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Urusei Yatsura - RPG, Movies, Episodes & Stories => RPG Storylines & FanFiction => Topic started by: Razor on April 17, 2005, 10:50:58 AM

Title: Darling
Post by: Razor on April 17, 2005, 10:50:58 AM
Edit: Yeah I just read over it, it's 5am... I'm sorry it sucks @_@ must.. delete... bah, will do it tomorrow, time for sleep.



Darling

Epilogue

The life of a UY fan is that of disappointment in this realm, for while storylines bloom all around him abundant in information and followings, his (or her) only recourse is to stumble upon the chance few pieces of merchandise scattered about the most unlikely of places. For most otaku, the lingering memory of Urusei Yatsura remains quietly as it is crowded with newer and less substantial stories, but for the serious fan, the main fleeting joys exist in the hunt for that nostalgic similarity separated by 20 years of obscurity. It was on one such hunt that my story begins...

I had taken only three steps from the local comic shop, taking pride in the discovery of a few figures, and videos. They were the last available in the store, and I had spent my remaining balance on them. It was soon becoming apparent that my diet would consist wholly of ramen and cup noodles. The thought of conserving my money for a more nutritional diet crossed my mind before I became direct witness to an explosion, and was forced into the outer brick wall of the comic shop by the weight of another body. It was a reflex to grip hold of the projectile person, but a second reflex, my 'otaku instinct' directed me to hold my recent purchases directly in front to reduce if not prevent their damages. The impact left me unconscious for a short while, but my instinct managed to force my arm elevated in the air for protection of my treasure.

Moments later amidst the clouds of dust, I opened my eyes to see the store owner leaning over me speaking with someone not within my direct line of sight. "He's yours then? All right, take good care of him, I'll call the police and see to that explosion. Take care son, your girlfriend'll nurse you back to health. Ah, and if it possible for you to change the mind of a woman," he whispered into my ear, "get her to wear some clothes." The store manager left me to my delirium, and my stranger. Before I closed my eyes for one more lapse, I heard a fading word:

"Dar-ling?"

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The ceiling fan of my room greeted my view, in addition to a cold wet cloth cooling my forhead when I once more came to attention. It was lifted off and replaced with a new towel, after which, the hand holding it drifted away from its task to trace my cheek lightly with the top of its forefinger. The sensation was like running ones finger across a silken pillow that possessed an electrical charge causing the skin to tingle and skip along the surface. Although unfamiliar, it was strangely comforting. I wanted to leave my eyes closed and let the hand continue to drift along whatever course it desired, but my curiosity could not see fit to let alone paradise, and live on in ignorant bliss. With regret, my eyes were opened, enabling me to search above for a face, and one that stilled my breath appeared. My figures and tapes were all reduced to meaningless plastic and images by one meeting of our eyes. No longer did any substitution or crutch for dreams need to exist further on, for I saw her...

Title: Re: Darling
Post by: Kroptik on October 25, 2006, 03:27:53 PM
Someone needs to contine this...

It's a pretty good start ;D
Title: Re: Darling
Post by: Cosmic King on October 25, 2006, 05:43:13 PM
we hav 2 ask Razor,he is da author,after all
Title: Re: Darling
Post by: Forgotten_Lum on October 25, 2006, 06:56:13 PM
i'm betting he no longer logs on the forum
Title: Re: Darling
Post by: Kroptik on October 25, 2006, 07:04:02 PM
I saw that...
That's why I said SOMEONE had to do it...
Title: Re: Darling
Post by: Cosmic King on October 25, 2006, 08:54:27 PM
ok,lets see if Falling Star can show us the fruits of his work been him da most intellectual lumaholic here
Title: Re: Darling
Post by: FallinG_StaR on October 26, 2006, 12:37:15 AM
LoL... I didn't even know about this post LoL
The most intellectual?!?!?!?  :& 8)7


Btw, after reading the text it reminded me of those erotic pocket books that they sell in the Airport LoL... but its very well done
Title: Re: Darling
Post by: Lum-chan on October 26, 2006, 01:22:45 AM
Please do add to the story Razor started. It just might be the start of something beautiful as this has been done before on this forum way back in 1998 (somewhere around that year).

* Lum-chan preys for a nice new fanfic...
Title: Re: Darling
Post by: Cosmic King on October 26, 2006, 02:53:21 AM
your prayers will be heard,lum-chan,dont you doubt it
Title: Re: Darling
Post by: Cosmic King on October 26, 2006, 02:54:36 AM
LoL... I didn't even know about this post LoL
The most intellectual?!?!?!?  :& 8)7


Btw, after reading the text it reminded me of those erotic pocket books that they sell in the Airport LoL... but its very well done

Indeed u r da intellectual

do they really sell those things?

my god,what a wordeful planet

nah,just kidding
Title: Re: Darling
Post by: FallinG_StaR on October 26, 2006, 07:39:10 AM
Yeah, they do, of course I don't buy those  :& :@ But its only text no pictures in it.

