVE A DATE WITH ME !!
[XX, so excited too] NO, WITH ME !!

"WOOOOOOOOOOOW", was the though of Ataru: "I knew that all this great effort to realize the new album would have been of some use: I've been through all sorts of troubles but.. but... FINALLY ALL THE GIRLS LOVE ME!"

AHEM !!!![/size]

Many of them began to unbutton the blouses ...

... and discovered the right shoulder.

[A girl, now so shy] J... just a question...
[Ataru, blinking his little eyes] About ?!?


[THE GIRL, NOW WITH TREMBLING VOICE] IF I HAVE A DATE WITH YOU, YOU WILL REMOVE THIS ONE FROM ME ?!?[/size]


Ataru didn't understand what she was referring to.

He strained his eyes...

... and saw a little tatoo like a small (grey) star on her right shoulder.

But when he tried to touch it ...


WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSH !!![/size]

A SUDDEN GUST OF WIND SWEEPPED THEM ALL AWAY !!!

[XX, with wrath] GET OUT YOU ALL, YOU SKIVVY !!

[Ataru, <<happly surprised>>] Hey but... I know this voice !!

The girl step out from the shadow...


... AND ...

[KURAMA, WITH HOT EROTIC VOICE] ATARU: WE MUST MAKE LOVE, HAVE YOU FORGOTTEN ?!?[/size]


POP !!!!!![/size]


ATARU RAISED HIS HANDS AND HEAD IN A REALLY FUNNY (AND STUPID!) WAY AND, AT THE SAME TIME, AN INTENSE SPRAY OF BLOOD CAME OUT FROM HIS NOSE!

[/size]

[Kurama, now so sad] Ataru, why you're standing there ? YOU DON'T LIKE ME ANYMORE ?!?

WOOOOOOOOHM !!![/size]

THE SECOND AWAY ATARU GRAB... [ehm]... <<HUGGED>> HER WITH HIS ARMS...

... AND BEGUN TO FEEL AND TO KISS HER ANYWERE ON HER BODY ...

[Ataru, excited at top] Oh, Kurama SMACK ! SMACK ! [/size] How can I SQUEEZE, SQUEEZE! [/size] forget your soft

PALP, PALP !
[/size]! and hot SQUEEZE, SQUEEZE! [/size] skin ?!? And your SMACK ! SMACK ! [/size] perfect PALP, PALP ! [/size]! body ?!?

[Kurama, now with trembling voice] J.. just promise me a thing.
[Ataru, blinking his little eyes] About ?

[KURAMA, SAME TREMBLING SAD VOICE] IF I MAKE LOVE WITH YOU, YOU WILL REMOVE THIS ONE FROM ME, WON'T YOU ?!?[/size]

Kurama was wearing her usual sexy outfits, so was not at all difficult to see what was on the right shoulder.

She also had a small star in the same place of the other girls seen earlier.

Ataru touched for a moment: it was not a tattoo, rather resembled a kind of piercing ...

... BUT WAS UNDER THE SKIN!

[Ataru, so surprised] What is this ?
[Kurama, so shocked] HEY, REALLY YOU DON'T REMEMBER ?
[Ataru, blinking his little eyes] What I should remember ?!?


KABOOOOOOOOOOOOM !!![/size]

A SUDDEN EXPLOSION !!

When the cloud made of dust disappeared Ataru understood that Kurama fled away...

... BUT NOW OVERLOOKED IN THE SCENE ANOTHER PRETTY GIRL !!

IN FACT ...



[XX, WITH SWEET VOICE] OH, ATARU: WHY YOU WASTE TIME WITH HER ?!? YOU KNOW THAT I LOVE YOU SO MUCH MORE THAN THAT STRANGE KIND OF CROW !!

[/size]

............... [WOW !!]

Ataru did a great jump to "reach" her ..

[ATARU, EXCITED AT TOP] RYOKO CHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN !!!

A GREAT.... [ehm].... "EROTIC" HUG !!!

[Ataru, still excited at top] Oh, Ryoko SMACK ! SMACK ! [/size] I knew that SQUEEZE, SQUEEZE! [/size] in the deep of your heart PALP, PALP ! [/size]! you always SQUEEZE, SQUEEZE! [/size] loved me [smack ! smack] LET ME UNDRESS YOU PALP, PALP ! [/size] !!!


OOOOOOOOOOOOOOH !!![/size]

She didn't oppose any resistence...

.. so Ataru unzipped her long and elegant long dress...

... (it felt on the ground with a light, exciting noise)...

... AND ...


POP !!!!!![/size] !!

Once bitten raised his hands and head in a really funny (and stupid!) way and, at the same time, an intense spray of blood came out from the nose!

Ataru was right to be excited.

IN FACT...

... NOW RYOKO WAS WEARING A JUST PANTIES AND BRA !![/size]


But when he begun to unlace the... [... A-hem ...] ... <<the upper floor>>...


[RYOKO, NOW RATHER CRYING] Ataru.. [sigh] please... [sigh] DON'T FORGET THAT [sigh] AFTER THAT YOU'LL END [sigh] YOU SHOULD REMOVE THIS ONE [sigh] FROM ME !! [/size]


Mmmmmmh...


EVEN RYOKO HAD THE SAME "PIERCING" OF THE OTHERS !!

Ataru now began to get troubled: the thing that united all those girls were, precisely, that little star and the poignant plea to free them from that mysterious thing.

He touched it for a moment: it was gray and shiny as the veils of aluminum used in the kitchen but had the consistency of a small metal plate.

[Ataru, now with curious voice]Ryoko, I never thought you'd made a piercing.
[RYOKO, SAME VOICE] TR.. TRUTHFULLY... [sigh] TH.. THIS [sigh] IS NOT AT ALL A PERCING !!
[Ataru, blinking again his little eyes] So what is it ?


RRRRRRRRUUUUUUUUUMBLEEEEEEEEEEE !![/size]

A GIANT CLOUD OF DUST WAS COMING TO HIM WITH GREAT SPEED !!

Under his feet the ground began to tremble.



[Ataru, now scared] OH MY GOD, WHAT IS THIS: AN EARTHQUAKE ?!?


AND WHEN IT CAME REALLY SO CLOSE TO HIM...


[***, SCREAMING] WOOOOOOOOOOW !!! WE FINALLY FOUND YOU !!!


From a distance it could really be mistaken for a tsunami...

... but as soon as the dust cloud dissipated ...


OOOOOOOOOOOOOOH !![/size]


APPEARED A HUGE NUMBER OF GIRLS (AND ALL OF THEM WERE REALLY NICE!)

[A girl, so excited] I wanna an autograph !
[A girl, so excited] I wanna one of your photo !
[A girl, so excited] I WANNA HAVE A DATE WITH YOU !!
[A girl, so excited] I WANNA SPEND THE NIGHT WITH YOU !!
[A girl, so excited] I WANNA MAKE LOVE WITH YOU !!


POP !!!!!![/size] !!!


IF IT WERE NOT ATARU, ANY OTHER HUMAN BEING WOULD DEAD BECAUSE OF THE INCREDIBLE AMOUNT OF BLOOD THAT CAME OUT FROM THE NOSE!!

