Author Topic: My Original Character - Hiten (Read 7523 times)

UruseiNeo · « **on:** April 24, 2009, 07:54:23 PM »

This is my Original Character, Hiten, who I finally found someone to draw for me

My friend gets credit for drawing the body, I drew the head. I have two colored versions:

Pencil Crayon Colored Hiten

Computer Colored Hiten

Hiten is based a little bit off Urusei Yatsura. He is an Oni, as you can see from the horns, but I made his horns white. I gave him tiger striped armor and he can fly + breath fire like Ten.

Outside of Urusei Yatsura, he knows black magical and many elemental magic spells (specifically fire elemental spells which are amplified by his fire breathing skills). Unlike in UY, he loses his powers during the moon phase in which he was born under.

cata · « **Reply #1 on:** April 24, 2009, 08:48:59 PM »

Pretty cool. I prefer the "original" version.

UruseiNeo · « **Reply #2 on:** April 24, 2009, 08:57:51 PM »

"original"? They're both "original," the only difference is how they were coloured but they both came from the same picture.

I think I like the second one better cause it's stronger and I like the sleeveless look better.

cata · « **Reply #3 on:** April 25, 2009, 10:28:23 AM »

I put these " " on original. -.-'

I would make the sword white, and I wouldn't put too much red in his outfit. I would put red of course but to me it looks weird that the boots and pants are both red. Maybe it's just me lol.

UruseiNeo · « **Reply #4 on:** April 25, 2009, 04:52:42 PM »

I thought there might be too much red too.

When u say the sword should be white, do you mean the hilt or the sheathe?

Tassadarh · « **Reply #5 on:** April 25, 2009, 08:03:34 PM »

Humm not bad... but cata is right, too much red... how about striped boots instead of the red ones?
and just some more advices...
the belt should be a bit more complex... or just a little bigger, the sword is too tiny for an anime style character, usually the swords in the anime design are very huge but I never liked those huge swords, just make it a little bigger.
OH one more thing, the ear: oni has pointed ear

If you do those little changes I the character should be ok

UruseiNeo · « **Reply #6 on:** April 25, 2009, 09:07:29 PM »

I didn't wanna strip the boots cause I thought I already had enough tiger stripped stuff. I'll probably change it to brown.

I don't like things too complex so I wanted the belt to be simple.

The sword actually has no blade 0.0 It actually emits fire so the size isn't that important.

I completely forgot the pointy ears XD

Tassadarh · « **Reply #7 on:** April 25, 2009, 09:29:22 PM »

Quote from: UruseiNeo on April 25, 2009, 09:07:29 PM

I didn't wanna strip the boots cause I thought I already had enough tiger stripped stuff. I'll probably change it to brown.

I don't like things too complex so I wanted the belt to be simple.

The sword actually has no blade 0.0 It actually emits fire so the size isn't that important.

I completely forgot the pointy ears XD

Humm how about changing the colour of the paints and keep the boots' colour? There is too much red in a single part of the body, try to find another colour

About the belt it's ok, it's just a famous cliché that the belt of a superhero or stuff like that should be big or carrying bombs, rope, heads, dead chicken or things like that

About the sword... lol I thought it was inside a strange grey coloured scabbard

, I suggest you to make it look like a lava sword, like that: http://files.turbosquid.com/Preview/Content_2008_01_14__19_47_48/lava%20sword.jpg14059e7e-57b3-42ea-8558-fa570a8fa086Large.jpg
But all those particulars aren't very important, the character is already good, just.. make the ear pointy asd

UruseiNeo · « **Reply #8 on:** April 25, 2009, 10:01:02 PM »

I'll make the boots classic brown.

The E-Swords have already been decided, can't change those (they are important to the story)

This is the Sword of Jaen: http://s174.photobucket.com/albums/w102/Liake/Hyrulian%20Heroes/?action=view&current=Hellfire.flv&newest=1

Tassadarh · « **Reply #9 on:** April 25, 2009, 10:09:30 PM »

Quote from: UruseiNeo on April 25, 2009, 10:01:02 PM

I'll make the boots classic brown.