Lets see if we can pick up where Razor left... does anyone knows any good love storys??? Boy meets girl...love at first sigth...
That way we can get some ideas for the continuation... probably asking Razor to finish it would be a good idea to LoL or probably his idea was to let us finish it...
Title: Re: Darling
Post by: Forgotten_Lum on October 26, 2006, 03:17:37 PM
i just read through the story again and i think i may want to continue it, but it might take a while and if Razor would like to continue wouldnt mind, if not give me any ideas anyone or suggestions, should i make it similar to UY, i was thinking more of a Chobits
Title: Re: Darling
Post by: Kroptik on October 26, 2006, 03:58:55 PM
The problem with Razor finishing the story is that he hasn't been on for months.
My vote goes to one of you guys finishing it. If Razor does come back he can make a different one from yours. We would have 2 or more stories then ;D
Title: Re: Darling
Post by: Forgotten_Lum on October 26, 2006, 04:01:32 PM
very well, but it might take while and of coarse any ideas would be help, ill try to keep the story updated as i go
Title: Re: Darling
Post by: Cosmic King on October 26, 2006, 05:36:44 PM
what matter is da quality of yer writing,take yer time
Title: Re: Darling
Post by: Forgotten_Lum on October 26, 2006, 06:27:18 PM
hey its going to be awhile just for me to sort out my ideas, but atleast i'll have lots of time in class, never do anything anyway
Title: Re: Darling
Post by: Cosmic King on October 29, 2006, 06:27:21 PM
ok,we will leave u 2 do da honors
Title: Re: Darling
Post by: Forgotten_Lum on October 29, 2006, 09:39:13 PM
hey maybe i could use this as an english class project
Title: Re: Darling
Post by: FallinG_StaR on October 30, 2006, 01:58:02 AM
LoL maybe thats a good idea
Title: Re: Darling
Post by: Forgotten_Lum on May 22, 2008, 11:23:46 PM
well it certainly has been awhile since i thought of this topic (in fact i completely forgot about hehe). but by some coincidence i found my old notebook (combination of moving and changing courses) and found the bit i wrote as a continuation. Tell me what you think and I may continue, but my Oh! My Goddess fanfic is going to take priority over this.

Chapter 2: A Bad Morning

Throughout the day I was in and out of conciousness, each time I awoke it was to the sight of her. Eventually I managed to stay awake, but she was no longer by my side. Was it all a dream or reality. I did not know. I just lay there there, not wanting to move. Constantly think if it was just a dream and if it wasn't, how would my life change.

I had been laying there for hours, or at least that's what it felt like to me, before I heard the doorbell. I attempted to sit up but my whole body hurt, so I just gave up and hoped the person would go away. The doorbel rang again and again. "Oh please go away and leave me to my dream" I mutter quietly. No such luck. The ringing turned to banging and a familiar voice shouting. I jumped to my feet, completely forgetting the pain, threw on some clothes and ran to the door. I click of the lock, a twist of the handle and a swing of the door, then I was slammed into the adjacent to the door.

There in my arms was not the the girl from my dream, but another I am glad to see, my girlfriend, Shino Bushamon, but I like to call her Shinobu. One reason for this is because it a combination of her first and last name, it also is from my favorite anime series and lastly she has to many friends called Shino, so its Shinobu for me and me alone.

We stood there for some moments, my back firmly pressed against the wall, her face held firmly against my chest. The pain was quickly returning and I didn't know how long I could last before I passed out. "Um Shinobu" I managed to get out "Your hurting me". She immediately jumped back, clasping her hands to her mouth, her eyes swelling up with tears. "I'm so sorry" she whispered through her hands. " Don't worry about it, it isn't your fau" that was as much as I was able to get out before the dizziness took over, then the darkness.

I awoke for the second time that day, at least I think it was the same day, and was in my bed again. I turned my head to look out the window, it must have been late because all i saw was the pitch black of night, barely being aluminated by an almost full moon. I didn't bother to get up, fearing that I would collapse again. I just lay there, thinking about my life. Who was I? Where am I? And what is a dream or reality?

I guess I can answer some of my own question. It at least allow me to get back to sleep. My name is Atari Moro, age 20, currently in second year at Sanna College for Advance Computing. I live off campus in an old, rundown building, but I would never tell that to my girlfriend or her father. My girlfriend, Shino Bushamon or Shinobu, lives with her father just down the street and her father owns this house. He used to rent this house out to make a secondary income but recently he has just been using as storage, so Shinobu managed to convince her father to let me stay here for free. I first met Shinobu two, no three years ago. My eyes shot open, I started sweating, I knew I had completely forgotten something. It was our aniversary in a couple weeks, I need to get her a present. I shot straight up, but quickly became dizzy and fell back down. I'll take care of that later and with that I fell asleep.