Ataru wasted no time...

... AND, TERRIBLY EXCITED, BEGUN TO PALP AND TO KISS ANYONE OF THEM !!


But when he began to do something more... [AHEM !!!!!!][/size] ... <<IMPORTANT>>...


VOLTS !!!

ZAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAP !!


KABOOOOOOOOOOOM !!!
[/size]

All the girls were beaten back by the force of the explosion created by this monstrous lightning, which dug a small crater in the road.

"Damn", was the thought of Ataru, now so much angry: "that boring nuisance came in the worst moment possible" !!

He was prepearing for yet another quarrell...

... BUT ...


[LAMU', WITH HOT VOICE] DARLIIIIIING !!
[SHAM POO, WITH HOT VOICE] DAlLIIIIIIING !!


SHOCK !![/size]

BOTH OF THEM LANDED IN FRONT OF HIM (of course the alien was the one that was flying: her sister was held firmly clinging to her hand)...

... run to reach him...

... AND BEGUN TO CARESS HIM EVERYWHERE ON THE BODY...


... BOTH !!

[Lamù, sweetly excited] Oh, darling: PALP, PALP ! [/size]! where you were finished ?
[Sham Poo, sweetly excited too] We couldn't find you SQUEEZE, SQUEEZE !![/size] anywheLe !!
[Lamù, same conditions] Please, tell me b]SMACK ! SMACK ! [/b] why you moved away ?
[Sham Poo, same conditions] You know that SMACK ! SMACK ! [/size] we'll do eveLything to make you happy !!

[LAMU', WITH HOT EROTIC VOICE] DO YOU WANNA <<PLAY>> WITH US ?!? PALP, PALP!![/size]
[SHAM POO, WITH HOT EROTIC VOICE] ... Ol DO YOU PlEFElE THAT WE <<PLAY>> BETWEEN US FIlST ?!? PALP, PALP!![/size]


Ataru apparently had remained passive, nearly "run over" by so much love ...

... BUT THE EXPRESSION ON HIS FACE (FUNNY AND STUPID AT THE SAME TIME) MADE IT CLEAR THAT HE WAS SERIOUSLY RISKING A HEART ATTACK IN FRONT OF SUCH A

PROPOSAL!

He hugged immediately both !!

[Ataru, <<so touched>>] I... I am really surprised by all this dedication ... so moved that ... that...

...
...
...

[Ataru, blinking his little eyes] HEY, YOU TOO HAVE THIS STRANGE STAR-SHAPED PIERCING ON THE SHOULDER?!?[/size]




LAMU', SCREAMING HYSTERICALLY, LOST IN PANIC] YOU ARE NOT DARLING !!![/color][/size]


The alien flown away from him immediately: she was so upset that didn't look where was flying and hit a lamppost.
The blow was so strong that was forced to land again, even if a "safe distance" from Ataru.

[Ataru, blinking his little eyes] Lamù, what's going on ?!?

[LAMU', STILL SCREAMING ISTERICALLY] STAY BACK: STAY BACK FROM ME, YOU DAMNED IMPOSTOR !!

[Ataru, still confused] "Impostor" ?!? Really you don't recognize me anymore ?
[Lamù, same situation] I SAID STAY BACK FROM MEEEEEEEEEE !!!
[Sham Poo, so confused too] Sissy, what the fool aLe you doing?
[Lamù, same situaion] STAY BACK FROM HIM, SHAM POO: HE'S JUST AN IMPOSTOR !

The girls who were witnessing the scene began to worry seriously and many of them began to distance themselves.

Seeing the scene, Ataru got furious !!

[Ataru, screaming out of his soul] HEY, YOU DAMNED ALIEN, I'VE HAD ENOUGH OF YOUR JEALOUS: I WON'T LET YOU RUIN THE HAPPIEST DAY OF MY LIFE!

Seeing the scene, Sham Poo dropped on her knees and, hiding her face behind the hands, begun to cry.

[Sham Poo, now crying so much] S... Sissy [sigh] ... d.. DON'T MAKE HIM ANGlY !! [sigh] Y... you know that... [sniff] ... that ... [sniff] .. THAT HE SCAlES

ME WHEN HE GET ANGlY [sigh, sigh, sigh, sigh] !!

SEEING HER CRYING IN THAT WAY, A RED LED MEANING "SEX" TURNED INTO THE MIND OF ATARU ...[/size]

... AND ...

WOOOOOOOOHM !!![/size]


... few moments later he was already at her side: with his left hand was gently hugging her and with the right, in a comfortable way, begun to caress her

heart.


[... A-HEM ...]

Oh, well, of course: IF YOU WANT TO CARESS THE HEART TO A GIRL IS "NORMAL" TO FIND FIRST <<SOMETHING ELSE>>!

[Ataru, with <<SERIOUS>> voice] Oh, my little chinese SQUEEZE, SQUEEZE ![/size] Don't be afraid anymore PALP, PALP ! [/size]: I WILL TAKE CARE OF YOU PALP, PALP, SQUEEZE, SQUEEZE ![/size]


[A POWERFUL VOICE] WHAT'S GOING ON HERE ?!?[/size]


HEARD THAT VOICE, ALL THE GIRLS STARTED TO YELL LOST IN PANIC !!

A figure of a man appeared, partially hidden in the shadows, wearing elegant clothes but a funny hat made it impossible to look at his face.

[XY, WITH COLD VOICE] SHAM POO, WERE YOU FLIRTING WITH ANOTHER MAN ?!?[/size]

The Chinese reaction was apparently disproportionate.

IN FACT...

... SHE DROPPED ON HER KNEES ...

... AND BEGUN TO PRAY !!!

[SHAM POO, CRYING LOUDER] F.. FOlGIVE ME, MY LOlD: FOlGIVE ME: I... I WAS DECEIVED !!!

[XY, with low cold and EVIL voice] Yet I was clear [NOW SCREAMING] NO MERCY FOR THOSE WHO FLIRT WITH ANOTHER MAN !! [/size]

Seeing that scene, the alien fell at his feet !!

[LAMU', CRYING] PLEASE, SPARE MY SISTER !!
[xy, same voice] I can ease your pain [now louder] but your sister is a traitor [NOW BACK SCREAMING] AHD THERE'S NO MERCY FOR TRAITORS !!
[LAMU', CRYING LOUDER] BUT SHE'S MY SISTER !!!
[XY, with evil grave voice] THIS_IS_MY_WILL !!

The alien closed her eyes bitterly

[Lamù, crying silently] Y... YOU ARE THE MASTER !!

Meanwhile, all around Ataru was confusion: many of the girls who had toyed him were shouting in panic, some crying, others began to flee in all directions

....

.... BUT THEY WELL KNEW THAT NOW IT WAS ALL USELESS!

[Ataru, totally confused, with trembling voice] S.. someone can explain to me w.. what's goin on ?!?

The <<man>> took out from a pocket something who looked like a remote control...

... AND CARESSED IT IN AN EVIL WAY ...

... AND ...


[LOTS OF GIRLS] EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK !!!