The E-Swords have already been decided, can't change those (they are important to the story)

This is the Sword of Jaen: http://s174.photobucket.com/albums/w102/Liake/Hyrulian%20Heroes/?action=view&current=Hellfire.flv&newest=1

oh ok ok now I understand ^^

UruseiNeo · « **Reply #10 on:** April 25, 2009, 10:11:28 PM »

I made a similar video for the E-Swords of Light, Shadow, and Wind but I didn't upload them. I like the wind one best ^_^

Tassadarh · « **Reply #11 on:** April 25, 2009, 10:14:28 PM »

Since I'm new here... will you be so kind to explain me why did you draw this character?
It's just for fun or there's a different reason? are you preparing a fan made story?

UruseiNeo · « **Reply #12 on:** April 25, 2009, 10:18:31 PM »

It is for a story that is currently in development.

But it involves more than just me. It is taking place on a forum at fanfiction.net

Tassadarh · « **Reply #13 on:** April 25, 2009, 10:20:08 PM »

Quote from: UruseiNeo on April 25, 2009, 10:18:31 PM

It is for a story that is currently in development.

But it involves more than just me. It is taking place on a forum at fanfiction.net

humm, thanks now I understand clearly ^^

cata · « **Reply #14 on:** April 27, 2009, 10:27:37 PM »

If it's a fire sword then forget about what I said and I agree with Tassadarh (can I call you Tass? )

about the sword thing (make it bigger).

I prefer black boots.

UruseiNeo · « **Reply #15 on:** April 27, 2009, 10:36:06 PM »

Honestly I think it should be bigger too. But I didn't draw that part XD

doesn't matter, it's just a first try and I already made a new one myself totaling 6/9 of the main characters.

Tassadarh · « **Reply #16 on:** April 27, 2009, 10:47:57 PM »

Quote from: cata on April 27, 2009, 10:27:37 PM

can I call you Tass?

Yep

cata · « **Reply #17 on:** April 30, 2009, 11:52:47 PM »

Thank you, it's a lot easier you know?

Tassadarh · « **Reply #18 on:** May 01, 2009, 12:00:44 AM »

Quote from: cata on April 30, 2009, 11:52:47 PM

Thank you, it's a lot easier you know?

I know, but I think you don't know where the name "Tassadar" came from right? (I add an h at the end just as a personal signiature lol)

cata · « **Reply #19 on:** May 02, 2009, 12:23:21 AM »

No I don't. Well I didn't until I googled it. Anyways, Tass is easier to type than Tassadar(h). =)

Tassadarh · « **Reply #20 on:** May 02, 2009, 12:41:35 AM »

Quote from: cata on May 02, 2009, 12:23:21 AM

No I don't. Well I didn't until I googled it. Anyways, Tass is easier to type than Tassadar(h). =)

Sure sure ^^
It's that Tassadar was my "first" hero on computer games... lol.. sweet memories... playing starcraft when I was a child ahhh... sweet memories

cata · « **Reply #21 on:** May 04, 2009, 11:38:56 PM »

My first hero(ine) was Sailor Moon! xD
Oh wait that's anime...! xD

On computer games... that's hard, I can't think of any right now.
I remember that I loved to play Pokemon gameboy games and Sonic on Dreamcast but I didn't consider any of the characters as heroes.

Tassadarh · « **Reply #22 on:** May 04, 2009, 11:53:28 PM »

Quote from: cata on May 04, 2009, 11:38:56 PM

My first hero(ine) was Sailor Moon! xD
Oh wait that's anime...! xD

On computer games... that's hard, I can't think of any right now.
I remember that I loved to play Pokemon gameboy games and Sonic on Dreamcast but I didn't consider any of the characters as heroes.