I awoke the next morning to the smell of bacon and voices in the house. I live alone so who could that be. I managed to stumble out of bed and down the hall to the kitchen, only to find Shinobu infront of the stove and Mr. Sakuran Bou, or as everyone I know likes to call him Mr. Cherry, sitting at the table. Mr. Cherry is the anime store owner, where the explosion occured, and a good friend of mine. Upon entering the kitchen I was greeted with the cheerful face of Mr. Cherry and the focused face of Shinobu. "Sit down and wait for breakfast" demanded Shinobu. I quickly sat down. One thing I've learned is not disturb or comment on her cooking. It tends to be dangerous and not good for our relationship. There was this one time in Home Ec., back in high School, where someone insulted her cooking before it was done and she nearly destroyed the school. The school declared it a gas leak, but me and most of her friends know the truth. Last I heard they were still trying to fix the damage.

My nervousness soon turn to confusion. Why was Shinobu making breakfast and why was Mr. Cherry here? But the biggest question was why did Shinobu give me this unpleasant feeling. I've watched her cook before, but the tone of her voice, was just scary. I felt it was best she spoke first so I layed my head down and waited for breakfast. Whatever peace-of-mind I had left soon disappear as a hand rested on his head and a single spoken word "Darling". I slowly lifted my head to see the face to that voice, but all I saw was an open hand coming at my face. I didn't have enough time to react so I ended up on the floor looking at my girlfriend storming out of the kitchen and hearing the front door slam shut. I only had one thought go through my mind, 'Why my?"
Title: Re: Darling
Post by: Kroptik on May 25, 2008, 03:54:00 AM
Nice way to introduce the charaters, and a good "imitation" of the real UY (Ataru was with Shinobu at the beginning, wasn't she? :P)
Anyway, you're doing great, so keep it up.

By the way, what's that about an AMG fanfic? Link please. ;D
Title: Re: Darling
Post by: Forgotten_Lum on May 25, 2008, 06:31:36 AM
here's my AMG Fanfic for ya, unfortunately i'm stuck, i know what i want to do with the story but i don't know how to make the transition, i hope to at least continue by june

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4241931/1/Oh_My_Power (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4241931/1/Oh_My_Power)
Title: Re: Darling
Post by: Jataru on May 27, 2008, 12:08:39 AM
Keep doing a good job Forgotten Lum.
Title: Re: Darling
Post by: Cosmic King on May 28, 2008, 05:05:29 PM
Wryyyyy,finally a continuation of the Darling fanfic,does this mean that the darling fic is one that can be continued by anyone?
Title: Re: Darling
Post by: Kroptik on May 28, 2008, 07:44:14 PM
Since Forgotten was the one that picked it up, I guess the fic is now his (until Razor comes back, at least).

Unless he says it's OK, but for a multi-writter fic we have the DM already. :P
Title: Re: Darling
Post by: DarkDevil on May 28, 2008, 07:59:19 PM
Kill them all!
Title: Re: Darling
Post by: Forgotten_Lum on May 29, 2008, 05:57:11 AM
what is the point in typing that dark

anyway, i wouldn't mind other people putting in there talent, in fact i encourage it, but I ask that you email your part so i can make it fit and remove spam
Title: Re: Darling
Post by: Akazukin on June 01, 2008, 08:16:25 PM
Kill them all!
Is it me or is dark getting more... darker? O.o
Title: Re: Darling
Post by: SandStorm on June 02, 2008, 01:21:10 AM
it's his usual way to be, just ignore him.
Title: Re: Darling
Post by: Surudoi on June 04, 2008, 04:36:21 AM
just read every other post of it then you get rid of a lot of the pointless stuff
Title: Re: Darling
Post by: FallinG_StaR on June 09, 2008, 04:42:01 AM
Hmm... Lets make this short and simple...
1st - Forgotten you should continue this fiction... After 2 years I think Razor isnt coming back... Lets hope he does... someday...
2nd - Your AMG fiction... for what I can see its a bit... OMG confusing... even my mind and your fiction was like the wind XD
Title: Re: Darling
Post by: Forgotten_Lum on June 10, 2008, 05:53:09 AM
ouch i'm hurt...
Title: Re: Darling
Post by: FallinG_StaR on June 12, 2008, 12:51:32 AM
Hurt??? Why? I'm not telling its bad... its just that there's some parts that you go on a loop...
It looks like a Naruto filler episose... XD ... To much talk and no action... =P
Title: Re: Darling
Post by: Forgotten_Lum on June 16, 2008, 04:55:11 PM
well i guess it is a bit, but don't worry, plot twists to come