LOTS OF GIRLS BEGUN TO CRY OUT IN PAIN...

... AND FINALLY ATARU <<REALIZED>> !!


IT WAS ALL DUE TO THAT STAR-SHAPED PIERCING THAT THEY HAD UNDER THE SKIN !!

IN FACT ...

... ANYONE OF THEM BEGUN TO RADIATE A SORT OF BLINDING LIGHT ...

... AND TO BURN SO MUCH !!!
[/size]


[SHAM POO, SCREAMING OUT IN PAIN] EEEEEEEEEEEEEK !! SISSY ! SISSY !! WHY YOU DON'T HELP MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE ?!? TELL HIM I FEEL SOllY, PLEEEEEEEEASE !!

Lamù turned the other side, holding his head in his hands, as she almost didn't want nor see nor hear what was going on.

[Ataru, lost in panic] What's going on ?!? WHAT'S GOIN ON ?!?


KABOOOOOOOOOOOOOM !!

SPLAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT !!!
[/size]



ALL THE GIRLS THAT THEY HAVE SOMETHING TO DO WITH HIM EXPLODED ONE AFTER ANOTHER ![/size]


Finally everything is clear, though in the most atrocious way.


THE SMALL METAL STAR WAS THE TRIGGER OF A BOMB THAT EVERY GIRL HAD HIDDEN INSIDE THEIR BODY![/size]



During the explosions, Ataru instinctively put the hands to to face, to try to fix the eyes, and when it was over, opened them slowly ...

... AND ...

SHOCK![/color] [/size]

ALL AROUND THERE WERE BLOODSTAINS, SHREDS OF BURNED CLOTHING AND PARTS OF HUMAN BODIES TREMENDOUSLY TORN !


He couldn't hold back his tears even for a moment.

[Ataru, among a lots of sighs] Th.. this is inhuman [sigh] .. this.. this is monstrous [sigh].... this.. [sigh] ... this is... [NOW SCREAMING] THIS IS A CRIME  !!!

[XY, WITH COLD VOICE] NO, THIS_IS_MY_LAW: NO MERCY FOR THOSE WHO BETRAY !!


ATARU GOT FURIOUS: A BLIND RAGE FILLED HIS SOUL !!

Took the aim...

... AND RUN TO HIT THAT MAN !!

[ATARU, SCREAMING OUT OF HIS SOUL] YOU BASTAAAAAAAAAAARD !! I WILL MAKE YOU GROUND BEEF !!

The <<man>> just stepped back...

... and, suddenly, took away his hat...

... AND CAME OUT FROM THE SHADOW ....

... AND ...

SHOCK! [/color] [/size]


HE WAS A REAL CARBON COPY OF ATARU !!![/size]


[Ataru c/c, with sadic voice] I WAS PLEASED TO SEE ME AS I WAS JUST SOME TIME AGO[/size].
[Ataru, lost in panic, with trembling voice] N... NO !! TH.. THIS IS IMPOSSIBLE !! TH.. THIS IS SIMPLY IMPOSSIBLE !!

[Ataru c/c, same voice] As you can see the dream come true: [NOW SCREAMING] NOW ALL THE GIRLS BELONG TO ME !!
[Ataru, same trembling voice] I... I didn't want this at all! All right I... I wanted you to have a harem but.. but ... I wanted the girls who were part of it loved me, not feared to die if thay didn't satisfy my whims.
[Ataru c/c, same voice] THIS IS YOUR DESTINY !! YOU CANNOT CHANGE YOUR DESTINY !!

Ataru wanted to scream something awful ...

.. WHEN SUDDENLY ...

... A BLACK CROW APPEARED (IN FLY) BEHIND HER ALTER EGO!

[The crow, cawing] 'AAAAAAAAA'y !! 'AAAAAAAAAARK !! 'ROOOOOOOOOOOOOOUGH !![/size]

ATARU UNDERSTOOD IMMEDIATELY THE SITUATION ...

... AND ...

[ATARU, SCREAMING WITH ALL HIS STRENGHTS] YOU DAMNED COWARD, COME OUT AND FIGHT !!


AN EVIL LAUGH FILLED THE AIR !!


[ATARU, STILL SCREAMING] YOU BASTARD, WHY DO YOU PERSECUTE ME? WHY YOU NEED TO KNOW HOW DEEP ARE THE ABYSS OF DESPAIR?

[<<THE VOICE>>, among a lots of evil laugh] I DON'T NEED IT ANYMORE, YOU STUPID !!!
[Ataru, so surprised] N.. nan-da ?!?
[<<THE VOICE>>, now sadic] NOW YOU CANNOT ESCAPE  !!
[Ataru, NOW SHOCKED] N.. nan-da ?!? W.. WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU SAYING ?!?

[<<THE VOICE>>, still sadic] That's right !! It was fun to bump you from an abyss to another, but now you are trapped: I've thrown in a pit where you can never go back [NOW SCREAMING] AND FINALLY I CAN DEVOUR YOUR SOUL![/color][/size]

[Ataru, now with trembling voice] N.. nan-da ?!? <<TO DEVOUR MY SOUL>> ?!?




[To be continued]  
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Re: THE 7th HALLUCINATION
« Reply #14 on: May 07, 2011, 03:55:26 PM »
You really bullying me on purpose ;D Stop writing just an interesting point... You really know how to keep interest on these chapters :P

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Re: THE 7th HALLUCINATION
« Reply #15 on: May 14, 2011, 10:03:35 PM »
My focus is still on the crow, is still cawing the same 3 mysterious word ("'ark 'a'y 'rough"): what he's saying ?



Dark day rough ?

Rough dark ray ?

Or what else ?

Most of all, is this one the right meaning ?

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Re: THE 7th HALLUCINATION
« Reply #16 on: May 25, 2011, 05:25:56 PM »
URUSEI YATSURA, THE UNOFFICIAL 10TH SEASON[/b][/color] (click on this link to read the whole plot of this saga).

"THE 7th HALLUCINATION"

CHAPTER SEVEN: NUSUTH, <<DEMON OF DECEPTIONS AND DEATH>> !!

Dark.

Darkness.

Just a weak (too weak) light falling from somewhere.

Ataru touched his eyes to see if they had closed or open, so great was the darkness that enveloped him.

A cold chill on his backbone...

... (and this time was not the usual chill that yet felt in his bones)...

... HOW AND WHERE TO GET A SHELTER ?!?

That worrying phrase still echoes in his mind.

"HOW IS IT POSSIBLE THAT SOMEONE COULD DEVOUR MY SOUL?", was his though.

UNLESS...

... UNLESS IT WAS THE DEVIL HIMSELF TO HAVE UTTERED THAT PHRASE !!!

A scream !!

[Ataru, screaming with all his strenghts] THAT'S ENOUGH !! COME OUT !! SHOW WHO YOU ARE !!

AN EVIL LAUGH FILLED THE AIR !!

[Ataru, same situation] YOU DON'T SCARE ME !! COME OUT: If I really have to burn in hell I'll drag you with me !


A MYSTERIOUS VOICE, STRANGLY SWEET, BEGAN TO SING.

