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The unlucky flower
« on: September 16, 2008, 09:59:29 PM »
(this story is based in one dream i had today...)

The unlucky flower

another school day at tomobiki, but among all the regular weirdness in that school, today they had one very different assignment...
To bring one special flower for their science class.

Lum and Ataru in their way to school stop by one flower seller who sells them two flowers.
Lum is distracted, playing with some cute birds around them, and Ataru is buying the flowers, listening to the male seller explanations.


Seller: Those flowers are special they can bring luck or don't... you place the seed like you do for regular flowers, but there's one special ingredient... they will rise up if you add pharmaceutical alcohol to it, but don't place big quantities...

Ataru: ok old man, thanks.

Ataru is very quiet for today, but his mind was racing, trying to play a trick at Lum 
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Re: The unlucky flower
« Reply #1 on: September 17, 2008, 03:48:11 AM »
it from your eyes view?
The only person Lum love is Ataru.
Only thing i can do is watch over her from darkness.

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Re: The unlucky flower
« Reply #2 on: September 17, 2008, 04:58:16 AM »
yes, indeed i was also one character too, but since i don't belong to the uy original cast, i'll just be narrating, and my actions, well, gonna do one small workaround. :)
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Re: The unlucky flower
« Reply #3 on: September 17, 2008, 02:30:39 PM »
if the story from one UY original character view, how do you think of it?
The only person Lum love is Ataru.
Only thing i can do is watch over her from darkness.

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Re: The unlucky flower
« Reply #4 on: September 19, 2008, 03:47:19 AM »
they head themselves to the school.
Besides Ataru being unusually quiet, at least not trying to chase all the girls, Lum looks absent from the world, looking so vague in her eyes


Ataru: Hey Lum, what's with you today? You are so quiet...

Lum: Oh it's nothing... Darling, why the seeds?

Ataru: so, you didn't liostened me talking to the man?

Lum: no... I was away.

Ataru: don't worry about that.

trying to make one gentle face, but as long Lum look in the sky, ataru does one Evil grin.

They are in the class, Osen Mark was scheduled to do the nature lesson. The school director couldn't find any teacher able for this insane class, so, the poor Osen was choosen once more...
Still, he isn't in the class.

Ataru pops few drops in his seed, and one blue flower rises. Perm, chibi and Megane start fussing around him, stealing his flower and passing it hand by hand. Finally ataru recovers it, no damage done. He looks out the window and see Mark Osen running behind one kid.

Mendo looks at the scene, then looks at Lum's empty vase with the seeds only. Strangely, he don't attack his eternal foe, but try to talk to Lum.


Mendou: Lum, is everything...

Ataru: (yelling out loud) OSEN'S IN PURSUIT!

the class get looking at the window and see Osen running like crazy.
Ataru and Perm are the first ones to arrive at the local. All the girls still in the class, lum included


Perm: Osen, what happened? (running behind the teacher)

Osen: Help me grab that creep, he stole my manuals! (replying bitterly, but his legs are starting to faint due his advantage weigh and lack of exercise)

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Re: The unlucky flower
« Reply #5 on: September 24, 2008, 10:22:19 PM »
running from the school gardens, until the nursery, jumping from trees and 'flying' trough windows, they ended up in the noisy troublesome classroom

>>>POW, ZIIING!<<<

ataru and mendo stopped the kid, who was only the lil bratty ten.
but, the knocked out ten, hit Ryuu, who kicked it, making him hit Lum flower, sending it flying from the table to the ground.
stormtroopers trying to help, ended up causing more confusion, while the flower kept on bouncing, until it shatters next to shinobu


Lum: (starting to cry) that, that flower was darling who bought for me, WAAAAAAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! (sobbing out loud)

Ryuu: Lum-chan i am so sorry, i...i... please, forgive me.

the class is now in silence, osen a bit wounded from the pursuit is with a sad look, and it that moment, ataru peep out, and throw a lot of pharmaceutical alcohol in the flower, making it rise...

rising suddenly, in orange, yellow green and black stripes, her roots cracking the floor, the roof getting destroyed, it's the panic in the class.

that wasn't exactly the trick ataru wanted to play, and grad lum in the hand, trying to escape from there, but instead, receives a great zapp from the sad lum who leaves the building still crying.

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