Topic: LAMU' DIES

[GiovaneDinamitardo]

Behold in how I imagined the death of Lamù: the final curtain falls on her like a shadow and her soul stands out the flight.

obviously this is still a draft




A question: do you think I should add the "sound of the fly" or would be an unnecessary burden of the scene?

Any other suggest is welcome  :D

[UruseiNeo]

Looks fine without the fly

[ferrango]

tell me you're not going to use it in you story. Aren't you, right?

[UruseiNeo]

of course, why wouldn't he?

[ferrango]

don't know. it's just, he's gonna kill our little Lum :D.
Now the need to know what will happen will burn me until he releases the next chapter.

[UruseiNeo]

he's not necessarily killing it, I'd say its more for dramatic effect.

And this isnt a whole chapter so who knows when the chapter its in might get released. It could occur at the end of the chapter in which case u need to wait for the one AFTER THAT to come out

[GiovaneDinamitardo]

this situation is ESSENTIAL for the 19th chapter and is not a dream: Lamù is really gona die !!!

But "someone" won't agree at all and....  an old "prophecy" will come true

[SonicDaMan]

an old "prophecy" will come true

Lamu = Jesus ?

[GiovaneDinamitardo]

not at all, I've just found a wonderful <<back door>> on the tale of R.T. 

[cata]

I already got fooled once (And There Were None reference)! It brought me to tears, litteraly!