[**, with strange voice, singing]Seven deadly sins
Seven ways to win
Seven holy paths to hell
and your trip begins

Seven downward slopes
Seven bloodied hopes
Seven are your burning fires
Seven your desires...


Ataru turned his face...

... (finally his eyes had become accustomed to the darkness)..

... and could see the outline of a person behind him.

It was still a shadowy figure: the only thing he could understand was that that "something" was wrapped in a kind of mantle.

[Ataru, with strange voice] Sorry, in our rock band we don't need a chorister.
[**, with evil voice too] Eh eh eh: just your immense stupidity can make you say such nonsense at a time like this.
[ATARU, NOW SCREAMING] THAT'S ENOUGH !! WHO ARE YOU ? WHY YOU ENJOY TORTURING ME ?!?

THAT "FIGURE" OPENED THE ARMS !!

[**, same voice] Do you really wanna know me ?!? SO GET MORE CLOSE TO ME !!


Finally the mystery was cleared.

It wasn't a mantle the one that surrounds the figure but a kind of habit, similar to that of monk.

The moment that being held out the arms it fell to the ground...


... AND ...


OOOOOOOOOOOOOOH !!!


.... W.. W.. WHAT A SEXY SILHOUETTE !!
[/size]

[Ataru, overexcited, with all the tongue out from the mouth] GEE !! WHY DON'T YOU TELL ME ONCE THAT YOU WERE A WOMAN SO PRETTY?[/size]


ATARU WAS CURED IMMEDIATELY...

... and  began to run to meet <<her>> !!


IT WAS AN ERROR !!!


IN FACT....


[Ataru, SO MUCH EXCITED, running wildy and screaming] I FORGIVE YOU !! I FORGIVE YOU !! GIMME YOUR EMAIL ADRESS AND YOUR MOBILE NUMBER AND HAVE A DATE WITH ME AND I'LL FORGIVE YOU EVERYTHING !

[XX, with fake gentle voice] Ooooh, do you really love me ? So... come more close to me.... AND ... [NOW SCREAMING] KISS ME: IN THAT WAY IT WILL BE EASIER TO DEVOUR YOUR SOUL!


AAAAARGH !!![/size]


Only when he was a few steps Ataru realized how bitter was the reality.

IN FACT...


The skin (if it really was skin !) was made of scales...

... the tongue coming out of the mouth was long and forked like a snake...

... her long white hairs had something worrying...

... her eyes, red as fire, do not bode well at all ...

... AND THE FACE OF THAT WOMAN WAS THE UGLIEST OF HUNGER!

Ataru had to change his mind in a hurry (ALSO BECAUSE OF DISGUST!!).

[Ataru, among a lots of coughs] gh.. gh... y.. you.. [cough, cough] you looked [cough, cough] YOU LOOKED BETTER BY FAR !![/size] [cough, cough, cough, cough !]
[XX, SCREAMING NERVOUSLY] THIS IS OFFENSIVE !!

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSH !!!

SHE BEGAN TO BREATH FLAMES AGAINST HIM !!!
[/size]

Only the survival instinct saved Ataru from dying charred.

He got up immediately.

[Ataru, panting loudly] [pant, pant] ONCE FOR ALL [pant, pant]: WHO ARE YOU ? [pant, pant] WHAT DO YOU WANT FROM ME ?!?

[XX, with cold evil voice] Oh, if this can please you I introduce myself: MY NAME IS NUSUTH AND I AM A DAMASHIGAMI !![/size]

Totally confused, Ataru began to babble in a stupid way that strange word...

... and tried, with the tip of a finger, to write it on the powder that was found (plenty) on the ground.

[Ataru, mumbling to himself] D... <<DAMASHIGAMI>> ?!?  W.. WHICH WHOM IDEOGRAMS IT'S WRITTEN ?!?
[NUSUTH, GETTING ANGRY] HEY, YOU STUPID: DO YOU REALLY THINK THIS IS THE RIGHT TIME TO TRY TO WRITE ?
[Ataru, scratching hardly his head] So... <<DA>>.. <<MA>>... <<SHI>>.. <<GAMI>>..[/size]
[NUSUTH,  SO MUCH ANGRY] You damned, don't use just hiragana kanji !! YOU MUST WRITE MY NAME WITH THE COMPLEX IDEOGRAMS THAT MEAN <<DEMON>>,<<DECEPION>>, <<GODDES OF DEATH>> AND <<WICKED>>,  YOU IDIOT !![/size]

[Ataru, with stupid voice] YOU WRETCH, YOU COULDN'T CALL YOURSELF IN AN EASIER WAY ?!?[/size]


Simply too much !!


FROM THE RIGHT HAND OF NUSUTH CAME OUT A DOZEN OF WHITE AND SLIMY SNAKES ...

... EACH OF THEM TRIED TO BITE ATARU ...

... that only rolling several times on the ground managed to avoid them.

He got up once again.

[Ataru, panting loudly] Y... you damned.. [PANT, PANT] How can you think [PANT, PANT] of devouring my soul? [PANT, PANT] don't you know that he's immortal?
[Nusuth, back with evil voice] IN FACT IT WILL GIVE ME ENERGY FOR ETERNITY !![/size]
[Ataru, now lost in panic] N.. nan-da ?!?

The snakes coming out of her right arm now moved (slowly) all the time: each one seemed had own will and watched (in a scary way) every little gesture of Ataru.

[Nusuth, laughing in an evil way] Eh eh eh: when I'll devour your soul it will become part of me for eternity !! In this way I will have an inexhaustible source of energy so that it will increase my power to excess AND YOU'LL BECOME PRISONER OF MY BEING! FOREVER !![/size]

[ATARU, SCREAMING WITH WRATH] I WILL NEVER LET YOU TO MAKE SUCH AN ATROCITIES LIKE THIS !!
[Nusuth, still sadic] You stupid ! [now screaming] YOU STILL DON'T UNDERSTAND WHY I HAVE BEATING YOU IN THE WORST DEPTHS OF DESPAIR?!?


WAS IN THAT MOMENT THAT, FROM ABOVE, SOMETHING FELL ON ATARU !![/size]


Only an instinctive movement saved him from dying crushed.

He raised his arms...

... AND...

.. (while not seeing anything at all)...

... FELT SOMETHING LIKE A ROUGH BALL, THE SIZE OF A HUGE SOFA, FALLING ON HIM !!

IT WAS REALLY HEAVY !!

[Ataru, groaning in pain] [ggggh] W... what's goin on ? [ggggh] What is this ?!?
[NUSUTH, WITH SADIC VOICE] THIS IS THE PRODUCT OF YOUR DESPAIR !![/size]
[Ataru, same situation] N.. nan-da ?!?

[Nusuth, among a sadic laugh] Eh eh eh: WHENEVER I HAVE BEATING YOU IN AN ABYSS I'VE ACCUMULATED YOUR PAIN AND ANGUISH: NOW RETURN IT TO YOU ![/size]
[Ataru, same situation] [ggggh] Y... you mean that... [ggggh]... that...
[Nusuth, with clear EVIL VOICE] THAT THE WEIGHT OF YOUR LOWNESS WILL CRUSH YOU TO THE GROUND AND WILL NEVER ALLOW YOU TO LIFT THIS LATTER ABYSS!
[Ataru, same situation] [ggggh] Th.. there's just [ggggh] a little thing that [ggggh] you've to know.
[Nusuth, with clear voice] About ?!?