Here's my hero Lol
www.starcraft.wikia.com/wiki/Tassadar
I played sony when it came on the pc for a little bit... but I never liked that much those sega games.
About the pokemon.. LOOL I spent month playing at pokemon red XD go Charmender! lol (my first gameboy game ever)

cata · « **Reply #23 on:** May 05, 2009, 09:48:09 PM »

My first Pokemon game was Pokemon Yellow but I played Blue and Red before buying my own Pokemon game. I played every single pokemon game there is for portable console.

Sometimes, when I'm very bored and no internet, no computer and no TV and no friends around I just play Pokemon Yellow again (I lost my other games x_X)

Tassadarh · « **Reply #24 on:** May 05, 2009, 09:54:50 PM »

Quote from: cata on May 05, 2009, 09:48:09 PM

My first Pokemon game was Pokemon Yellow but I played Blue and Red before buying my own Pokemon game. I played every single pokemon game there is for portable console.

Sometimes, when I'm very bored and no internet, no computer and no TV and no friends around I just play Pokemon Yellow again (I lost my other games x_X)

I have pokemon yellow too (even more pokemon games

), but I never "finished" them... in pokemon yellow (for exemple) i have 150 pokemon, with mew included!... the only thing that I missed was the last evolution of that dragon thing... humm what was the name? dragonite or something like that..
After pokemon yellow (when they added more and more pokemon) I said "oh god... 100 more pokemon?... ok let's stop playing to "chath 'em all" and just play 4fun O_o
I wonder if I still have that pokemon game somewhere in my house...

But.. wait. Did you just said that you still play pokemon yellow?.... girl, you need to find a hobby or an updated version of a pokemon game lol

UruseiNeo · « **Reply #25 on:** May 05, 2009, 10:02:46 PM »

You can't tell her to get a hobby, she just said that when she has no TV, internet, friends, etc. she goes to the game. ie her hobby(s) are unavailable in this situation.

Also, you don't really need to quote a post if ur replying to the last post of the topic.

You quote if your replying to a more previous post.

Tassadarh · « **Reply #26 on:** May 05, 2009, 10:08:55 PM »

I was just jokeing, sometime I still play doom 2 when I have nothing to do

I'm too get used to quote, sometimes when I'm posting more people answer (I'm talking about other forums I vist) but I've noticed that this forum has a "new post warning" and BTW... I don't think it's a very bad thing... If that excessive quoting bothers you, I'm sorry I didn't mean to bother you, I'll be more carefull the next time

UruseiNeo · « **Reply #27 on:** May 05, 2009, 11:21:56 PM »

Doesn't really bother me, I actually didn't notice until now.

Kroptik · « **Reply #28 on:** May 06, 2009, 12:50:56 AM »

Lol, I still have all my game boy pokemon games, from red/blue to ruby. I also have emulators to play the other ones.

And about outdated hobbies...
This is a forum dedicated to UY, that ended in 1986...
That's way more outdated then pokemon, and look at all we still do around here. XD

Tassadarh · « **Reply #29 on:** May 06, 2009, 01:03:51 AM »

asd... I've found my pokemon's games for game boy, I didn't remeber I have so much games.
I'm like you kroptik, i have from Red to ruby ^^

cata · « **Reply #30 on:** May 06, 2009, 10:57:50 AM »

I "have" from Blue to Pearl. (Don't you just love emulators?) xD
I also played Pokemon Dash and Pokemon Trozei which aren't good games.
I love Pokemon Ranger (1 and 2) and Pokemon Mystery Dungeon (1 and 2).

Tassadarh · « **Reply #31 on:** May 06, 2009, 08:54:44 PM »

Lol... Pokemon dash?.. What is that lol?

Kroptik · « **Reply #32 on:** May 07, 2009, 02:38:52 AM »

It's a pokemon game for the DS, never played it myself though...

Anyone played the N64 games?
Stadium, Stadium 2, Snap and Puzzle League...

I still play them once in a while on an emulator, and I still own my Nintendo64 and all my games. xD

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