[Ataru, increasing the volume of his voice] [ggggh] Throughout my life I have done nothing [ggggh] but fight against adversity [ggggh] and when everything seemed to be able [ggggh] to destroy me [ggggh], I have always raised: [ggggh] I have never surrendered [ggggh] and I will never surrender because... [NOW SCREAMING WITH ALL HIS STRENGHTS] BECAUSE I NEVER STOPPED HOPING FOR A FUTURE BETTER!

KABOOOOOOOOOM !!
[/size]


THAT SPECIES OF THE INVISIBLE BALL EXPLODED...

... BUT THIS WASN'T MEAN IN ANY WAY THAT HE WAS SAFE !!

IN FACT...

[Nusuth, groaning nervously] Grrrr, you're a tough cookie! [now with clear voice] Well, it means that I will draw tremendous energy from your soul.
[ATARU, SCREAMING] YOU DAMNED, I'LL WRING YOUR NECK FIRST !!
[Nusuth, with low, cold EVIL voice] Hold yourself where you are, otherwise someone could really get hurt !!
[Ataru, so surprised] N.. nan-da ?!?

He looked up...

... AND ...

[ATARU, SCREAMING DESPERATELY] NOOOOOOOOOO !! YOU COWARD !!

That demon knew every weak point of him.


IN FACT....


... TWO SNAKES WERE BLOCKING LAMU’, ALMOST AS THOUGH BOUND HANDS AND FEETS, WHILE A THIRD WHISTLED EERILY CLOSE TO HER NECK, READY TO DEVOURE HER SOUL.[/size]

But probably the alien not even realized what was happening.

IN FACT..


... she was shaking a lot...

... she was sweating cold ...

... and her lips trembled.

IN SHORT, LAMU' WAS HAVING ANOTHER CRISIS OF ABSTINENCE !![/U]

[Ataru, screaming nervously] DAMNED ALIEN, WHY YOUR WITHDRAWAL SYMPTOMS ARRIVE ALWAYS AT THE WRONG TIME?
[Nusuth, back sadic] Eh eh eh: as you can see I've all the aces in my hands !!

INCREDIBLE BUT TRUE, ATARU HAD THE RIGHT IDEA !!

IN FACT...

[Ataru, mumbling to himself] She's a woman ! SHE'S A WOMAN ! It means that.. that... THAT SHE HAS THE SAME WEAKNESSES OF ALL WOMEN OF THE UNIVERSE![/size]

He began to run zig-zag...

... AND ...

[Nusuth, now surprised] H.. hey, w.. what do you wanna do ?

At last moment Ataru threw himself under her legs...

... AND ...


..
..
..


SQUEEZE !!![/size]


[NUSUTH, SCREAMING LOST IN PANIC] EEEEEEEEK !!

ANOTHER SUDDEN JUMP...

... and was able to take Lamù on his arms !!

Just few steps away...

... AND ...


[Ataru, with trembling voice] gh.. gh.. D.. damned alien, h.. how are you ?!?

SQUEEZE !!![/size]

[ATARU, SCREAMING LOST IN PAIN] YEHOHAAAAAAARGH !!

... [ehm] ...



Well, some things never change.

IN FACT...

... LAMU' WRUNG HIS CHEST WITH STRENGHT !![/U]

naturally Ataru felt a pain of the devil...

... so many tears fell from his eyes and the alien drank them, one by one.

[Ataru, with trembling voice, lost in pain] [gh.. gh..] L.. Lamù, r.. really you cannot find [gh..] a less painful way [gh..] to get my tears?

She answered him not, just drank his tears and all.
But when finished cleared her lips nervously and began to look at him in an evil way.

... [A-ehm] ...

Well, the point was that was right to be angry.

IN FACT...

[Nusut, still lost in panic]Y.. YOU PERVERTED: H.. HOW DARE YOU FEEL ME IN SUCH TERRIBLE WAY ?[/size]
[LAMU', WITH EVIL VOICE] D-A-R-L-I-N-G, WHAT_THE_HELL_SHE_IS_SAY ING ?!?
[Ataru, now screaming] DAMNED ALIEN, DO YOU REALLY THINK THAT I LIKED TO PALP THAT DISGUSTING SLIMY SNAKE ?
[LAMU', SAME VOICE] WHAT_THE_FOOL_HAVE_YOU_D ONE ?!?
[Ataru, screaming wildly] THIS IS NOT THE RIGHT MOMENT TO MORALIIIIIZE !!

[Nusuth, with wrath] Grrr, If I don't kill you right now is just because I need your soul ! [now screaming] TAKE THIIIIIIIIIS !!

ANOTHER TIME FELT ON ATARU SOMETHING LIKE A ROUGH BALL !!

THIS TIME IT WAS EVEN BIGGER AND HEAVY !!

Once again he was forced to hold with just his own strenght, because it was invisibile.

[Ataru, groaning in pain] [ggggh] Y... you damned...[ggggh] you will never make me bend !!

JUST A MOMENT...

... AND A SNAKE TRIED TO BITE HIM !!

[LAMU', FURIOUS] STAY BACK FROM MY DARLING, YOU DISGUSTING WORM !!

VOLTS !!

ZAAAAAAAAAAAAAAP !!
[/size]

THE SNAKE WITHDREW IMMEDIATELY, SERIOUSLY BURNED !!

In that meantime the invisible ball exploded once again.

[Nusuth, with evil voice] Wow, so you're not a human being.
[Lamù, with evil voice too] I will never let you hurt him, even at the cost of my life. [NOW SCREAMING] GET READY DARLIIIIING !!

A SUDDEN JUMP...

... SHE GRABBED ATARU ON HIS ARM...

... AND TRIED TO FLY AWAY...

... BUT ...




.... A MYSTERIOUS FORCE PREVENTED HER FROM GETTING UP IN THE AIR !!

[Lamù, so scared] W.. what's going on ?!?
[NUSUTH, WITH WRATH] THERE'S NO ESCAPE FROM THE DEPTHS OF DESPAIR !! [/size]
[Ataru, so shocked] N.. nan-da ?!?

[Nusuth, back sadic] Eh eh eh: I have led on you a despair so great that not only has carved an unbridgeable gulf in your soul but has also generated a gravitational force so great that will never let you get out.

No one had an idea on how to get out of that trap...

... WHEN, SUDDENLY...

... A BLACK CROW APPEARED IN FLY ...

[The crow, cawing] .... TRRRROUUUU' ! 'AAAAAARK ! 'AAAAA'Y !![/size]

[Lamù, groaning nervously] Damn, all we need was just the bird of ill omen !! What the hell... [now surprised] Darling, what are you doing ?

ATARU WAS MUMBLING SOMETHING OF (apparently) INCOMPRENSIBLE.

[Ataru, mumbling to himself] <<'ARK-A'y-RROO>>...

... <<RRROUU-A'y-'ARK>> ...

... <<A'y-RROO-'ARK>> ...

... <<A'y-'ARK-RROO>> ...

... <<TRRROU'-'ARK-A'y>> ..

..... HEY !!

[ATARU, WITH CLEAR VOICE] <<TRROU 'ARK 'A'y>> !!! Through dark lady !! THROUGH-DARK-LADY !! [NOW SCREAMING] I GOT !![/size]

[Lamù, blinking her large eyes] Darling, what are you saying ?
[ATARU, SCREAMING] THERE'S NO TIME FOR EXPLENATIONS: WHEN I'LL SAY YOU FLY FASTER YOU CAN !!
[Lamù, same situation] Sorry ?

Ataru took a running start...

... AND ...


AHEM !!![/size]

.... [WOW !!!]

... W.. WHAT THAT EROTIC POSITION !!![/size]


Ataru grabbed Lamù as if she was a javelin.

It meant that...

.... [Oh my GoooooooooD].....


... with his lef hand grabbed her bra ...

... AND WITH HIS RIGHT HAND HER ... [AHEM !!!!![/size]]  ...

...

... well, for those who had not understood, HE PUT HIS HANDS BETWEEN HER LEGS[/size]  ...

... AND THREW HER AGAINST THE DAMASHIGAMI WITH ALL HIS STRENGHTS !!


[Lamù, lost in panic, screaming] EEEEEEEEEEEK !!!
[Nusuth, so surprised] W.. WHAT IT MEANS THIS ?!?


A SUDDEN THOUGHT !!!


[ATARU, NOW LOST IN PAIN] WAIT FOR A WHILE, WHY SO EASY THIS TIME ?!?[/size]


TOO LATE TO FEEL REMORSE !!


[Lamù, lost in panic, screaming] DARLIIIIIIIIING !!!
[Nusuth, so worried] You damned, stay back from meeeeeeee !!!


[ATARU, MUMBLING TO HIMSELF] OH MY GOD, WHAT IF EVEN THIS ONE WAS A TRAP ?!?


[To be continued] 
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Re: THE 7th HALLUCINATION
« Reply #17 on: June 07, 2011, 02:03:00 PM »
OMG, i need the next chapter ç_ç i don't resist anymore!!!
Italy is my nation... english isn't my language.... sorry ^^

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Re: THE 7th HALLUCINATION
« Reply #18 on: June 11, 2011, 11:49:14 PM »
URUSEI YATSURA, THE UNOFFICIAL 10TH SEASON[/b][/color] (click on this link to read the whole plot of this saga).

"THE 7th HALLUCINATION"

CHAPTER EIGHT: THE LAST HALLUCINATION [/size]

The clash between Ataru and Nusuth, "demon of deception, despair and death", had arrived at a fatal point of no return.

IN FACT...

... trusting an intuition, Ataru had caught (IN A TERRIBLY EROTIC WAY !!!) Lamù as if was javelin and had hurled her against the body of the damashigami, who was surprised by such a move...

... and it was good: in that way the snakes that sprang from her left arm could do nothing against the alien!

[Nusuth, so worried] HEY ! HEY ! HOLD ! HOOOOOOOOOOOLD !!
[Lamù, screaming out, lost in panic] DARLIIIIIIIIIIING !!

[Ataru, mumbling to himself] OH MY GOD, WHAT IF WAS A TRAP ?!?

A FEW SECONDS....

... AND ...


OOOOOOOOOOOOOOH !!![/size]

[NUSUTH, SO MUCH SURPRISED] W.. WHAT IT MEANS THIS ?!?
[ATARU, SCREAMING WITH WRATH] IT MEANS THAT YOU LIED TO ME:  AS YOU CAN SEE, THERE IS A WAY TO LEAVE THIS ABYSS ![/size]

Ataru had hoped with all his strength to that crow ( which croaked always the same three words, though in no particular order ) was an ally .

His confidence was rewarded.

IN FACT...

... LAMÙ FLEW THROUGH THE BODY OF NUSUTH WITHOUT FINDING ANY RESISTANCE, AS IF HAS DIPPED IN THE WATER![/size]

[Ataru, now with cold EVIL voice] I had to wait for the right opportunity to understand what was trying to tell me that crow but, even if this is the last moment, finally my patience has been rewarded !!
[Nusuth, groaning with wrath] Grrrrrrrrrr, you've taken advantage of my carelessness.
[Ataru, same voice] Now forgive me if I leave you but I've important things to care and think about [NOW SCREAMING] ALL THE GIRLS OF THE UNIVERSE ARE WAITING FOR MEEEE !!

HE RE-BEGAN TO RUN ZIG-ZAG...

... not without difficulty: the snakes coming out from the left arm of Nusuth rushed at him, trying to bite him in every way ...

... AND WHEN ATARU WAS FINALLY SO CLOSE TO THE DEMON ...




.... BONK !!![/size]


The blow was so strong that slammed to the ground his enemy ...

... BUT ATARU FAILED TO DO THE SAME THING THAT HAD DONE LAMÙ!

The demon stood for a moment sitting on the ground, holding the head with her right hand.


[Nusuth, groaning with wrath] Y.. you damned: I will torture you so long that you begged me to devour your soul !
[ATARU, getting up, SO MUCH WORRIED] W.. WHAT HAPPENED ?!?
[NUSUTH, SCREAMING] YOU STUPID, REALLY THOUGHT THAT I WOULD HAVE COMMITTED THE SAME MISTAKE TWICE?[/size]
[Ataru, so much confused] N.. nan-da ?!?

The two opponents stood up...

... and the snakes coming out of the left arm of the demon once more began to move slowly, each one was moving slowly and watching every single movement of Ataru.

[Nusuth, with clear EVIL voice] Eh eh eh, after all I should even thank you: thanks to you I've found this weakness.
[Ataru, same situation] Y.. you mean that.. that..

[NUSUTH, SCREAMING WITH WRATH] THAT NOW I HAVE CLOSED THIS GAP SIZE IN AN IRREVERSIBLE WAY !![/size]

Hearing that words, Ataru wanted to eat his hands with rage: had discovered the secret on how to get out of the abyss ...

... but had been too hasty ...

... AND HAD WASTED THE OPPORTUNITY TO SAVE HIMSELVES IN A WAY TOO NAIVE ![/size]

[Ataru, with wrath] You damned, surely I'll find another way to escape from here !!
[Nusuth, with fake sweet voice] Oooooooh, AND WHO WILL NEVER SUMMON YOU ?!?
[Ataru, so surprised] S.. sorry ?
[Nusuth, back with wrath] Eh eh eh: NOBODY KNOWS THAT I HAVE TRAPPED YOU DOWN HERE, THEREFORE NOBODY CAN RUN YOUR HELP!
[Ataru, back with wrath too] You damned, Lamù knows I'm here and surely will return back immediately to save me !
[NUSUTH, WITH FAKE SWEET VOICE] I HOPE SO !! IN THAT WAY I'LL DEVOURE HER SOUL TOO !!
[Ataru, so shocked] N.. nan-da ?!?

[Nusuth, with SADIC voice] From now on, any living being who will try to cross my body will die instantly .... [NOW SCREAMING] AND I WILL EAT HIS SOUL WITHOUT ANY EFFORT !!


ONCE MORE, ATARU NOTICED THAT, FROM ABOVE, SOMETHING HUGE WAS FALLING ON HIM !!

Instinctively, he tried to jump from one side ...

... was good !!

IN FACT...

... A KIND OF INVISIBLE METEOR CRASHED VIOLENTLY (AND LOULDY) AGAINST THE GROUND AND OPENED A HUGE CRATER !!!

But was not able to get up ...

... BECAUSE A HUGE BLAZE (COMING OUT FROM THE MOUTH OF THE DEVIL) FORCED HIM TO ROLL SEVERAL TIMES TO AVOID IT!

A MOVEMENT CAUGHT OUT OF THE CORNER OF THE EYE...

... a providential jump on the other side ...

... AND ATARU MANAGED TO AVOID THE CLAWS OF THE RIGHT ARM OF NUSUTH, WHICH HAD STRETCHED SO ABNORMAL !

[NUSUTH, SCREAMING WITH WRATH] YOU'VE NO ESCAPE !!
[Ataru, panting loudly] Y.. you damned [pant, pant] you'll never [pant, pant] bend me [pant, pant]
[NUSUTH, SAME VOICE] YOU STUPID, NOW IT'S JUST A MATTER OF TIME !!

At least Ataru got up...

... BUT THIS TIME THIS SIMPLE MOVEMENT REQUIRED A HUGE EFFORT !!

[Ataru, groaning in pain] [gggggh...] W.. what's goin on ? [ggggh...] W. .. why it's so difficult to get up ?
[NUSUTH, same voice] IT'S BECAUSE OF YOUR FEAR !!
[Ataru, so surprised] N... nan-da ?!?

[Nusuth, with EVIL cold voice] Eh eh eh, you're afraid to die here all alone, right?
[Ataru, now with despising voice] YOU DON'T SCARE ME !!
[Nusuth, same voice] You liar: maybe you can fool me but you cannot do yourself and what's happening to you it is the evidence!
[ATARU, NOW SCREAMING] IT DOESN'T MATTER, I WILL DARG YOU WITH ME TO HELL !!
[Nusuth, same voice] Eh eh eh, sorry but it's impossible: [now with sadic voice] WHEN YOUR FEAR INCREASES, THE GRAVITY OF THIS PLACE GETS BIGGER[/size]: soon you won't be able to move even a finger [NOW SCREAMING] AND FINALLY I WILL DEVOURE YOUR SOUL !!

Damn, she was right !!

Ataru tried to move her arms and legs but it took a damn effort than usual: it seemed that a lot of invisible ropes counter every little effort...

... WHEN, SUDDENLY ...

....
...
..


WHAT'S THE "GENIUS"?

It's fantasy...

.... intuition ...

.... vision ...
[/size]

.... AND EXECUTION SPEED !![/size]


Ataru provocatively began to giggle.

[Nusuth, a bit surprised] What's goin on, the prospect of become my prisoner for all eternity is doing out of your mind ?

[Ataru, increasing the volume of his voice] Eh eh eh: you want to know how deep are the abyss of despair, right? [still increasing] Well, I don't know how to measure them but... [now with loud voice] now I realized one thing: [NOW SCREAMING] AS LONG AS LAMÙ WILL BE BY MY SIDE I'LL BE ABLE TO GET UP ANY TIME ![/size]

A SUDDEN JUMP !!!

[Nusuth, so surprised] Hey, what the hell... [NOW SHOCKED] W... WHAT IS THIS ?!?



FROM THE BODY OF THE DEMON WAS NOW WAVING THE BRA OF LAMÙ ...

.. AND A BRA IS NOT A LIVING BEING !!
[/size]




Ataru caught the fly ...

... Lamù (who was the "other side" of the body of Nusuth), feeling that his "darling" had taken it, pulled him firmly towards ...

.. AND HE TOO STEP "THROUGH DARK LADY" ![/size]



Once beyond, Lamù grabbed him by the hand and began to fly toward a bright spot that was up and, as they approached it, this became wider and the light brighter and warm.

At the same time Ataru felt that cold chill inside his bones (which had tormented him until shortly before) was leaving and even breathing became more regular and deep.


Until now he had always considered Lamù as a nuisance, because prevented him from ... [ehm] ... "interact" with other girls ...

.. WELL, THIS TIME WAS HAPPY TO FLY WITH HER !


But when the light became too intense...

... THE BODY OF LAMÙ BEGAN TO FADE AWAY!

[ATARU, BACK LOST IN PANIC] H.. HEY !! HEY !! NOT THIS WAY !! NOT THIS WAY !! D.. DON'T LEAVE LAMU', DON'T LEAVE ME RIGHT NOW !!!


.....
....
...
..


[Ataru, groaning in pain] D.. don't leave me, Lamù.. don't leave me right now !
[LAMU', RATHER MUMBLING] OH, DARLING: YOU KNOW I'LL NEVER LEAVE YOU !![/size]
[Ataru, so surprised] N.. nan-da ?!?

Gradually he opened his eyes...

... AND REALIZED THAT WAS LAYING IN A BED OF A HOSPITAL ROOM ![/size]

Around him several medical devices recorded all his vital signs and had the drips on both arms.

In front of him Lamù was wearing a dress similar to that of a nurse, her (long) hairs were collected in a kind of white cap, the hands gave off a strong smell of soap and had a mask over the mouth (it was clear that this was a sterile dress).

[Ataru, so surprised] W.. where I am ?
[Lamù, with clear voice] THIS IS THE INTENSIVE CARE UNIT OF TOMOBIKI'S HOSPITAL !!
[Ataru, still surprised] W.. why I'm here ? W.. what happened to me ?!?


[LAMU'] YOU HAVE HAD BIRD FLU, DARLING !![/size]


[Ataru, blinking his little eyes] R.. really ?!?

[Lamù, with clear voice] One night, suddenly, I heard you groan in bed: your forehead burned like an iron and I couldn't lower the fever with anything.
I immediately called an ambulance and they arrived just in time: YOU WAS HAVING A SEVERE RESPIRATORY CRISIS ![/size]
[Ataru, same situation] S.. sorry ? Y... you said "a severe respiratory crisis" ?!?

[Lamù, now crying] Oh, darling: [sigh] you cannot understand how much I was sick [sigh] seeing you suffer !! [sigh] Your veins [sigh] are so thin [sigh] that every time someone [sniff] had put a drip [sigh] you screamed in a horrible way. [sigh] More [sniff] you were allergic [sigh] to the antibiotic [sigh] that they've given in the first moment [sniff]: the doctors [sigh] have realized it [sigh] just in time, [sniff] YOU SERIOUSLY RISKED TO BECOME PARALYZED [/size][sigh, sigh, sigh, sigh]!
[Ataru, same situation] TH.. THIS IS THE TRUTH ?!?

[Lamù, among a lots of sighs] THE DOCTORS HAVE HAD TO DO EMERGENCY TEST ON YOUR ABDOMEN [/size][sigh] to find the right antibiotic: [sniff] when I saw [sigh] you writhing [sigh] in pain in a way so horrible [sigh] ... I FAINTED !! WAHAAAAAAAAAH !!
[Ataru, still in shock] S... so... ALL OF THIS HAPPENED BECAUSE I GOT A FEVER !!

[Lamù, back with clear voice] Since then they carried you here, your temperature is almost never dropped below 41 degree: NO DOUBT YOU'VE HAD HALLUCINATIONS[/size], because you screamed incoherent words and also shouted.
 

ATARU FINALLY UNDERSTOOD EVERYTHING THAT HAD HAPPENED IN THOSE DAY (and a large smile appeared on his face).

The initial sensation of suffocation was caused by the onset of fever...

... the pain felt every time someone was biting him on the arms was due to the fact that some nurses was putting an IV.[/u][/url]

... that terrible feeling of petrification was due to a wrong therapy.[/u][/url]

... the snake bites on his abdomen were nothing more than some (painful) medical tests.[/u][/url]

... that damn chill felt in his bones was caused by fever...[/u][/url]

... AND ALL OF THAT HORRIBLE HALLUCINATIONS WERE JUST DELIRIUM AND NOTHING ELSE !![/size]

[Lamù, with gentle voice] You've to know: THE WHOLE NATION IS INTERESTED IN YOUR HEALTH !!!
[Ataru, blinking his little eyes] Damned alien, what the fool are you saying ?
[Lamù, so moved] When you got about your illness (and the fact that you were seriously risking your life), a lot of people had gathered out here and stay here day and night just to comfort and make you strong, even radio and television stations broadcast continuously news about you.

She took her tiny mobile and dialed a well-known number.

[Lamù] Sham Poo, are you still there ? Please, turn the webcam of your mobile: I wanna show to darling what's happening outside.

She came over her mobile...

... and Ataru saw a moltitude of people: lots of them many of them had signs with slogans of encouragement, while others were singing the (only) ballad published in their new album.

[Lots of people, singing]... and I will raise you up
I will lift you up
I'll give you eagles' wings
so you will stand
on the breeze of the dawn
and I will make you shine
like the Sun
So in my hands (forever) you'll live !!
[/i]

Ataru didn't resist more...

... AND BIG TEARS CAME OUT FROM HIS EYES !!

[Lamù, with clear voice] TAKE A LOOK: YOUR PARENTS ALL OF OUR FRIENDS ARE HERE JUST FOR YOU !!

He turned his head...

... and, behind glass, saw that there were his father and mother, Ran, Shinobu, Ryunosuke, Shutaro, Oyuki, Satoshi, Akira, Kousuke, Hiroyuki, Sakura and Sakurambo.
Among them were even Mousse (which was finally taken over by the accident) and Benten with Kaneda (who was finally able to stay up).

The alien sat a moment on the bed...

... AND ...

[Lamù, so surprised] D.. DARLING, W... WHAT ARE YOU DOING ?!?

ATARU GENTLY STROKED HER HAND !!

[Ataru, with gentle voice] ARIGATO' !![/size]
[Lamù, crying once again] OH, DARLING..... I... I...

A SUDDEN HUG...

... AND ...

[LAMU', STILL CRYING] ... I HAVE DONE SO LITTLE, WAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH !!!
[ATARU, SCREAMING OUT IN PAIN] YEHOHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARG H !!
[Lamù, now so worried] Darling, what's going on ?
[Ataru, still groaning in pain] L... Lamù [gggggh] , w.. what the fool have they done to me between my neck and my right shoulder? [gggggh] I feel... I feel... I feel a pain of hell!
[Lamù, blinking her large eyes] N.. nothing but.. Let me see.

She unbuttoned a bit his pajama ...

... AND ...


SHOCK !!![/size]


[LAMU', LOST IN PANIC] OH MY GOD, DARLING: WHAT IS THIS ?!? IT SEEMS THE BITE OF A VAMPIRE !![/size]
[ATARU, LOST IN PANIC TOO] N... N.. N.. NAN-DAAAAAA ?!?

[BENTEN, TALKING BEHIND THE GLASS] LAMU', HURRY: COME OUT OF THERE !!!
[Lamù, blinking again her large eyes] S.. sorry ?!? Why ?!?

[BENTEN, SAME SITUATION] IN YOUR ROOM THERE'S AN ABNORMAL LEVEL OF RADIATIONS !! COME OUT !! HURRY !![/size]

Lamù involontarily put an hand on the pillow....

... AND ...

[LAMU', SO SURPRISED] D.. DARLING, WHERE IT COMES FROM THIS... THIS PEEBLE ?!?

ATARU AGAIN FELT THE BLOOD FREEZE IN HIS VEINS !!

HE WELL KNEW THAT HAD COLLECTED THEM IN HIROSHIMA, FEW MOMENT AFTER THE EXPLOSION OF THE ATOMIC BOMB !!![/url]
[/b]

Then took a look again on his friends...

... AND HAD THE IMPRESSION THAT OYUKI WAS HIDING HER MOUTH TO NOT SHOW HER SHARP TEETH !![/size]

SUDDENLY...

... A BLACK CROW TAPPED ON THE GLASS OF THE WINDOW OF THE ROOM (and then flew away, disappearing misteriously).

It was so fogged...

... AND ...

... FOR A WHILE APPEARED THE FACE OF NUSUTH !![/size]

[ATARU, LOST IN PANIC] NO ! NO !! YOU CANNOT BE HERE !! YOU CANNOT BE HERE !!




[NUSUTH, SCREAMING WITH WRATH] I will return.... AND I'LL BE MILLIONS !!![/size]



That image disappeared immediatly (and misteriously).

[Benten, still screaming] LAMU', WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR ?!? GET OUT OF THERE !!

When the alien step to reach the door Ataru begun to rattle in a scary way !!

She turned for a moment.

[Lamù, with trembling voice] I... I'll come back soon, darling: I'll come back soon !!
[Ataru, lost in panic] D.. DON'T LEAVE ME, LAMU' !! DON'T LEAVE ME !!
[Lamù, with trembling voice] D.. don't worry, darling: everything will settle for the best !!
[Ataru, same situation] DON'T LEAVE MEEEEEE !!

Seeing this scene, all those who were behind the glass made ??a few steps back with fright.

[Ataru, same situation] MOM, DAD, FRIENDS, D.. DON'T FORSAKE ME: YOU CANNOT UNDERSTAND HOW DEEP ARE THE ABYSS OF DESPAIR !![/size]
« Last Edit: July 15, 2012, 11:23:36 PM by GiovaneDinamitardo »

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Re: THE 7th HALLUCINATION
« Reply #19 on: June 12, 2011, 01:43:07 PM »
fantastic !! ^^
Italy is my nation... english isn't my language.... sorry ^^

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Re: THE 7th HALLUCINATION
« Reply #20 on: June 14, 2011, 04:10:13 PM »
I WAS RIGHT: the crow has played a key role from the beginning of this story!

However we've to expect that Nusuth reappears in future stories?

By the way, cousin: I see that you enjoyed playing with quotes  :*)  :*)

 

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